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Strong emotions run wild through this chapter. Teddy finally understood that it was a 18 year old that broke his heart and everyone else's. They were just kids. Still wet behind the ears. If I saw a friend go through what Ryder did to Teddy I would strongly advise against it. That being said, I agree with what mom and Teddy said. Love doesn't make sense. It turns us into people we normally aren't. And makes us all look kind of crazy I might add. I do hope that they work out, even if only as friends. At least they have each other to fall back on. Hugs ❤
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I have to say it... I do not care for this Nate person. He came off jealous, and whiny. Nate has no chance with Dr. Haner. Mistakes have been made, and they are slowly coming to light as to why they happened in the first place. Mike seems like a gentleman now. Glad he found his calling... This was a sad chapter. But nonetheless, a awesome one. Hugs ❤
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Wow com. The guy is totally a stalker. For good reason too lol 😂 Anyway, I hope something comes of this boys obsession 😊 maybe they will talk and start something.. Hugs ❤
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Grandma is still right all those years ago. One soul split in two. They found each other. Teddy is going to have a hard road ahead of him. Ryder even more so. Rehabilitation isn't for a weak soul or person. Theodore needs to get his head out his ass and start being a big brother. He isn't doing anything but making Oliver hate him more. As for the dating again? They are botgh still looking for the answers. Even Blake realized that. I'm also very happy that Blake and Liz are still together.
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Damn! LIke really? No body sat down Oli and told him what Ryder did? Thats kind of fucked up if you ask me. The least the parents could of done was tell him. But like everything else, everything fell on Teddy's shoulders. I feel Teddy's pain, and sadness. If you want to call it that. Anyway, i love how open Oli and Teddy are getting. Maybe with him knowing about what happened all those years ago, he could see why his older brother doesnt like this Ryder Sullivan. I sure dont. But hopefully in time that will change... This was a interesting chapter, i will be back for more... <3 Keep'em coming.
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I have no words. This chapter has said it all but at the same time it didn't. There are alot of ways to comment on a chapter like this. I knew it would be hard, down right impossible. Ryder will regret his decision, and Teddy won't let that happen. I hope that Brandon will be there for him now that teddy won't. 😭😢❤
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Omg omg... I'm crying... not grandma. Anyone but grandma. Ryder is going to be so broken. Teddy is going to be his rock for a while. Perfect chapter by the way. I'm glad teddy finally gave Ryder his heart... I'm not looking forward to the next chapter. Lol have to get Kleenex for sure ❤
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I don't know what to say honestly. As I read this chapter I was thinking something seriously happened to Ryder, but as the football game comes everything changes. Teddy is very happy, speechless even, Ryder surprised him. I loath being in a long distance relationship, because there isn't enough time in the day(s) that you spend together. When the time comes again to seperate, the disrepair, sadness, and loneliness, comes back. It truly sucks. My heart literally cried with Teddy. Another amazing chapter keep them coming ❤
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Amazing... hands down one of your best chapters. Ryder is seriously more confident than he was at the beginning of summer. The emotion and energy you feel alone in this chapter, wow. I had to think for a moment when Ryder started to speak aboutt suicide. That concert had something to do with equal rights. The bar fight must have been because of that. And then telling people if they don't like there's fucking door. Priceless! Again amazing chapter. ❤
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He's other stuff is a little dark. With romance, adventure. He is a really great author. He's right up there with Comicality.
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Omg I have tears!!! Such a strong embrace on the word and meaning of love. Ryder and Teddy will be alright. I have faith that they will make it. Liz is correct, don't marry someone because you're scared. Marry them because you can't imagine living without them. Ryder is a ROCK STAR now. Yippy "jumps up and down". As for Teddy, who knows if he's still popular or not. But I don't think he really cares either lol Amazing chapter. ❤ thank you for sharing.
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Omg... my heart weeped when he read that letter. And then what he did after was very emotional. He knows now how much Teddy does love him. And will be there for him always.
