AnytaSunday

Well, I use husband (or with people I know well--hubby ) Before that: fiance Before that: boyfriend (or my guy ) To him: sweetie, gorgeous, sexy, etc...the list goes on and on--I'm sure I've made up some too, hehe, depends on my mood. Though, most often I use his name. But I indirectly call him papa all the time at the moment as that's how I refer to him around our son. (Errm, yes, I may have slipped on the indirectly part on occasion parent brain = foggy sometimes. )

Okay, question are places like Harvest Moon for real? Or did you make up those names? Neeways, poor Jason that he feels so worried about letting their rel. status slip. It just makes me mad at this world sometimes, that there are people in it who make other's feel afraid of being themselves. I liked those lyrics of the Rise Against song someone posted here--on the irony of this being the land of the free,but not being free to be who they are. Anyway, that song popped into mind while reading. Still, at the same time there's such a sweetness to these two, you just gotta love 'em. and hehe.

hehe, fun 1) I'd take whatever appliance has my most updated work changes 2) I'd take my wallet--because all those cards and stuff would be a pain to cancel, renew etc 3) And the nook. Hey, my books are on there. Yeah, selfish much (but all our important kid stuff is in photos--that's online and is saved where my work is saved)

It's just so sad. So, so, so sad. The song makes me cry. They were babies, toddlers, little kids, teens, they laughed, they cried. I wish they'd had more support. More love. Told they were beautiful. Good song--should be heard by everyone.

Ohhh yeeah! See the responses, Sara? People really like the story! Dare is definitely a fun read. So, now you know you CAN pull off different types of stories. So, guess it will be interesting what you come up with next.

Hey John, I love the mystery in this story--it was so much fun to read. I have to agree with Andy, when I first read this, I thought it was Sean too. LOL. I like being surprised though. I also agree that a short story, or something with Sean in it would be interesting too. Hey.. ohhh, I got an idea... Gonna PM you...

LOL-- It's totally interesting to me to read people's responses to thing. I keep hoping to read that there are others out there like me, who are totally for Trev. But damn, I might be alone in this, huh? Well, so long as the guy is in the novel, I suppose (and he gets his own interesting side story, Mmmmm... *minds wanders.) hehe. Cool Beginnings.

For the first time the notification thingy worked! Good job I unliked and liked again! Okay Andy, a couple of things. 1) Gawd do I feel you about having so many stories in mind and wanting to write them all. One by one does it, though, and you have been attempting a LOT in the last few months. Say, now that a few of your stories are almost sorted, why not take a week or so to feel out what story appeals most to YOU to write. 2) This sort of continues from the above--you mention that there are types of stories that readers like to read and how that differs from what you REALLY WANT to write. So, simple equation buddy ol' pal. 1 + 1. Why not create a story in the world you want, with the plot you want AND have a romance/angst story running through it? Either as a main story line or as a strong second story line? 3) Yes I.S is very good. I totally get you when you say it inspires you to write, and that is a mark of a good story--what exactly about it do you like so much? That it's deep? That the stakes are very high? Is it the feelings you get when reading it? Because, in my opinion, no matter the genre there is room to add depth, stakes and push for strong emotions. And, Andy, you can handle a challenge. 4) Antho stories are fun reads--I do try to read them, but honestly, I love a novel--there's more 'space' to really get to know and fall in love with characters. When I search for stories to read, I generally go for novel/novella sized ones. There might be others that do that too. I do understand it was a lot of work--but if you DO write the novel to this, this story was good for yourself in terms of background and getting to know your characters--and possibly what this other story could be. 5) Oh my Gawd. You and Mike are almost papas!!! Ekkk! How cool. (Enjoy last months of freedom. *ominous music) totally kiddin' ya. Sorta. hahahahahaha. 6) -- 'cause you're cool.

Hey, Happy Birthday. Hope you have a lovely one.

Hello again, Mark Another good chapter. You know, I was a little 'meh' before reading this chapter after reading the other review here, because I thought this was probably too early in the story for Ryan and Michael to go all the way, but then I read it and it was really refreshing the 'realness' with how you showed it. It was awkward and not hot and smooth, but rather like the first time. So kudos there. Oh no, and now another leader is dead. Whodunnit? lol, I know we've surely been introduced to who the killer is already, but I have no suspicions really--well, nothing I can base any fact on anyway (only my imagination spinning ideas of who and why). I guess it's too early to tell. Thanks for the read, Anyta P.S--did you put your cover title in your discussion thread? It's soooo cool.

