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Black Widow (Story Discussion)
PrivateTim replied to Mark Arbour's topic in Mark Arbour Fan Club's Mark's Topics
In the NCAA your first confirmed, positive drug test for a PED results in a one year loss of eligibility. It has nothing to do with the IOC and its rules or any of the NGBs in the U.S. since there is no jurisdiction. Before you get snarky you could check the facts. No athletic program schedules the random drug testing it is done by entities not beholden to the athletic department. Zach wasn't just tested, it was either a group of players or all the players as they were they when Zach arrived. At UCLA drug testing is done by the UCLA Olympic Analytical Laboratory which is the world’s largest World Anti-Doping Agency accredited sports drug-testing facility and the number one research institution in athletic doping. It was founded by Dr. Don Catlin, an IOC member and the leading expert in the world on athletic doping. His lab (he was still the head in 2003) would tell a program when they wanted to do random testing. The athletic programs don't arrange their own random tests. It would undermine the entire concept of random. -
Black Widow (Story Discussion)
PrivateTim replied to Mark Arbour's topic in Mark Arbour Fan Club's Mark's Topics
You don't get kicked off a football team for flunking a drug test and people with money and influence can fix anything. How do people not get this still? A flunked drug test is appealable and it would be a field day for a top lawyer to take on this one. The drug test wasn't announced until after Will called Wade. Football teams don't arrange their own random drug tests, especially not at UCLA, and it could not be set up quickly on a Sunday. The lab that does the testing would have had to have it set up several days in advance. Karl Dorrell wouldn't even take a phone call from Elizabeth Danfield. She might be able to have Zach's roommate bribed (an easy enough thing for a lawyer who is appealing a drug test result to sniff out), but she would have zero influence into UCLA directly. If Zach had chosen UVA, maybe, not UCLA. -
Black Widow (Story Discussion)
PrivateTim replied to Mark Arbour's topic in Mark Arbour Fan Club's Mark's Topics
Well now the plot is thicker than a dick in a Mark Arbour story...... -
So you kind of knew it had to be Mamma Danfield somewhere along the line. It isn't her personality to take defeat gracefully. I wonder what will happen if Wade bans her from seeing the grandkids and using the estate in VA. Turn her into personna non grata. Doesn't someone have evidence of illegal deals by her still?
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Black Widow (Story Discussion)
PrivateTim replied to Mark Arbour's topic in Mark Arbour Fan Club's Mark's Topics
I am pretty sure Ryan knew already. It isn't a secret exactly about Zach & Will. They were together at the Bastille Day Party even if they weren't macking, I think a lot of people can add 2 +2. This is a gay forum, it ought to be HO HO HO. -
Mark has his mojo back....... nuf' said.
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Black Widow (Story Discussion)
PrivateTim replied to Mark Arbour's topic in Mark Arbour Fan Club's Mark's Topics
The ownership would be in a corporation or trust's name and the responsible person would be a lawyer or trustee for the entity. Will's name might not appear anyplace on paperwork. I am curious why Zach hanging up makes you think he is being "blackmailed". If anything I think he has gotten the word from someone that his "friendship" with Will is a threat to his career and football has always come first with Zach. If you go back to Flux Chapters 11 & 12 when Zach first broke up with Will over rumors of their relationship then Will knew that it was going to be hard to maintain the relationship through college and the NFL. -
What a pleasant way to start a lunch at your computer.... finding a new chapter. Even if Ryan does try to take his own life, which I doubt he will, he won't succeed. Interesting scene with Josh and Will, but like I said earlier, the bar is a hobby and a hobyy that is making money, even if it isn't a lot. But that also might be more plot device than reality. A successful gay bar can throw off so much revenue from $16 martinis that you have to work at failing. It is when the crowd moves to the next hot bar that bars get in trouble. I assume that JJ is going to wind up hiring John as his PA, which will be good for both of them for a bit.
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I am pretty sure most of the words were "all work and no play makes Mark a dull boy."
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California Culture: Circa 2000
PrivateTim replied to Mark Arbour's topic in Mark Arbour Fan Club's Mark's Topics
As if any of my fraternity brothers, 40 miles south of the Napa Valley, was going to drink a box wine. We brushed our teeth with Stag's Leap and used Grgich Hills to wash our cars....... Once, God knows why...... but we can smell it from our Palm Desert home when the wind blows the wrong way. I had a college class in folklore legends.... which this sounds like. Some really cool ones here: Folk Tales -
Black Widow (Story Discussion)
PrivateTim replied to Mark Arbour's topic in Mark Arbour Fan Club's Mark's Topics
You are missing two key points here. The family is rich and the family is really rich. Do you think racing thoroughbreds is profitable? Yacht racing? Playing polo? When you are rich you can indulge in incredibly extravagent hobbies. Owning a hot club, even if it is losing gobs of money is a gay man's hobby. It isn't the "cool young people" who are moving to Brooklyn, but the financially challenged young people who think they are cool (or more to the point want others to think they are cool) that are moving to Brooklyn. They tweet, Instagram and Yik Yak to each other about how cool, hip and trendy they are and hope people believe them. The really rich stay in Manhattan. -
Of all the things that struck me in this chapter was this: It was 9:30, too damn early for me to be up in the summer. Early morn is the norm for surfers. Up at 5:30AM, out in the waves at first full light when the waves are still glassy before the wind comes up. You are at the donut shop by 8AM after an epic session and you have to hold the coffee in your hands for five minutes before your fingers thaw enough to work again and you can grab the first of your six donuts. I hope JJ finds out he enjoys genuine people.
