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Remijay

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  1. There Once Was Love & Modern High A Vacation With Regrets 1-3 Gay Days “I can’t believe we’re actually here in this place. It’s... it’s just wonderful, I have been wishing my whole life to be here and here I am.” “Will you stop being such a drama queen? Damn!” stated Lacey, while she looked on in wonderment. “Yea, seriously, dude... quit.” Followed by Kevin seconding Scott “Whatever. If you guys don’t like it, go to the hotel,” Tom told them, with a shrug of his should
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    Chapter 1

    Thanks, im glad you liked it
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    Chapter 2

    Thanks, Mike! xD
  4. When I met you it seemed real, now it seems as though you’re a lie Sent to me as a fake, sent to me to destroy what I am. I loved you, I wanted you, and I needed you, but now I haven’t a clue This mountain that I climb, is it real? What if it is the same as you? I cant keep going like this, the pain, the torture. I thought you were real, now I cant tell. You wormed your way in, and now I cant seem to let you go. I want to hurt, I want to feel pain, but I cant, I still love you.
  5. When a heart says no, what’s to come. How much can you take, if you can’t anymore. I used to believe things happen for a reason, but now, I haven’t a clue. For you were my foundation, my rock. As you left, went without a word spent, without a goodbye or see ya. My heart broke in two, for you were my existence in this world of unforgiving. Months passed without a word, and then years. I thought if I saw you, I could live, I could survive, but seeing you with someone else, broke me even more. N
  6. I sit here and think about how my life has changed, I think that I’m damned to hell. I want my life to go back to where everything made sense, to fool around and not care. I sit here and want to go back, when things were different. When I was younger I had friends lots of them, I had people who cared for me and me them. I miss my best friend Emily Strong; I haven’t talked to her in a year. I miss her deeply, I think that if I was still down there we would still be friends and hanging out. I c
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    I hate you!

    I see you for who you are the one person that I hated the most. I hated the fact that you can always be right, I hated that you were always there for me, I hated it when you’d smiled that beautiful smile I also hated how could make me feel. I wish that you were never here, I wanted you when my heart didn’t, I needed you when I thought that I could trust you. The first time walking down the street with you, when we touched our hands lightly to another. That feeli
  8. I wonder what a life without love is. I wanna know how it feels, to be in love. To sit and think of nothing but you. To be with someone is a dream I once had To tell the truth, it seems that I'm missing something. A world filled with love is a wonder, but one without it can do damage to one's soul. I wonder what a person would do with out love? As I sit and think of that person that I used to be, To be able to do whatever he must, To love thy person with his hear
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    Wishes

    I wish I could take the hurt, And turn it into a dream. To wish upon a star, And feel you there. The pain I feel for you, Is worth the bleeding I suffered. Taking the hurt, And turning it into a dream. Was it ever worth it, Did you ever feel the same. When you broke my heart, it severed into pieces. Taking that pain, And turning into a dream, Now that’s a wonder. I wish I could make you love me, To hold me like I did you. I unde
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    Jeff

    There's always that one person that catches your eye. There's someone out there wishing it to be true, to have it hurt when met with defeat. Everyday there's a new attraction, that you wish too get on. For everyday that passes the more you miss that one golden wish. There's always going to be a person out there wishing it to be true. For they are met with defeat. For every angel there's a demon, for every demon there's also another demon. The wishes you
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    Friends

    The wishes I wish I could have made The ones that I could have saved There are so many wishes that I wished to make When the time was right And now, its too late I wanted to wish everything for you To make it seem better To make it seem greater Every night I sit and think of the mistakes I have caused The pain that I have put you through The mistakes that I wish I could change There's only so much that a person can do, I could have been better, greater A more of a best friend too you The wish
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    Remijay poems

    These are the poems that i have wrote over time... When i was most depressed or just lonely... Some or all these poems are sad most likely... So hopefully you like them!!!!
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    Memories

