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  1. Cia

    Chapter 108

    Bouncer pounced with his claws extended, and for the first time I saw why everyone was so afraid of cerops. It wasn’t just the wide wounds his claws slashed across the officer’s throat, it was the poison that bubbled from the wounds and the froth that immediately bubbled from the male’s mouth. He died instantly. “Bouncer, no—” was all I got out before he was already stalking back to my side. Ases squeezed my shoulder. “That guy was on the vid feed.” “What?” I couldn’t look away from th
  2. Happy September reading! If you aren't already engrossed in a story or series, I have the best recommendation for you. Every so often I love to hit upon my favorite genres, and these stories are right up my alley. Angels, Cupids, and Death. Which are the snarkiest? I'm not gonna tell! You have to read to find out. Ooh... someone's in trouble! Who is it? To read more, or catch up on the gist of things click here
  3. This month's feature story by Aditus was co-authored with Timothy M, and it does require reading of 2 other series of fantasy tales. I had to feature it though because it's just too good not to! Have you read any of them? If not, hopefully this preview make you want to if you haven't already! Length: 32,788 Description: Sablo and Diego are brothers and Guardian Angels. Sablo has found his true love with the Cupid Theliel, but worries about his brother. Especially when he finds out Death is stalking Diego. A reader said: A wonderful collaboration from two great authors who have combined fascinating worlds for this supernatural adventure. It has it all... memorable characters, unexpected twists and turns, romance, and 'devilish' humor. I highly recommend this unique endeavor and cast of characters. Cheers! ~ Headstall If you want to spread the word about Aditus's story, download the graphic below and add it to your signature! Make sure you come back on Wednesday to see the excerpt I chose to share!
  4. Welcome back to Week 2 of our special 2022 Anthology themed Anniversary! Thank you to all the authors who shared stories for us to post last week and all the readers who took the time to read, like, comment, and review. Of course we're back with even more variety for you to enjoy. Keep up the enthusiasm and show your appreciation for these takes on the theme of Anniversary!
  5. Cia

    Chapter 107

    “Stop it. If he was going to turn me in, he would have done it already.” I put a hand on Ases’ shoulder. “You need to calm down or Bouncer is going to lose it too. These guys are our allies. We need to hear them out.” “Well look at you using your logic and brain,” snarked Timok. He cocked his head. “I didn’t know you had it in you.” “You’re not helping either,” I said shortly. “Seal your lips and listen to the plan unless you have something better to offer.” I crossed a pair of my arms
  6. Oh the big Kudos definitely go to @Valkyrie who stepped up in a huge way to take over the Club forum topics and proofing team. I'm more Johnny on the spot. 😆 Thanks though. We appreciate the time and hard work of everyone involved!!
  7. Well, on this 20th anniversary year of GA we wanted to get at least 20 Anniversary-themed stories to feature for our 2022 Anthology, and our authors pulled through and then some! We have short stories, long stories, poetry, and exploratory fiction. This month of September (which just so happens to my anniversary month on GA & in real life!) we have stories that will go live every single Thursday for readers to enjoy. Make sure you check here for links to each one! Enjoy these Anniversaries!
  8. Cia

    Chapter 106

    When I wasn’t asleep, I drove everyone else nuts. First it was because of all my questions, then it was because I couldn’t stay still. I wanted to move, to go. I needed to do something, anything, to help Garjah. When I was sitting and doing nothing, all I saw in my head was horrible images of what could be happening to him. We hadn’t talked about what happened when Garjah was forced to detain or punish someone; the worst I’d seen him do on the ship was assign shifts that were considered the
  9. Can you believe it's already September? I can't! So to go back to that holiday feeling, I've featured La Bella Vacanza by James Carnarvon. This story is linked to his series, but somewhat of an aside, so you can read it and enjoy a sampling of the tales. La Bella Vacanza by @James Carnarvon Length: 22,202 Description: A light-hearted novella in seven short chapters. Sixteen-year-old Reza thinks he knows it all until his parents drag him away on a summer holiday to Ravello on Italy’s Amalfi Coast, where a chance encounter by the hotel pool proves to be an education… A reader said: Ravello is a magical place for a vacation. Reza sets out to make his parents understand how put out he is to be away from friends, to visit this foreign town where nothing happens. Ravello and its magic slowly transforms Reza. He discovers an entirely different world, different perspectives and very surprising things about himself. This is a delightful, short summer read, and a great introduction to the other Ravello books. ~ Raven1 Don't forget to come back and share your thoughts on Monday, September 26th!
  10. Cia

