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Remijay

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  1. Remijay

    Chapter 1

    Wow! Just wow. I really like the first chapter. I want to see more. This story reminds me of a few that I have read over the years. But it's intriguing to say the least. I wonder it is to come... and I also wonder what this man wants to do with him now.
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    Chapter 14

    Chapter 14 It’s a wonder How do you put into words how you feel towards someone? Like seriously? I don’t think there is enough words in the English dictionary to string together to make a statement that another would totally know and understand. Am I making any sort of sense? I guess not, shaking my head, I look towards my… I mean Jason’s alarm clock and see that it’s way past the time of going to sleep. If you’re asking yourself why am I at Jason, please go b
  3. Here is goes, Devon leaves Colorado. On to new and better things. Personally I don’t know how I feel about this chapter. I’m excited but worried at the same time. This chapter is going to be very hard to read and write. All of emotions are going to be flying around… Hang on tight and hope you last! Chapter 9 Goodbye for now P This is it… The last hours that I will be here. My boyfriend and I just made love for the first time, and let me tell you. I can st
  4. Remijay

    Chapter 16

    Things are certainly heating up lol I hope nothing bad happens in the next chapter. Very good chapter overall. Will be looking for an update.
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    Chapter 10

    This is story is well written. I love it. From the beginning you had me enchanted. LOL so to speak. Anyway, this chapter said everything this story is about. From anger and turmoil. To happiness. This is story is something else. I would have never thought Ryan would have the feelings that he portrayed in the last chapter. And now with Liam. God, this is story is like a soap opera in a way LOL i love it! Keep'em coming. Hugs!
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    Chapter Fourteen

    Such a cute chapter. Really! I'm glad to see that Ryan and Chris have come to a agreement. They don't hate each other but are falling for each other instead. I wonder what their fathers would say hahaha 🤣🤣🤣
  7. Remijay

    Reality Check

    Very strong chapter. Of course I loved it! Teddy is going to have to start doing what he says. As for Ryder, at least he finally told Teddy about his parents. And why he's angry and depressed. Hugs!
  8. Thank you for commenting. Cindy will answer the questions that are pressing. Devon had other things on his mind at the moment. ❤️😉
  9. Thanks Benji. I think it was the scene before the scene. Anyway, Devon is going to have to some tough times ahead of him. As for the nurse coming in. They just wanted to make sure everything was alright. I'm glad you liked the good bye scene. Thank you again for commenting ❤️😉
  10. Thank you for the comment. But I think it will be a min before she's ready or Devon.
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    Chapter 13

    Chapter 13 Over the next few days things have settled down. Only one of my parents is talking to me, my siblings found out about what happened and that I’m gay. So things with them have been estranged to say the least, other than the occasional slur of words that my sister decides to throw my way…things have been okay for the most part. Courtney is still talking to me, but as for Jason, he hasn’t really said much to me since Monday. I know that I pissed him off but
  12. Chapter 8 Out with the old; In with the New N Thursday night turned into Friday morning. My body just couldn’t let me sleep for once? I guess you can take the person out of the situation but it will continue to live in fear. My brain just wouldn’t stop going, it thought up scenario after scenario. Or what if this happens? How will you survive that? And if that happens, how are you going to cope with the repercussion? Ugh, I really do hate my brain sometimes.
  13. Remijay

    November 1st

    i love this story. It's cute and sweet. Totally captured me as a reader by paragraph 2 lol Is there going to be more of this story or is this it?
  14. Remijay

    Chapter 13

    It's going to take some time before Devon's family comes to the real problem. That elephant in the room is huge LMAO. As for Stephan finally standing up to Chris. Good job on his part. I'm just glad he stopped after being told twice. I don't know Stephan would have reacted otherwise.
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    Chapter 12

    I do agree completely with what both of you have said. Aiden will have to over come alot in his life. As for his father, i dont really know what is going on in his life. I usually dont write about the father or mother (s). However, with this story i just might. To shine light on some things. Remember Aiden's dad is a CEO of a company. So with that comes image problems, or adultery, etc. Not saying that it's an excuse because its not. **My parents raised me to be who i wanted to be. Not something that they wanted. Granted, the road i have taken has been very bumpy and mis-guided. My father didnt accept me for being gay, it took five years for him to come around. And with my education, he was disappointed in me for dropping out. But i eventually graduated from school and went to college. Granted i dont have a degree. But its the effort that counts. Thanks for the great comments, there will be ALOT more to come. I'm thinking of making this story into a series. From 16 to 18...
  16. Remijay

    Chapter 12

    Thanks I hope you'll keep reading after the next few chapters. Things are about to turn. Thank you again for commenting.
  17. Remijay

    Chapter 7

    Thanks for the kind words. She will answer Devon's questions soon in the coming chapters.
  18. Remijay

    Chapter 7

    Chapter 7 L “Devon you can’t just shut them out, you’ll be leaving here soon. The doctors have been monitoring you and they think by Friday you’ll be well enough to travel back with them. Now I don’t want you to leave, but darling, there is nothing here for you, except us.” Tammy says from beside me, she looks to Trent for support but he just looks like he wants to break down and cry. He has this look that it’s killing him being here, his eyes are mis
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    Chapter 12

    Chapter 12 How do you explain to someone what you have been thinking or even feeling? How can you articulate into words to explain the feelings? Feelings are complex, confusing, a total mind fuck, if you will. I’m beginning to think that people in general have no idea how to express their feelings, except maybe in anger. Because in all honesty as I’m walking towards my class, my final class for today I couldn’t get Sasha out of my head. At lunch today, I couldn’t
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    All for One

    If I were Teddy's boyfriend, I would punch him in the mouth and then kiss him. Popularity be damned. Friends stick up for another. Just like Teddy said they had to do some dirty shit to get to where they are today. The 4 most popular kids in high school. That comes with a price... I just hope Teddy learns to stand up for Ryder. Because if he doesn't this thing that they have won't last. And who knows. Blake or Mike might just do what they did to "Kyle"... Great chapter btw. I really liked it.
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    Walls

    In all honesty I loved this series. Start from the beginning and work your way forward. It's a very touching and loving story. It's not typical or boring. This author draws you in and you stay captivated until the end. And then you scream for more... He is by far one of my favourite authors. And I can't wait for the new book Georgetown to come out... Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece of work.
  22. Remijay

    Chapter 6

    i love this comment. It's awesome. Thank you for taking the time to reach out. I do believe it was either Tammy and Trent or Josh and Jeff that called one another before. Josh has always cared about what Devon was doing or how he was. I dont know about their mother though, it will come to light sooner rather than later. Especially now that Devon is required to move. As for the father, well i have some things in the works. I can't really explain it here.
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    What Could Be

    I hope so. They seem like a very good fit. However, they do seem to overthink everything. Ryder does most of the time (hah). Teddy he just doesn't know alot about Ryder yet. And why he does and thinks like he does.
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    What Could Be

    Another deep chapter. I loved it. Liz put the pieces together more than Blake could ever try to. What she said about Teddy is so true. It's scary to think about these things. And with Ryder going on tour and then possibly another tour after that, and even more probably after that. He's going to be way too busy for Teddy. But I hope that it won't break them up. Or push them apart. They both need each other to stay grounded most times. Hugs thanks for the great read?
  25. Remijay

    The Black Sheep

    I will agree to disagree. I'm not going to start an argument in one my favorite authors stories. Thank you for you input.
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