Rebelghost85
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I was so confused in the beginning of the story but that forced me to keep reading. I'm glad I waited until now to read through it. I might have complained a lot about the unanswered questions. Thank you for sharing. It's an amazing story.
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Really awesome. I loved your first work and this story looks like it will be amazing. Thank you.
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Oh man. I'm so happy Jordan was found. Now he needs Drew to help him get through the horrors he's faced and move on with his life. Great story. I'm very happy that I found it. I can't comment on the edits because I just read it today.
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I'm really enjoying this story. I only have one critique. There are a lot of typos in every chapter. Small things like her instead of he, were to we're and other things. Please edit them out because they distract the reader and take away from the story.
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Stormy Weather and Guilty Hearts
Rebelghost85 commented on Parchment_Of_Love's story chapter in Stormy Weather and Guilty Hearts
The plot of this story is really good. I can't wait to find out what happens next and I'm anxious about Luke. -
Good start. This story has a lot of promise.
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Alright, I'm a sucker for happy endings. Thank you very much for sharing this.
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Jesus fucking christ its like a god damn soap opera. Totally unbelievable but I'm still reading it.
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Once again I need to complain about the realism. Not only are doctors mandatory reports, teachers and principals are as well. Don would have no choice but to let the police know that the beating and rape occured. He should know that reporting is ALWAYS in the child's best interest, even if they don't believe it.
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I stand by my earlier review, but it seems like there are some allies now. I hope things continue to get better, but I doubt it.
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I'm having trouble with this story. The abuse is SO bad that it's not believable. Why has no one noticed anything wrong? Why does no one report anything? Is this set in the 50s? Before that? If it's modern times the abuse is too overt to be overlooked. The believability of the story is in question. Aside from that though, this is well written and I'm going to continue reading for a chapter or so more.
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Chapter 47: "Monkey Blowtorch Day" (Part 1)
Rebelghost85 commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 47: "Monkey Blowtorch Day" (Part 1)
I hope Wilson helps and Randy doesn't end of taking his bad day out on the boy. Wilson doesn't deserve that. Great chapter. I hope we see some of the fallout soon. -
Chapter 5 Grief Reactions...
Rebelghost85 commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 5 Grief Reactions...
Hm. The sex scene played really well into the story. It added depth and just the right amount of drama. Great chapter. -
I do hope you decide to continue in this universe. The characters and scenarios are very engaging.
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True to life and well written. Thank you.
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Chapter 4...Bargaining
Rebelghost85 commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 4...Bargaining
The fight was pretty intense. Feelings are running high and I believe you when you warn us that hearts will be broken next chapter. -
I think I like Desert Dropping even more then The Long Way. It's just that good. Thank you again.
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Rereading this story made me fall in love with Rory, Luke and Seth all over again. I remeber writing to you begging for Luke and Rory to get together but Seth is perfect for him. An oh man, the cliffhanger here KILLED me when you first posted this. Thank you so much for writing and I hope you are doing well.
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I am really interested. A request however. If there is an Ardor scene in the future, please make it have as few references to Maraki's differences as possible. It's just not my thing. Thanks for sharing.
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Always a pleasure to see that you've posted another story or an update. I like everything so far.
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Chapter 1 – My Special Friend
Rebelghost85 commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1 – My Special Friend
I thought it was cute that right after the sex scene you censored fuck. Great chapter. Now on to the next one. -
Incredibly powerful and true to life. Thank you for sharing and I hope you write more in the future.
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Great get to meet the characters chapter. Looking forward to more.
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I enjoyed this story. It had a ring of truth, and I cared for the characters. Thank you for sharing.
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As more feedback about the rich gay archtype... Working It Out is one of the first major modern stories on the net to use it. Everyone copied Dan in my opinion.