    Chapter 105

    Ases wrinkled up his nose before he even drank the tuber milk, but I kicked him under the table. I’d warned him in the transport what he had to do, and I knew he could drink this and lie about it. I’d once seen him swill an entire bottle of bar mixings on a dare. He’d vomited profusely within minutes, but that was alcohol and sugar. This was just fermented tuber milk. Totally fine. He was a shifter; he should like milk. I upended my cup, suppressing my shudder at the gloopy nature of t
  11. August flew right on by, and if you were a science fiction geek like me, or if you love dragons, you enjoyed reading about the flying in Dark's Pern fanfiction, The Seventh Wing, that was featured earlier this month. Make sure you share your thoughts in a comment below his interview! If you were an animal, what would you be? Vampire Deer What do you like to do when you’re not writing? Read, read, read! I also sing in a choir and paint DnD miniatures for my brother and his players What’s one location you’d love to go to research for a story? I would have said Alaska, but I live there now, so I my next wish is Australia or New Zealand. If you could give advice to yourself when you first started writing, what would it be? Don't be the dad in Back to the Future. Be bold and let people read your stories. What’s the first thing you do when you start to write a story? Backgrounds and settings, like what does the place look like? any important, relevant history? cultural norms? and a basic outline. But most of my stories realistically start with a scene that just plays on repeat in my head. I write it down to stop the madness and then get into the details. I love making the details, even if I don't end up using them (see the extra files for Waylon's Crossing as a prime example). When did you first read one of Anne McCaffrey’s stories? I think I was in 6th grade, maybe younger. My mom loved Pern and had saved up her money to buy the People of Pern book, with all the images of what the main characters were supposed to look like, painted by a real artist and then pictures were made into the book. My sister and I were both there that day and kept asking "who is this?" type of questions and getting her to tell us about each character. My sister and I found it so fascinating, we eventually begged to have access to our mom's books to read them ourselves. Besides: dragons! I was hooked at the idea of people riding dragons. What was the hardest part of writing a fanfiction story? The easiest? The hardest part was sticking to the POV originally chosen. I hated it, LOL, but I didn't know that at the time I started writing. If I had to re-do it, that would be the first thing I'd change. I ultimately felt a bit caged and wanted to explore more sides of the story. The easiest part was actually the characters. They were based on people I knew and loved, friends and coworkers. It's funny that one of the comments I received on it said that he didn't like how F'rian was acting so girlish. I had a good laugh, because that guy ... he was a good friend but he drove me absolutely bonkers with his attitudes and behaviors, and I'd had the exact same thought when I first met him! I never did get to a point where I could predict what he was going to do or say or behave. If you were to Impress, what color dragon would you hope for? I would want a green because they're fiesty and have attitude, and they're small like me. But, knowing myself and how everyone knows me as the steady, dependable type, I'd probably Impress a brown. Which is cool, because I prefer being the right-hand of the leader. I can be the person in charge and I often do very well, but I prefer to be the power behind the throne and deal with a much smaller sandbox. Do you have a favorite scene or line from The Seventh Wing? There were several scenes based around the flying games that spun me into this story. Many did not survive the final version, but I had a background in ROTC, marching band, and various other types of similar exhibitions and I had dancing dragons in my head for months, flying those routines I'd seen (and been a part of) on the ground. And there was one scene where G'day found out F'rian designed the wing's patterns. That was the one I envisioned where he really started seeing F'rian as more than just a pretty (if exasperating) face. If you were to write The Seventh Wing again, would you change anything? I think I mentioned this earlier.... but to be frank, this is very early writing for me and there's loads I would want to do better.
  12. I was happy to help @wildone Myr showed me how I can "reset" the system when it goes wonky most of the time, but the fixes are down to Myr and the programmer, so we just trade off hours of when we're trying to keep it from affecting site users. Unfortunately, summer's over and I go back to work tomorrow at the elementary school, so between that and doing homework for 4 college classes (16 week semester accelerated into 8 ) I'm probably gonna be the one who looks like they were hit by lightning by the end of this week!
  13. Thank you for telling us when you had issues and giving us browser and device data. However, the issue is not with your cache. It's an issue that comes from an update that was pushed out that is causing issues for many website using the same software GA does. We're working to try to get it fixed permanently as soon as we can, and to apply the short-term fix whenever we are online/can do so, but GA doesn't have 24/7 paid site staff so there's not always someone on site who can do it right away.
  14. Yes, Myr fixed it.
  15. Cia

