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I really thought this was going to be an orgy.
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What if Lydia is vegan and doesn't like sausages? What if she likes a girl?
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Chapter 2: False stability
Kileoli commented on Kileoli's story chapter in Chapter 2: False stability
I somehow managed to break the whole thing and publish two chapters at once 🙃 -
The house began to feel different in the mornings once Rick started waking before noon, though the change was gradual enough that it revealed itself more through small adjustments than any deliberate decision. The room had the faint clarity of a place that had been aired out overnight, as if a window somewhere had been opened and closed again without his noticing. The light that reached his desk was no longer the dim blue reflection of the monitor left running through the night but the narrow ba
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So, a happy ending with a baby and the Hardings question for the next generation is solved too. Was it intentional that Elias is still Sawyer in two sentences?
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Chapter 7: Milk slices and maps
Kileoli commented on Kileoli's story chapter in Chapter 7: Milk slices and maps
Honestly I keep on wondering how could people in USA allow such politics, but then here's not much better. Still it's good you don't watch that kind of news anymore. It's not healthy. Where are the hugging smilies?! You get one. 🙃 -
Chapter 7: Milk slices and maps
Kileoli commented on Kileoli's story chapter in Chapter 7: Milk slices and maps
Whoopie pies look like chocolate Macarons. Milchschnitte ( milk slices) are very popular here and since they have the word "milk" kids think they are healthy 😂 And I'm glad that many other parents over the world suffer from the same jogurt smarties problem. It's like the same feeling when you're out and a kid throws a tantrum and every one is looking at the parent(s) evaluating their reaction and you're like, thank holy bunnies, it's not my kid. This is the exact meaning of Schadenfreude ( malicious glee was the closest translation I found). These Jogurts are damn expensive just for having the sweets presented next to them and produce too much plastic waste. And again another favorite topic. I should write it as one of Liam's favorite arguments with kids for not needing the car to go shopping or not buying all the stupid small plastic toys. -
Chapter 7: Milk slices and maps
Kileoli commented on Kileoli's story chapter in Chapter 7: Milk slices and maps
Thought I could change the mood a bit. Thing is I don't like others feeling down when I feel shitty -
Chapter 7: Milk slices and maps
Kileoli commented on Kileoli's story chapter in Chapter 7: Milk slices and maps
The Jogurt Are they really called milk slices? -
Chapter 7: Milk slices and maps
Kileoli commented on Kileoli's story chapter in Chapter 7: Milk slices and maps
I want to thank you guys too for reading, it motivates me to keep on writing. When I first started I had no intention of getting this far, but then I always wanted to write our story for the girls, I even started making audios ( they were too dark I ended up crying every time I heard it so they don't exist anymore) and a diary in my language, but reallized nobody will read it since I sorta messed up the chance to teach them the language. And I thought I was subtle to divide the tension on both😅 Reality check: 1.it didn't end like that. I really fell asleep, then got up at 1 am and couldn't sleep so I thought I could finish the 5 open chapters I have and ended up writing this. Results: at 5 am I was so tired and still bitchy. 2. Things are kept mild in the story, I was actually very mean and I did hurt R so much he stopped talking to me at some point. I got a hug from him the following day after lecturing me I should focus on my paper and dissertation rather than things I can't change, and now he simply takes away my phone when he catches me reading the news. I got a few other things too which helped a bit but in the end I cannot shut up my brain this time, it's just broken. Fun fact: writing malicious glee makes the most fun because I don't have to think of a plot, or put things in an order that makes things interesting or logical however some parts are really my fantasy ( the double chapter) or a sum of events over a longer time ( parameter study). I decided to work from home today because I don't trust myself driving at the moment and it takes forever to use public transportation ( ref.the snow chapter), I either finish the chapters from designing the escape or I really have to evaluate my experiments. Sorry, im totally in rambling mode. Might be because I'm avoiding people in the real world. Now I shut up -
Chapter 7: Milk slices and maps
Kileoli commented on Kileoli's story chapter in Chapter 7: Milk slices and maps
@CincyKris I've been trying to write you an answer for the last 30 minutes ( in my head)& now 2 hours later because someone said I should sleep at 3 am. -
Chapter 7 - The Letter
Kileoli commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 7 - The Letter
Gray hair is also a fixable problem. For me is the other way round. I can pretty much recognize even people that I only met as kids, but I don't remember names, just faces and from where I might know them. But if it's the case unless Andrew hasn't recognized Marcus, it would be very mean. But then wasn't it that the bullies themselves were the most coward people ( probably with a crush on the person)? -
Oh no. Run Lydia run! No more sausages please!
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That's cheating, Christopher!!! Im taking Gerald hostage!
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That was a nice ending and a clever solution from Ollie. But what happened to the third phase? The KISS!?
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A game of poker to save a land, that was really brave and stupid. I know poker is not for me. Whenever I play it, I end up naked😅 I guess asking for weddings is too much considering the time, but do we get some explosions at least? Or maybe Henry can build some carriage accompanied by Jack and all the boys starting their first pride
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Oh no. Orel can make you tea, too. Get well soon, Maverickville needs you.
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Good morning, You were late with posting and I was thinking to find a way to wake you up. Good that you managed yourself. 😁
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Is Gerald Jack's friend or your duck's lunch? Just asking to make myself ready for the final phase. Are there gay isopods too?
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I saw a label maker at work yesterday and I thought I wanted to print labels. Since I discovered the danger and Co pictogram labels at work and put them on every single bottle containing my black slurry, I am sure I have earned myself a label maker. I hope Aiden doesn't start labeling Orel's Isopods.
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Chapter 7: Milk slices and maps
Kileoli commented on Kileoli's story chapter in Chapter 7: Milk slices and maps
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You have a good point with being too young and too old. The other aspect is how people die, expected or unexpected. I was 14 when my father died, I still have very strange memories of our time together although I have forgotten most of the things, his death I haven't forgotten, I still remember how much I hated myself to keep a distant from him during his last week. Maybe it was my fear that he could see through me and see I was different, but then I think he probably had accepted me as who I was and who I loved. My sister was 10 and later she said she didn't remember him really. When my grandma died, I simply accepted it as part of life, but then I was 28. Over the years many people have died but it didn't affect me like my father's. Probably because they were not that close or I have learned not to feel. My sister-in-law thinks I'm annoyingly cold, but I don't know. Leonid's life will keep on going darker, so I guess I let his story on a hold until I feel better myself to be able to handle his emotions.
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Ok, I was totally blind. I thought I sorta knew an Axl but I totally forgot the pizza boy. I feel bad for him when Orel tries to write a love story for him and Oliver
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This was so sweet and so different from the massacre in Deed. I have find a Semi-parallel world to work and read and these two are so worth it.
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Chapter 7 - The Letter
Kileoli commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 7 - The Letter
Ok, this was a great twist. Teenagers can be mean, but not recognizing at all after like 4-5 years is a bit weird. Still he looked different and Marcus probably too. So let's wait for the confrontation