    Wow Night.... you did an awesome job with this one.... i have been waiting for a long time.... Anyways, this chapter was sweet with a little bit of guilt mixed in with a little bit of happiness, also a little bit of Sadness, maybe anger? Who knows.... emotional roller coaster you have cased, but whats to happen? Will they get caught? Does billy's mom know something that she isnt letting on? What about going home? Will they ever see each other again if they do? I know alot of questions... i could go on forever with questions but sadly i wont, i'll have to read the next vhapter to find out... With Love Remijay <3 ((Hugz)) Take Care and Be Safe! Night
  14. Modern High & There Once Was Love A Vacation With Regrets 1 Trip to Orlando “Are you guys all ready?” asked my mother. In her loving way she knew that she could trust me, but I didn’t know if I could trust myself. I turned to face her with a smile, maybe a fake one just to satisfy, because I wasn’t sure if I could handle being away from her. She’s always been there for me, even when things got kinda hard. Nevertheless, I never stopped loving her; she’s the best mom ever.
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    Chapter 3

    WOW!!! it took you long enough to review... Howver, i love you... Remijay
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    Chapter 2

    Hahah, thanks hun... I try you know that...
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    Chapter 14

    Wow Anthony, i knew it was going to happen, you told me.... BUT BUT BUT, it still made me tear up... I love you tho.... ((Hugz)) ((Kizzes)) Remijay <3 Oh and i did like this chapter, even if i knew what was going to be in it. i like that Lenny wants Nate as a friend, and nice name for the Character, you flirt... Hahaha, anyways--- I know that chapter 15 is going to be much harder, You told what's to come, but i still have to read them, just for the comments and reviews i give... AS always love ya ttys Remijay <3
  18. Wow transformation.... Can you say AWESOME!!! Anyways, I liked that the King and Queen have put their son first instead how they were in the beginning, which I didn’t like. But what can you right? In any case I liked that they defeated the army of the vampires and burned the Vampire (Peremiro?) LOL, cant spell... I really liked this chapter, its awesome and with very much detail that I loved, keep’em coming, I already love this story... So the more the merrier. Remijay <3 (Hugz)
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    Chapter 1

    Aww, thanks hun. You're so sweet. It's okay now that i dont get comments. I used to get depressed and everything but now its like given that i wont get Reviews Or Comments. But thanks Hun! Hugz--Kizzes
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    Chapter 13

    Wow, Anthony. That was... well HOT... IT made me cry though, I know... Suck it up, well I cant I love this story. And I’m attached to it so heheh. Anyways, I liked how they all took a picture of them for Nate. And I especially love the ending, CAN YOU SAY HOT!!!!! LOL, and like always had to j/o! So yes, you always seem to do that with me, that’s plus if your wondering. I know whats to come and I don’t want it too, but I don’t see it being inevitable, So with love Remijay <3 (Hugz) (Kizzes) 10/10 Rating!
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    Chapter 17

    Wow.... I would have never seen it coming that Mich has a shiner.... Also i have question? Why does Coop keep getting these headaches, i dont get it, what triggers it? Thanks, i love story so far!!!!!!
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    Thanksgiving

    I have a question..... When are you going to read more.... I love this song so far, i have read all twenty chapters and now I'm waiting ((Hugz)) Remijay <3
  23. Modern High Chapter 9 Part 5 A Beautiful Friday Zach Waking up, I felt someone next to me. I wondered who it could be. I thought for a second and everything came back, the night before... with Jacob. Oh, wow. Seriously, he’s sleeping next to me in my bed. Turning over I found a remarkable sight, Jacob sleeping peacefully, with his eyes delicately shut, his breathing slow and soft. With his hairless chest rising and falling, I sighed out of contentment. I wanted to reach
  24. The reason for Chapter 9, Part 4 B is, well, because I wrote so much for Part 4 A that I forgot it was only in the morning of that chapter, So if you will excuse my mistake, this chapter will be dedicated to you, the audience, my fans. I was just going to skip ahead to Part 5, Friday, but I also knew that my fans and my readers were going to get confused and I didn’t want that. So I’m going to stop blabbing and get to it… Enjoy the chapter <3 – XD *~*~*~*~* Modern High Drama In
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    Puppy love

