I remember frantically writing you an e-mail begging for you to continue because there were so many loose ends and then reading this final chapter and being happy. Thank you again.
Ignore the hater. They quit before they got to the meat of this story. This is my absolute FAVORITE family story in all of the internet. Thank you for sharing it with us. It absolutely deserves to be sticky'd.
You've hooked me. I eagerly await the next chapter.
I'd also like to echo Cia's sentiments. Something else needs to be present in order to keep me interested and invested in your work. Good luck!
Randy's dependence on Ryan is a bit too much. I can see why he's upset but the relationship isn't healthy at the moment. They need to communicate better or Randy's worries are going to become a self fulfilling prophesy and it really will be "just a highschool relationship".
It's not good that his relationship problems are going to affect Randy's school performance also. There will be fallout from his parents about it. Ah highschool drama.
I second the requests for more frequent chapters even though I know you have like a billion stories in the works. This is my favorite one of your stories.
This is quite an epic tale.
I'm not sure what to think about the tentacle sex. I'll just pretend it never happened.
Do continue though. This was very excellent. My only complaint is the beginning reference about gays in the military. Don't Ask Don't Tell has been officially abolished. (For now. God damn republican conservatives).
Incredible emotion. I want to learn more about the characters. Hope out of despair is very hard to pull off but I have faith that you will do wonderfully.
Looking forward to the next update!
Great chapter. Everything worked out, even though it didn't work out like Mika or Seeon thought it would.
In future chapters I hope that Seeon's family gets some payback. Nothing terrible like more war but I'd like to Seeon show them his powers when he comes fully into them.
I can't wait until next week!
I get the feeling that Seeon is going to need more than one reminder that his life is going to change once his sister-in-law and former priest are gone. Hopefully he takes it well.
Thanks for posting!
I would argue against Dannsar's pleas to stop the story where it is now. At least one more chapter tying up some loose ends. I have enough faith in you and your editors to avoid too many tropes. I understand how busy you are with school (I'm hoping that we get an update this winter break in between semesters) but know that whatever you choose your readers will support you. If you do end Spider Webs I hope you decide to write another story.
I read this entire story (with breaks) in eight hours. Your characterization, plot development and character growth is awesome and I was hooked from the beginning. Mortgaging the farm might make sense but I think she's preparing to file for divorce if its needed. William isn't going to take the news that his son is gay very well at all.
I hope we get to see Seth's letter next chapter. I'm sure he'll be supportive. He may even just offer to come down and get Billy if he needs him to... hint hint.
Thanks for sharing.
They're getting in deep. Hopefully Annie can protect herself and the boys. I want to find out more of David's past. What destructive behaviors was he involved in before he left? What is his dad like? I have a feeling that David's deeply hurt from more than just his mother but I might be wrong. It's not a strong feeling.
Great story. I'm really riveted.
I liked the hint that Seeon will be expected to use his gifts to their fullest extent.
Thanks for updating. And as you can hopefully see, there is a lot of interest in keeping the story going.
I started reading this years ago, and I have no idea why I stopped. Bits and pieces are coming back to me but it's really good.
Thanks for writing.
PS "Working it Out" is one of my favorite gay family stories of all time.
Thanks for the update. Hopefully the bud went where we all think it should go.
I really want Batea and everyone else to leave so Seeon's healing can start and I think there's going to be some drama during the wedding.
This story piqued my interest but I was afraid of where you were going to take it. Now that we're learning more about the new culture I really want to know where you're going to take it.
Thanks for posting.
Wes as a character really speaks to me. His circumstances are perfect for someone to take advantage of him. It's just in this case that someone is a werewolf rather than a pimp or another normal evil man.
This chapter made me so happy. Micah and Patrick are finally together and those asshole jocks got some payback. I know that the cycle isn't over (you hinted that the asshat principal plays a part in the future) but I'm glad they know that Micah isn't a pushover.
I hope we see some more improvements in Joel's speech but I'm betting we see that through the time warps you spoke about.
Thanks again!
He's getting there. It's happening really slowly but he's getting there.
Derek's thought process in this chapter was very well done. He's acting almost human and he didn't even mention how perfect he was. There's hope for him yet.