Rebelghost85
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Wow. What a quick turnaround. I hope everything turns out okay and I wonder what the hell happened. Great chapter! I can't wait until the next update.
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What a first impressions huh? I wonder who those kids are. I also want to know how Jon got out of the woods. More and more questions and very few answers. You sure know how to keep us coming back! Great chapter.
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Great background chapter. I can only imagine the suspense and fear I'd feel if a dragon sat down outside of my house.
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This continues to develop and get better. I'm hopping Quinn's showdown with his father goes well.
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Great chapters but just one point of criticism. The stuttering is distracting. I have trouble getting through the dialogue when every sentence begins with a letter-dash-letter-dash-letter. It would be easier to read if you could portray their emotions in some other way. Thanks for updating!
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Great start. I can't wait to learn more.
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Just like Alex, all I can say is wow. Great chapter and I hope the three become an integral part of the story.
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Mysterious Happenstance
Rebelghost85 commented on Yanks13's story chapter in Mysterious Happenstance
The characters you write about are really compelling and deep. I feel for them and care about them already. -
I kind of really really want them to be wrong about the dragon hatching... Also I feel for the boys. They have no idea what's going on around them. Thanks for the update!
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I'm sad to see the Carris family go, but I'm really happy that the Emperor decided to let them live. Looking forward to the next chapter!
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Great chapter. I loved how you gave us a sex scene and also moved the plot along. The story about Maraki's meeting in the woods was also funny.
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Chapter 8 Acceptance...
Rebelghost85 commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 8 Acceptance...
Very well done. I enjoyed this story immensely. Thank you. -
Totally invested. This was story obviously has a lot of thought put into it. Just a minor thing, I should be "await" instead of "away" in the last sentence. Thanks for sharing and I can't wait until the next chapter.
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Keep sane Hasimir! We don't want you to burn out. It's happened to me twice with writing already. I'm really falling in love with the family. Hopefully everything turns out alright with them. *hint hint*. Thanks for the chapter!
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Chapter 4: Partnership
Rebelghost85 commented on David McLeod's story chapter in Chapter 4: Partnership
This was a touching chapter. I'm glad to see the character development all three of the "main" characters are going through. -
I agree with everyone else. More! It has so much promise. Thank you for sharing.
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Interesting premise. I wondered where you were going with this.
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Chapter 2: Retribution is Job One
Rebelghost85 commented on David McLeod's story chapter in Chapter 2: Retribution is Job One
More questions than answers! Then again, that's how stories go. Great chapter, looking forward to more. -
I'm so glad they patched things up. Their earlier interactions in the cell allowed them to make it past this misunderstanding. Now I'm really worried for the family. I hope nothing terrible happens to them.
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I have no idea how you're able to juggle all of these story lines, but I really like that you do. Very interested in this story.
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Chapter 48 - "Monkey Blowtorch Day" (Part 2)
Rebelghost85 commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 48 - "Monkey Blowtorch Day" (Part 2)
I must protest the awful caricature of video games you painted in this chapter. Video games are not that terrible. That said, great chapter. I really enjoyed the contrast between what Randy was thinking and the hyper boys around him and I'm glad Ryan understands a bit. Hopefully Randy will be able to take his final at a later time but I'm betting that his coming out process hasn't even started yet. Thanks for writing! -
My only complaint is that I wish the chapters were longer. Wonderful work. Thank you. I wonder who they're going to meet?
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Wow. This was a powerful chapter. Maraki's actions under the Ardor were surprising but I'm glad he had some sort of self control and the ending was suspenseful and awesome. I can't wait to find out what happens next.
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I'm glad you're addressing the overly intense bond between Josh and Alex. In the beginning it seemed a whole lot like unhealthy dependence to me but the explanations hold up.
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I like Brian. He's good people and Anthony is so precious. Hopefully Brian can protect the boy until his fathers find them. Great story and I can't wait until the next chapter!