    Chapter 6 Wow, I think that chapter was intense with things unfolding and people becoming acquainted as friends. Plus Billy giving serious thought into whether or not he wants to be friends with David. I love the ending of the chapter, where David hears Billy softly say “Please David... Don’t Stop.” Genius! Remijay <3 (Hugz) Chapter 7 JUST WOW, is all I can say. The fight in the barn and the pressing of bodies, HOT! Anyways, I think after that little fight they had, Billy will be tamer now, I THINK.... Or he might be more nasty who knows, and his dad William, he’s a guy that needs to get his ass KICKED severely! I honestly liked this chapter a lot, thanks for the good read. Remijay <3 (Hugz) Chapter 8 Well it seems that whatever David is trying to teach Billy is working and at home it seems things are still the same, no-one’s the wiser, I think. Anyways, THIS candy girl. What a Slut!!!!! And I’m also glad that Sam respects GAY’S, that’s plus. Remijay <3 (Hugz) Chapter 9 WOW Candice is a TOTAL slut, maybe even a whore, who knows LOL. Anyways, its sad that Sam had to find out that away and what she after was kinda wrong but I do get it. Sam LOVES Billy so hearing that he’s gay tore her up and that’s why she walked. Maybe in the next chapter things will go better, maybe. Remijay <3 (Hugz) Chapter 10 AWWWWW! That’s so.... so sweet. Sam is being a bitch about Billy being gay, I don’t think she’ll be able to talk to him until she figures out some things. And I loved the part where Anne came out into the barn an basically bitched at Candice for being there. That was Priceless. Oh and Julian showing up, damn. That was awesome and the way Billy stood up to his dad. WOW. At the of this chapter, I cant help but to think that David is falling Billy big time. And I wouldn’t be surprised if they do things together, sexual or otherwise. Thanks for the great chapter, Remijay <3 (Hugz) Chapter 11 WHAT THE f**kING HELL!!!! I knew it, I knew it..... WOW! Is all I can say, even more wow at how David’s uncle acts, and the cell phone at the end, PRICELESS! Anyways, it seems as if things are getting better and back to normal, but not with David & Billy, especially after that kiss, oh and the ‘I knew parts.’ I kind figured that Sam had a crush and that Chris plus Walker are gay, but I didn’t think about them being a couple, LOL.... Very nice plot if I don’t say so myself. Remijay <3 (Hugz) Very Fanf**kingTastic Chapter! Chapter 12 Awwww that was a swwweeettt chapter, one that I loved. First Walker is talking now, Sam and David come to an agreement and Billy tells Candice off, also with David & Billy almost kissing on the porch, wow. You rain storms or rain alike is Hot and Sexy... LOL, just wanted to say that. Anyways the chapter ends with Billy holding David, I wonder if they sleep like that through the night? Hmm, just a thought I guess. Remijay <3 (Hugz) Oh and I liked how Billy said ‘I love this guy.’ So touching, I loved it Chapter 13 Wow, the mud pit and convincing Chris that dirt don’t hurt, I liked that. And there came the part about Billy being lost, he wanted a boyfriend to hold hands with and love with, so did David but David knew better than to start things that might lead into trouble. Now onto the happy but sad parts. Billy has tried to get closer to David but every advance he made didn’t work, and then the dance came and Billy believed that Candice changed but really she only slipped him a DATE RAPE DRUG and Viagra, plus dragging him out to the clearing where she more or less tried to get into his pants. That didn’t work and with help of their friends Billy became in the arms of David. Now the part with Sam, if I EVER meet someone like Sam I would be scared shitless to say the least, maybe even piss myself LOL... Anyways, the threats that she told Candice I would believe NO-ONE f**ks with Billy not even her well maybe. The bitching slapping and pulling of the hair WOW! Tom girl much.... After this chapter I cant wait for more, please write some more, Thanks for the f**king amazing read so far.... Remijay <3 (Hugz) Sorry for long Review.... I have question. When are new chapters coming out?
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