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Wow, you are asking to get slammed for being an internet troll, Rocco. Dan has a lot of fans on this site plus a LOT of free reads. He's popular enough and kind enough to post some of his stories first to Premium and help contribute to the site that way. No one asked you to do anything. Singling Dan out in this manner is quite rude and your many explanation point comment is ridiculous. You insult him and the site by your attitude and at your age you should know better! If you don't have something nice to say or a polite way to say a valid criticism, don't say anything at all.

I definitely think Bashta needs some confidence boost in himself. Well, at least beyond his ability to stay alive in the jungle. We'll see if he gets it. I'm a huge sucker for romance too, which is why most of my stories involve one. I had to give the Jaguar a good intro, after all he is THE Jaguar. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter, you'll find the answers to what you wonder next one!

Okay, why did David just not be with Jacob? Why did it all fall apart like that and everyone go their own ways? You didn't show us the ending you just wrapped it up, like you tired of the story and stopped writing but didn't want to leave the readers hanging, which is a good thing but still. You get to the climactic moment of the plot and just... done? Oh and btw, this is how we all ended up.

Okay, what gives? New couple, all flush in love, goes to a club so they can be together without being gawked at by haters and they don't even spend any time together? That doesn't seem very in character. Going there, dancing with Jacob and then Kyle taking a break, running into Chris, seeing Jacob dancing with the guy while he's talking to Chris, a little bit of time gets away from him, and then it's time to leave, he does the bathroom routine, then leaves with Chris would be a lot more plausible. You have to keep the flow of the plot and the characters in mind when you throw in these twists.

Uh oh... you have a timeline jump here. You have Kyle sleeping with David friday night and waking up and spending a good portion of the day with him and Jacob and then going home and getting kicked out. Then another overnight. So... either they all skipped Friday school or you added an extra day. If you switch chapter 9's beginning to where they wake up from a nap and not the next morning when his parent's show up you should be able to salvage the timeline pretty easily.

Are we ending up with a 3 way, lol. Not so much talking about incest between the brothers but both of them with Kyle in the middle? Sure seems that way!

ooh, poor David! He's going to get hurt I think. Also, I didn't understand in the beginning the back and forth about him staying over the night. It seemed like he wasn't supposed to because his mom would find out but he did anyway... I don't know, I was just very confused by that part.

I'm a little confused on how brothers a year apart in age are in the same classes, since in chapter 1 you said that Jacob and Kyle were heading for their next class (gym) and then in this chapter you have Dave in all of Kyle's classes too. I mean, I guess it's possible in a small school. Kyle's change of heart is rather abrupt but then again... these are teenagers. More reading...

Drama drama drama? Were we really that dramatic as teenagers? I guess we were but it's a lot of fun looking back now from a whole new viewpoint. Seems like everyone likes someone other than the person that likes there, good fodder for the angst!

First impression: Basic coming out story. I like the characterizations so far though and your writing style is basically fluid. I do have one complaint though. Instead of periods you are using ... and my mind has naturally been trained to see that as a pause. It's very distracting and not correct use of the punctuation which tends to drive me a tad bonkers. Anyway, reading on!

I do use openoffice.org on my netbook actually and it's okay compatible with word. A lot of people also use google documents I think. Open Office LInk Google Docs link

LOL. Well I did want the cure to be scientific and magical. He is definitely a mix of that. But how it will work out without the mating... hmm... there is still that up in the air. I wonder if anyone caught the hints for that?

Did you see it coming? Did you? I was hoping that would be quite unexpected. And making them nude... Well that was just for me. Gotta love dripping wet handsome men, mmmm... nums! Glad you liked the chapter!!

A new chapter of Two of a Kind... and you get to see the picture that inspired the story finally!! Hope the visual helps make this chapter. Thoughts, comments, you evil wench sentiments... Feel free. Two of a Kind Chapter 5

The sun was hovering just above the horizon when they stood outside the Temple. It was a dark stone cave; the triangular rock face above it was carved into the semblance of a giant black jaguar with stone pillars on either side. The entrance, flanked by dark stone walls that reached toward them, resembled nothing so much as a gaping hole waiting to suck them inside. Cavel was incredibly nervous as he stood there in the evening light. Sweat dripped down his face as he waited, glancing between

Yeah, beyond dreams of wanting to fly throughout my life I've always owned cats. And those purring little monsters are just creatures of total physical pleasure when you get them to start purring. The idea of a hot man doing that? Yeah... smoking! They had a trial by fire to start their relationship and it certainly wasn't 'normal' but I have to say Velaku and Natham were two of my favorite characters as well. Thanks so much reading, reviewing, commenting... You're a gem!

Wow! That is a huge compliment!! I think anything someone is drawn to read more than once definitely is appreciated. I've had stories I've felt that way about. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Awww... yeah. All good things come to an end sometime. But there's still the epilogue. Yay!!

I know, that visual is just horrible, right? Someone consuming someone else is absolutely a horror to almost all human societies. Adding it to the story was deliberate to include a very graphic sense of disgust and horror without having to go all out into a full torture session. That was a bit of an evil cliffie at the end of this chapter. Well... if I wrote them, which I don't. Of course.

Oh yes. He's deadly, not just pretty. Everyone has their limit of what they can handle... things are only going to get crazier, keep reading!!

I had to add in some of the bond and the love otherwise it was just too dark. And it only gets darker. Thanks so much for continuing to read... over halfway there. Can't wait to see your other reviews!!

Have I been called a fag hag? Yeah. I didn't bother me as it was being used affectionately. I guess it just depends on intent for just about any way someone refers to me. On here I've been called mum, mommy, auntie, evil b**tch, the dreaded c word... it just depends on the person, lol. Never been called a fag hag in real life though. I've been good friends with the gay men I've worked with and such but I don't go out and do things with pretty much anyone but my female best friend or the snooty bitches club I'm in (sorry, a mom's club full of rich women. My kids need playmates but, I'm judgemental, what can I say?) Anyway, if I were to try and go 'out' with anyone of the male persuasion even if gay my hubby would flip. That's a NO NO. lol Mostly I'm more comfortable around men though. I don't like the cattiness of most women in large groups (it can be very scary!) Online I'm friendly and get along with men and women equally. The people I tend to talk to every day include both.

LOL. I know, I'm evil. Umm... be patient? Don't give up before things come up... literally! Don't worry, the action will keep things hopping but really, you'll see plenty of relationship to come.

Isn't it though? Warm and soft and cuddly and makes you just want to snuggle their brains out. Add in the fact that purr is coming from a hot guy? Yeah, yummy yums!! Thanks for the reviews!!

Oh yes. But a big thing to remember is that Carthera aren't human, not really. They mature faster and become fully grown as they mate. But yeah... they are definitely young and have a lot to bear. It only gets worse... eeks!