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An immersive read, a captivating story. Community, love, and survival across different worlds. I love the characters. Thank you But Cliffhanger WTF lol.
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Exquisitely written, so much so that you read certain sentences over and over again just to relish in them. This is pure inspiration about how to write a cute little romance right. With all the ingredients, and all the perfection. The book description simply states ‘Sweet enough to cause cavities.’ This is indeed a very apt description. Use this tiny little story to brighten your day. You can sue me (not really) if it doesn’t. Read if you want to find out how the vindaloo had won.
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EVERY. SINGLE. PARAGRAPH. IS GREAT. What a sweet fucking story. Hell. I loved all of the characters, immediately. Their voice shone through like the blistering sun within mere moments. Even Kade's mom. "Torito". Haha. One sentence was enough. If you ask me, the…dates weren’t shitty to me either. They were perfect! Sweet, and heartwarming. Don't make me lookup scaphism again though. Eew.
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Nice start to a story, let's see where this goes. The protagonist exudes toxic heterosexual masculinity, so I hope you can beat some sense into him. Thanks for posting
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Life is Strange 2 - Original Score by Jonathan Morali The game is such a masterpiece of mood and atmosphere. I listen to its soundtrack all day while writing.
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Very beautiful story, thank you.
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I know we can generate the same lists for ourselves in the story archive, but I find these blog posts to be extremely helpful in finding something new to read (AHHHHHHH I'M IN THERE!)
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@drsawzall But... but... at least there are more answers now! You wanted answers! You are completely right that I'm probably, right now, at the very far end of the spectrum. They just naturally happened, I just end a chapter when one does. The next few chapters will navigate away from the deus ex machina type of magic we have seen so far. Lots of glowy things, not much explanation. They never had a breather to explain either. They will. I promise. Thank you so much for your insightful comments, and reigning me in. It is very much appreciated 🥰
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There's a fine line to walk between fate and free will. Maybe Grey will have some struggles with the fact that the only two men he has been or is drawn to in his life are related to Beatrice. Beatrice who did some magic shit to him when he was born. Thank you for reading and commenting, as always.
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@mikedup Thank you, thank you, thank you! I appreciate it. 🥰 Now let's see what Clara's deal and role is in this "one big (happy) family". 😐
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@akascrubber I always look forward to a comment from you, because it helps a lot seeing that the words I write actually make sense to someone I sure hope Beatrice is around somewhere, because she has some explaining to do. Thank you so much for reading, following, and most of all commenting. It is very much appreciated. 🥰
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Let's see how deep the rabbit hole goes.
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Maybe that's the only thing I'm good at... hooking people and cliffhangering them just enough so they continue following the story. 😐 I'm kidding, I think? Thank you, as always, for your kind comments and readership 🥰
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Oliver reeks of human, because the author forgot to put in enough shower scenes. Don't forget to put in enough shower scenes. Originating from Old English "rēocan," meaning to emit smoke, it has evolved to commonly signify an unpleasant smell. Can also be used for other things, like "reeks of corruption".
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❤️ ❤️ ❤️ Yes! I mean to explore the Oregon Badlands Wilderness in my story. I kinda also want to go there, if anyone would like to adopt a German.
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@JohnnyC I feel like every chapter all I can say is "It's all going to make sense soon!" 😂 We're off to adventure now, and I feel like these people can trust each other somewhat? There'll be plenty of opportunities to go into their backstories more, but if Beatrice is around somewhere, she'll probably have most of the answers. I'll leave this as a hint: “Sun and moon,” I said, my eyes still fixed on Dave. Thank you for reading and commenting, as always. 🥰
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The silence in the room was thick, almost tangible, as we all turned to face Mark. He stood by the door, disheveled. I could’ve asked him how he’d gotten free, but that wasn’t necessary. His arms were singed, his flesh moist and bare. I could see bone. With enough force, a werewolf can do many things. And if pain isn’t a concern… Well, I knew how that worked. It’s how I managed to escape after all. The raw emotion in Mark’s gaze was a tumultuous mix of regret and determination. That wasn’t
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@JohnnyC I made myself a potato and lentil soup today! That helped me power through what I needed to affirm and fix before submitting. WHICH I HAVE! Thank you! Chapter Six: Trinity is in the moderation queue. I have battled through the stuffy nose and cough, and am happy with the edit :3
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Love this. It's also preferred by werewolves, who may or may not be sparkly.
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@JohnnyC YES! I wanted to have it out already, but am not done with editing, caught a cold, and spent the day on couch, suffering miserably and moaning about life in general. But should be done tomorrow afternoon UTC, then moderation queue 😛 Thank you for your interest :3
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@JohnnyC I can’t wait to reveal all the lore behind … what they are. Why they are. Who they are. Who they are going to be. AHHHHHHHH. Thank you so much for reading, and commenting, and the support
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And if you cook it in the oven, is it a mallard that maillards? I know it’s not a verb, but it made me chuckle. I don’t even eat meat, what am I doing.
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@chris191070 Yup! This is how the characters told me it should happen while I was writing. I was powerless. Thank you so much for reading and the comments!
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@mikedup Thank you for reading and commenting. I appreciate it! Glad you enjoyed the chapter! I hope to bring a little more clarity, now that things might settle. It’s only been a day since Grey met Dave and Clara, and with Mark just appearing, I think everyone has to get to know each other know. Right? All we had so far was … supernatural mayhem.
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@drsawzall 🫢 I fear at some point you’ll just burst and start kicking me. You are right, Dave, Grey, Clara, Mark… and all of them are in “this shitty bar”. Thank you for reading and commenting, it means a lot You know what I always found most fascinating about shifters? If they don’t undress before, they end up naked or at least in ripped clothes. At least in my world they do. This visual makes me smile.
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