    Chapter 104

    “No one else has the resources they have or stand to lose what the Kardoval do. So, yes, he does need help. He’s been betrayed, attacked, and someone has to be holding him or he’d have tracked us down instead of you. Now let’s go. We have plans to make.” Timok looked about as put out as he ever had, and I took a small amount of pleasure in that. But now that I was going to let him help us, he needed to get to it. Ases snorted. “Meet Mr. Bossy.” “Now is not the time for jokes.” “I’
  16. A homograph can also be pronounced a different way, so if I was teaching using your example I'd call it a homonym since they are pronounced exactly the same way but have different meanings. Isn't the English language grand? Teaching the /u_e/ /oo/ /ew/ /ou/ /ui/ sound spelling rules can be super confusing for students (and teachers if they aren't given a specific phonics course to follow).
  17. We're both checking the site multiple times a day to see if we need to employ the temporary fix, but yeah, this is a doozy. It's always frustrating when a bug appears through no fault of our own, and we're hamstrung when it comes to fixing it. Thank goodness we have amazing members who are so patient.
  18. Yes, you can have chapters but we prefer as few as possible.
  19. Cia

    Chapter 103

    “How did you find me?” I stared at him, wide-eyed in shock. I jerked away from the tree, crouching with my lower arms braced against the ground. I could dart left or right, though he was blocking the direct path toward the spring where Bouncer and Ases were hunting. I wasn’t sure I wanted to lead him toward them anyway. “I didn’t find you. I found him.” He pointed over his shoulder at Bouncer. He slipped around Timok, as silent as I’d expected him to be, and came to stand at my shoulder. I
  20. I'm in Washington. I finished the online summer college semester (as a student getting my teaching degree) on July 31st, and I start my "fall" semester tomorrow on Aug. 15th... plus my working stiff job at a local elementary as a K-5 special education paraeducator starts all our pre-student training events next week and students force us to return to the building to teach them on Aug. 29th. 😭 Where did the summer go?!! Well, at least I got my youngest through the process to get his driver's license, and my daughter who graduated from high school in June signed up to sub as a playground supervision para this year to get her foot in the door/work part-time and signed up with the program for free online college I'm in starting tomorrow too. Oh yeah... that's where it went! 😆
  21. I'm probably not the best proofer, which is why I try to avoid doing it all that often, as I usually veer more into editing than just strictly finding typos. But thank you, @Valkyrie I'm glad I can help and certainly glad the reason I am needed is so many of our great authors are participating in this year's anthology! I've been a long-time beta reader/editor/proofer/manuscripter/publishing assistant for M.A. Church on all her books for about 10 years now, so it's definitely fun when you can grow that relationship with an author long-term. It helps that we have very similar reading tastes and writing styles, so we mesh well. As an editor I think the most important rule is to explain my edits and style to the author(s) I work with. I use Merriam-webster as my dictionary and CMoS as my style guide because those were the sources the publisher I had (before they ripped me and other authors off to the tune of thousands upon thousands of dollars) used. I will say the editors I worked with were amazing at explaining the rules to teach me, not just fix the document up to publish. Modeling that same style of editing, I will explain the first time or two I make an edit in a comment then just continue with the edits tracked in the future so the author can accept/reject based on if they agree or disagree. When it's truly stylistic edits or word choices, I typically just add a comment. I also utilize comments to point out continuity, setting, or character issues such as timeline skips, story inconsistencies, or independent body movements. When I read I "see" the story happening in my head, so I often find those issues on my first read beginning to end, and then I do a second proof from the end of the document to the start, reading backward one paragraph at a time. That's also how I recommend editing to authors who don't have a team; it disrupts the continuity of the plot so you can focus on the words, not the story.
  22. Cia

    Chapter 102

    “We can’t risk a fire. I’m going to shift. I’ll stay warm, and you can layer up with my clothes.” It was getting darker, and Ases was right. There was no way we should build a fire this close to the port, if I even had the ability to start one. At least the lightning arcing from the storm kept the complete darkness at bay. “All right.” Bouncer had grumbled, probably about the lack of easy access dinner. I’d encouraged him to go find something to eat, but he wasn’t the best hunter. “You shou
  23. This is what we're seeing on mobile. I'm on Edge, and Howzat is Firefox so that's evidence it's not just a single browser.
  24. Thank you, I noticed it as well. I wonder if the site had to "reset" somehow? Alas, my tech skills are not up to par with that, so I'm glad it appears to all be working now!
  25. Cia

    New Format?

    No, it is not an intentional skin. It appears we've had some sort of weird bug or formatting issues with the site skin. Please be patient while we try to figure out what happened and how to keep it from happening again. It does appear that the site has "reset" and is showing properly now.
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