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Kileoli

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  1. This is something many people forget that Rick is 4 years younger and at the time just 22. So he had a few things to set for himself clear.
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    Chapter 3

    I am sinking zat is not poẞible. But yea, probably you're right. I had to even google devoiced consonants. At least we read what we write or the other way round 🙃 and there are cool philosophers claiming to say wise things no one understands 😅
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    Chapter 3

    This is really good and demonic. So Taine has a limited time to live again, Tyler has a chance to experience beyond the possible intellect of young people and the demon... he's gonna have a lot of fun. But this part was mean to such a beautiful language "the harsh, guttural consonants of the German language".
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    Chapter 2

    The reasoning why they pretend anyway was good. But in the end it turned into a directed disaster. What will their PDA be? They have already hold hands and kissed so are they going to compare size or exchange socks?
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    Chapter 2

    I wonder is it just dorky or there's more to it? Magical gay portals? Demons in rainbow shorts?
  6. Jamie is a piece of work with his relationships, I often tell him I don't understand how he does it, his brother is more than enough for me. I doubt I'd ever kiss him like that but he gives awesome hugs😁 I just realized I mostly start with something which happened in reality and end up with fantasy in most of the stories. Maybe I should start a quiz which part was true.🤣
  7. That's what I like about malicious glee, I don't have to exactly continue where I left, so I probably won't continue from the Rubicon.😅 That's exactly my fear, I like "the idea" of adding 1-2 people short term to the relationship but whenever R really wanna do something I chicken out and talk him out of it. The honest answer is as messy and strong our relationship is, I don't wanna experiment there. R believes we are too crazy that noone would like to have us as individuals permanently. I don't know, humans are too complicated and at the end of the day, we are like any other family with two kids and the potential to fall apart. Hermine has way too many friends with divorced parents that every time we get too loud in our arguments, she freaks out, cries and begs us to stop.So it stays as a story.
  8. A sexual Rubicon to cross?! Lol, I hope not. I'm not sure Rick/Liam can easily exist as single individuals again. And that was just my hair inspiration ( which went wrong in reality). Liam is 40 so he can't look so young?! As for Rick. there's a family picture at the beginning of the book😄 which strangely looks a lot like us. It still doesn't look close enough that people look and quickly say that's you so I haven't messed up with my prompting that much.
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    Chapter 1

    @Topher Lydonconfessed he was in the train, how high is the chance he is Mr. Ellis?
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    Chapter 1

    No, please no....it takes me weeks to get it out of my head!
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    Prologue

    A seventeen year old does not have an easy life and you gave him the wisdom of a 70 old philosophy teacher, this is a nightmare. Is Charlie going to fall in love with the cyclist, which looks like Michael, too?
  12. I wrote and edited the story at different time intervals, it can be that some parts repeat. Although I tried to delete these inconsistencies, there are still parts. I apologize
  13. This story has a few new characters 1. Julia is the auditor neighbor with the cool e-tron Audi from chapter one which the car failed to purr. She's single and Rick finds her hot but she thinks from the two Liam is cooler, so he got to drive her car. 2 &3. Jamie is the second younger brother of Rick. He does not limit himself to one partner and sees himself as polyamorous. He used to come to family gatherings with a new partner each time so at some point nobody cared to learn the names or the people except Liam, believing even one night stands should be given a chance to introduce themselves. James is at the moment in relationship with Adriano ( the Italian boyfriend, 22 ) and Rose ( the girlfriend, 28). Rose and Adriano live together while Jamie shares his place with a friend and his wife.
  14. The inspiration of hair color
  15. The evening crowd at the new climbing hall had thinned to that quieter hour when movement no longer dissolved immediately into noise, allowing individual sounds to travel through the tall space—the dull thud of a climber dropping onto the mats, the dry brush of chalked fingers across textured holds, the soft murmur of conversation rising and falling beneath the steel rafters overhead. A pale haze of chalk still hung in the warm air, barely visible except where it drifted through the beams of lig
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    Chapter 1

    I have to admit, it sounded totally weird saying be a couple or I'll show the world you looked at him with big gentle eyes, but then if it's about the narrative, I can wait to see how you pull the rope tighter. Social media here they come! The game is on!
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    Prologue

    I really thought this was going to be an orgy.
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    Chapter 7

    What if Lydia is vegan and doesn't like sausages? What if she likes a girl?
  19. I somehow managed to break the whole thing and publish two chapters at once 🙃
  20. The house began to feel different in the mornings once Rick started waking before noon, though the change was gradual enough that it revealed itself more through small adjustments than any deliberate decision. The room had the faint clarity of a place that had been aired out overnight, as if a window somewhere had been opened and closed again without his noticing. The light that reached his desk was no longer the dim blue reflection of the monitor left running through the night but the narrow ba
  21. Kileoli

    Chapter 13

    So, a happy ending with a baby and the Hardings question for the next generation is solved too. Was it intentional that Elias is still Sawyer in two sentences?
  22. Honestly I keep on wondering how could people in USA allow such politics, but then here's not much better. Still it's good you don't watch that kind of news anymore. It's not healthy. Where are the hugging smilies?! You get one. 🙃
  23. Whoopie pies look like chocolate Macarons. Milchschnitte ( milk slices) are very popular here and since they have the word "milk" kids think they are healthy 😂 And I'm glad that many other parents over the world suffer from the same jogurt smarties problem. It's like the same feeling when you're out and a kid throws a tantrum and every one is looking at the parent(s) evaluating their reaction and you're like, thank holy bunnies, it's not my kid. This is the exact meaning of Schadenfreude ( malicious glee was the closest translation I found). These Jogurts are damn expensive just for having the sweets presented next to them and produce too much plastic waste. And again another favorite topic. I should write it as one of Liam's favorite arguments with kids for not needing the car to go shopping or not buying all the stupid small plastic toys.
  24. Thought I could change the mood a bit. Thing is I don't like others feeling down when I feel shitty
  25. The Jogurt Are they really called milk slices?
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