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Lol I don't know how many times I have been busted for being high. And a sibling or family member would always threaten to tell. Pish posh, lol hogwash. Rubbish! Anyway, i loved it espeically the uncle comically threatening him! Priceless. Ryder is going to blow up in sales and on stage. And they were really discussing marriage at 18? 18! Wow!!! I'm jealous but scared of what is to come. From enemies to lovers. one being king of crowds, the other being king of high school!
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This chapter is filled with emotion. I've been where Teddy is, and it isn't fun. I don't know how to articulatre into words what this chapter has. But great just doesn't do it lol Anyway, their paths will always be crossed. There no greater thing in the world than love. I hope Teddy can hang on tight. Because Ryder is just going to become more famous. Hugs ❤❤
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The ending of this chapter almost made me cry. Because I have been where they are. It isn't easy nor Finn being away from the person you love... Anyway, I love how the band is growing together. And I also love how bigger names are approaching the band especially Ryder. He's going to make it far. Hugs 😄 another great chapter
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Omg omg omg!!! Ryder is going on tour. On tour! Congratulations to him. Now there is going to be test for them as a band and as a couple. God, I hope they make it. Thanks for the latest 2 chapters. I loved them. Even when they made me late for work lol Hugs ❤❤❤ keep up the great work
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Yay!!! Thank goodness
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I absolutely loved this story. I don't want it to end. But all stories end somewhere. But as for teddy and Ryder they will forever live on. Hopefully together for a VERY long time. Especially in my heart. From how they started out to where they are now. Man time sure does change things. And all the shit they put up with. I'm glad they made it together. Hugs ❤ I loved this story
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I felt the emotion for this chapter. I never did like Hilary Clinton but she would have been a better President than the quack that we have now. Anyway, awesome chapter. And more importantly awesome Book! I cant wait for more. I absolutely loved this book, the characters are moving on to better things, but the squad is still together. Cj and Owen are boyfriends, pretty much fiances. The fathers are very supportive of Cj and what he has done so far in his life. I mean, i wish i had the opportunities that Cj has LOL what a lucky fortunate young adult! My best, with love Remijay <3
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I love this story. I felt really connected to the characters. And around the game. I didn't get into watching football until high school. I Hope there will be a second part to this story. It can only get better. I also loved the ending!!! 😘 Thanks again for sharing.
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why does jake have to be so rude? i understand what he is going through. Not quite being in his place but close. Anyway. the last 4 chapters are wonderful. i do have hope that Jake will fall in love with Klaus. And Klaus can maybe take him to be the one... I love these chapters and are itching for more... Thank you sharing !
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Wow! Just wow! The emotions and the imaginary that you put into your work was amazing. But there is some truth to what the guy was saying. In some towns, and cities. Black people are frowned upon. Dont ask me why, i was never raised that way. I dont see it, as others would say. Anyway, it's a sad truth. Is there going to be more to this story or is this just a one chapter thing? Great work again. Loved it!
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beautiful chapter. Emotional. But this chapter ended on 2 good notes. Jesse and Stephan chatted, Devan and his Aunty chatted. Both were good in nature. I liked it this chapter alot. Waiting for more. thank you for sharing.
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Thank you for the comment @Benji. He will most likely need therapy, probably in the coming book. *Hint hint* When Devon was in the hospital they bonded, like brothers are supposed to. His mother ignorance, i dont know if she even knows. LOL We all know long distance distance relationships dont work out. But for the few that have tried it and succeeded, congrats. But i wasnt one of the lucky ones. They all have their own reasons to be angry and upset. This chapter was very hard to write. My struggle right now is the mother's piece. (Spoiler Alert) Cindy has her own chapter coming soon. Maybe that will shine some light on you're questions. Thank you again for the comment @Benji
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Thank you for the kind words. I personally love Comsie's works. He has said multiples times that i am his successor. LOL I'm glad you are coming to terms with what you are. It takes alot of effort and time to come to terms with. I'm glad we as "Authors" can inspire people. I think that is part of the reason why we write. We want to the world to hear us, learn from us, or be better than us. I'm glad that i have in some way helped you. That means alot. Hugs! <3