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Black Widow (Story Discussion)
PrivateTim replied to Mark Arbour's topic in Mark Arbour Fan Club's Mark's Topics
Mmm, not a lot, some. Funny, I was thinking you were raised in Highland Park...... but now I'm like hmmmmm Idylwild? Big Bear? Yeah...... like in the 1930's...... Burbank is more "Hollywood" than Hollywood is. Paramount is the only of the majors in Hollywood and its been that way forever. -
Black Widow (Story Discussion)
PrivateTim replied to Mark Arbour's topic in Mark Arbour Fan Club's Mark's Topics
Duke's have townhouses and flats, not condos We thought were bad boys egging cars on PCH. - - - - - - - - - - - - - A comment was made in a review, "JJ may bitch but Will just leaves a trail of good deeds. Both hurting, both being dumped, still Will thinks about others not himself." It is true that Will does some nice things, but it is very easy to be generous when you have so much money no matter how much you spend you still have more. It is a bit harder when you give of personal things, like your time (and no, not once a year at Thanksgiving) or when the giving is painful, either financially or emotionally. Pat Tillman was someone who could have made generous donations to the USO, but chose a very different path and committment. Beyond just giving up his NFL career, Pat could have easily gone to OCS, but instead enlisted as a grunt. That is being committed. -
If Will is 17 he is legal in NY state. CA is one of the few states where 18 is a hard and fast age. Zach can not be completely divorced from Will because they are still related, but he can back off the contact to holidays and special occassions. My guess is that there is someone at UCLA from either De La Salle or another Nor Cal school. With a player of Zach's quality other players are going to talk and players from different schools all know each other. There has to have been no small amount of gossip about Zach. Even if the gossiper had no clue it was true, it wouldn't be unusual for malicious gossip to go around for the sheer maliciousness of it.
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Black Widow (Story Discussion)
PrivateTim replied to Mark Arbour's topic in Mark Arbour Fan Club's Mark's Topics
It is premature to speculate on anything. We have to wait and see what Alex does with Mary Ellen. He isn't going to let her leave the country with his son and heir and no British court would side with ME in a custody battle. As to poached salmon I probably eat it once a week as it is about the easiest thing a working couple can fix for dinner. JJ might be small, but a competitive figure skater needs about 5,000 calories a day to maintain their weight when they are in training. -
Thanks for the latest chapter. I don't know why everyone, including Will, are shocked by Zach's email. Everyone, including Will, know that football comes first with Zach. I think we discussed this two books ago about Will knowing he was going to have to be way in the background during college and any possible NFL career. He can't be Zach's constant companion and not raise eyebrows and as Zach would become more well known in NCAA circles it would be impossible to stifle the speculation online and eventually in the media. I still don't get why Alex didn't tell Mary Ellen to sod off and send her packing.
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I am trying to figure out what Mary Ellen can do to JJ without hurting herself. She can't try the outing to USFS thing since that would blow back on her and piss off Alex. If I was JJ I'd just have ME whacked. Alex has his heir, now he can be the widower. I also don't get the big deal about Will spending money. He has lots of his own and why should his father care? Will can't spend Brad's money. If Will pissed away his money I think Brad would almost be glad.
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Faces for Mark's Stories
PrivateTim replied to methodwriter85's topic in Mark Arbour Fan Club's Mark's Topics
So wait...... Italians are considered white now?? -
Faces for Mark's Stories
PrivateTim replied to methodwriter85's topic in Mark Arbour Fan Club's Mark's Topics
I see Tony more like this....... -
I think I liked that chapter, I need to ruminate some more. If Stef was having business issues with Brad, the place to raise it was in a business setting. It is pure bunk for Stef to suggest he couldn't have a meeting with Brad because he wasn't around. If you want a meeting to discuss issues, you schedule one. As to Will, since he never is held accountable for his behavior he continues to overstep his bounds.
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"George Jefferson"?? Is the Viscount movin' on up???
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California Culture: Circa 2000
PrivateTim replied to Mark Arbour's topic in Mark Arbour Fan Club's Mark's Topics
Why are you reading a British newspaper to find out what is going on in Los Angeles? I stopped reading after the first line. What unadulterated bullshit. I've been to Liverpool, East London, Glasgow, La Courneuve Paris and other slums in European cities that are massive compared to the tiny sliver that Skid Row is and there many worse spots in the U.S. -
California Culture: Circa 2000
PrivateTim replied to Mark Arbour's topic in Mark Arbour Fan Club's Mark's Topics
Have you ever actually been to LA? The City of LA is 469 square miles. Manhattan is 33 square miles. There are no single families homes I know of in the core downtown area. What is being torn down are old industrial buildings, even at that at the pace they are building it would 100 years for even downtown to look like Manhattan. There is plenty of room left to build more single family homes in the hills, but there won't be large family tracts like there was at the end of WWII when the Valley still had farms and orchards. -
California Culture: Circa 2000
PrivateTim replied to Mark Arbour's topic in Mark Arbour Fan Club's Mark's Topics
Plaid isn't flannel and a lot of celebrities grow beards between productions to "hide". It has nothing to do with LA wanting to be Manhattan, but with developers wanting to build big buildings, the city council to stem white flight and increase the tax base.
