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  1. Kileoli
    That sounds very creative 🤣 and considering the second world war and all the German history, it's not uncommon in South America to have some kind of knowledge of the language or variations of words. But it really fits him to work as a glue, and hopefully we get to see more of his gluing talent on Dennis 😄 https://de.wikipedia.org/wiki/Klebstoff
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    I have nothing against romantic protagonist, they can live happily ever after. :😀
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    That must be the German in me, I read the name Klebber the first time and I was like who name their kid "glue". And then on this chapter you just mentioned it that he should keep the family glued, so yeah, it was funny for me.
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    Lots of Background info and why Klebber is the way he is. But why still BFF? Funny reference at glue and Klebber, I kept on wondering if at some point you'd mention this😁 Maybe it's the way the story is told, I haven't seen the original Netflix thing. I like the characters but I don't feel any connection to them. If your plan was to make it like a documentary, you did a good job.
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    I played a few times with the idea of Rick's father walking on them, but then I thought Rick would have suffered years of celibacy 😄
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    🤣or a successful double fitting of parameters for Liam
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    Lol, that totally makes sense, an engine running smoothly,...purring . But no, that does not make any sense to neither me nor Liam, a purring car can only have an electric engine and in best case, the car itself is stable enough that you can hear almost nothing when it moves under 50kmh. 😄
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    Monday, 15:45 Rick was still drying the saucepan when the front door opened with a force that sent a muted vibration through the hallway wall. He paused, cloth in hand, listening to the echo settle. That kind of entrance usually meant something had gone wrong. Or may be not this time. Liam appeared in the doorway carrying the outside air with him, the cold clinging faintly to his coat and hair, but the energy in his face had little to do with winter. His eyes were too bright, too focus
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    Why does it sound so stupid not admitting their love and end their suffering?! Poor Andrew.
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    Nicely said and disturbingly true, that it needs a very small group to terrorize and destroy something so many people build. At least the group put things back together.
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    The story had been on my mind for a long time. Writing down the plot took forever, and I'm not sure if I got everything historically right. In the end I realized if my imagination is half correct, I really have a good life being where I am. It tried to keep it light but at some point it's going to get very dark, I'm not sure I would feel like finishing it. However, thanks a lot for your comment. It helps to know at least the begining worked.
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    The apartment was too warm for late October. The radiators had begun working properly only the week before, and now they clicked and hissed as if determined to prove their usefulness. Heat gathered near the ceiling and softened the corners of the room. The windows fogged faintly from the inside, blurring the square shapes of the panel buildings across the courtyard. From the ninth floor the world always looked orderly—rows of concrete, identical balconies, windows lit in disciplined grids.
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    An evening, two playing a game of basketball— and the boy coming back alone. What follows is a life shaped by quiet endurance: grief folded inward, desire hidden between careful gestures, love practiced in whispers. Years later, when the possibility of living openly brushes against him like light through a cracked door, he must decide whether it is safer to remain unseen — or braver to be known. Warning: Although the whole plot, jokes, scenes and thoughts are mine, I used a lot of help from AI. I might go through the whole story and rewrite it myself for now my apologies.
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    Rendezvous

    Kileoli commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Rendezvous

    Nice turn of events. So Sean broke up with his girlfriend and wanted to confess something, he also ordered 6 beers. Is he trying to get drunk and confess his secret or is he planning to get Gabriel drunk?🤔
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    Clever Seer

    Kileoli commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Clever Seer

    And now Jack is thinking of biting, he is fast in taking new rolls. The loose noose sound very creepy, so how can Jack save the alpha from his guilt?🤔
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    Chapter 23

    Kileoli commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 23

    So I finally managed to finish the story. Applause I thought the Delorean was red and will make rainbow gas fumes.... The story of Andrew and Will Carter are missing in my mind, that means I have to go through the other stories as well... And a bit of geography lesson, didn't know there was a new Brunswick in Canada too, Germans are everywhere 🤣
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    Thanks. This just happened when I'm left alone with my data and a demanding reviewer who wants to bully me.😆
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    Epilogue

    Kileoli commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Epilogue

    That was a very happy ending. We're gonna miss the boys but maybe we can get more of the wolf and his friends now?!🤔
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    They are really good at communicating, they should even offer pair therapy.
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    Chapter 19

    Kileoli commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 19

    Tell me about it. The systems rotten so deep you can't move them anymore without letting the whole society fall apart. But at least in Tarquin's case, there's still hope that he gets what he deserves, and you'd better keep your promise or I'll take your Delorean away.
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    Rick hadn’t planned to take the day off; the day had simply decided for him to stay, while Liam decided to fight his way to his office. Their daughter had finally fallen asleep listening to her detective story, fever broken, lungs tight from coughing, sprawled across the bed with the theatrical finality of someone who had suffered greatly and expected to be remembered for it like a war hero. Rick checked on her one more time then closed the door with care, stood in the hallway for a moment,
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    Chapter 19

    Kileoli commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 19

    ::sighs:: good point. I still have the 10 mm wrench I used on Ollie with the results to be observed by his future boyfriend. I can use that wrench again but its too small for Tarquin. Can I get a bit violent against your character? Im thinking of using the 50 mm. And I need to make a hole in Tarquin's tyres.... And the hula girls?! Oh no I thought they were inflatable dolls😅
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    Chapter 19

    Kileoli commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 19

    I hope nobody shuffles the cards too long.
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    Chapter 19

    Kileoli commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 19

    I have a few questions, I really didn't get what Tarquin has as backup plan. What is he really planning? What is his selling? I am still not convinced/ not satisfied with the story of Finn and the jail/ crime scene. It has some holes. And I want that T-shirt of Kyle.
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    It helps to have an understanding room mate. The question is if they remain just best friends?
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