There is something unbelievably, and deliciously sneaky about Jason in that last scene. How beautifully manipulative he is. I have to say, if I were in Peter's shoes, I'd worry about how well he can lie and twist people's thinking to get his way. Tut-tut-tut. Still, gotta love him. Another nice chappy, hehe, actually, I was reading this when my chatbox dinged. How cool is it that I get to chat with the author? Me = Lucky one.

You, Frank, know how to skillfully torture your audience with your absolutely devilish use of suspense. Everything works up so nicely to the first hot part in the sun (Gawd, yes-yes I DO love sunscreen, LOL), we think things are progressing and then BAM, you twist us back to their beginning state. Then it heats up again, then again WHAM BAM coldness once more. For these guys it seems to be one-and-one-eighth steps forward, and one back. At least there's some progress! Loving the story, and I am very curious when Haze is going to open up more emotionally, how and when he will start showing more of the 'real' him in public too--and accept who he is and not hate himself for it. I want him to stop practically ignoring Blake whenever others are around. I want to know how being physical with Haze affects Blake in terms of his anxiety over the way he looks. I want there to be some sort of, idk, understanding all around between these two boys. Also, it lurks in my mind--what is up with the mother? And the Dad? There's just sooo much mystery here and I want it all answered (and now, haha--no, I will be patient). Thanks for the read!!!

Jason is a crafty and charming guy. The thought processes and his ploys to score time with Peter make me laugh, and at the same time there's something quite sad about it--that he feels he has to do this. But at this point, with such a romantic chapter, I prefer to look on the crafty-is-cool side of this. Disregarding the money issues, Peter is quite the confident guy. Definitely an attractive trait (although we could possibly stop at he has a motorcycle to know he's pretty darn cool). Nice chappy. Will read more tomorrow!

I know I've said this over and over again, but your knack for dialogue stuns me. It's so good and real--it really makes your characters come alive. It just flows--like the bit where him and Darryl churn out names. hehe. Darryl is great too--I imagine he has some stories, eh! Okay, lol, read some of the reviews above and I just wanted to add a hehe. Kay, now need to do dinner. Later.

I love writing first kisses, but even better is reading them--and this one is such an endearing moment. Cute and with a nice trace of humor to it--it really fits Jason and Peter. It lets us see the possibility of 'them' as a couple. I like how open and direct Peter was here, and I agree with him, though it's not lightly done, but to be happy being yourself and taking a chance is vital. And I love it when Jase says this part: That is so romantic. And then the texting--hehehe, I wore a smile throughout. Thanks for that!

Of Mice and Men... Chapter titles are great! Ahhhh, this inner turmoil that Jason goes through about how to tell Peter he was also interested, but being nervous about it--nicely written. I could feel it, and once again your characters are capturing my heart. It makes me a little sad somehow, though, already knowing what happens to them both--especially since they have no idea. I think as I read on, I'll be mentally shouting at them to watch out! *sigh, if only that would help. But I believe there wouldn't be much story then, huh.

LOL--I really, um, got this: How many times have I ended up saying something that lame? (a lot) How many times has there been this awkward, fuzzled cough or just plain silence, or quick change of topic? (just as many) In my opinion, it makes Peter and stand-up guy to laugh anyway. Saves face and it's simply a nice thing to do. I mean, how much does a laugh cost, huh? Hmmm, again, even this early in the story you foreshadow the major points of conflict that make up this story. Actually, multiple times--Peter sort of jokes about it at this stage--but it's enough to get a sense of that meaning more to him... Good stuff. Oh, and the tension between them--Spot On. Really, really good.

I love the opening sequence here, I get such a good visual of the game, and right from the get-go I feel anticipation. This is really helped by the way you show Jason's frustration at the three minutes of added time. I mean, jeez, that can seem forever so close to bagging a game. Hmmm, it's funny, going through this again, I notice things I didn't pay particular attention to before, but which is really awesome writing--like mentioning Jordan right at the beginning. Subtelty like that goes a long way to giving a story 'ompf'. Oh, yeah, and this story has it in SPADES (okay, almost wrote Spandex there, haha, I'm typing in the dark ) Yeah, I can't believe how few reviews I have for this story here, hmmm, maybe some got messed up with the change over to the new system. Well, goodie for me (and you hopefully) I get to go through it again. And leave behind little subsequent thoughts... Okay, till I get to the next chappy...

HEY, it's your birthday???!!! Well, I caught on late. Stu, you'd better have a kick ass birthday! Party hard and have FUN. (I really hope those cakes Frosty sent above are FILLED with chocolate inside(and no fruit, lol) hehe).

At the end of this chapter, when Michael says the part about the coin landing on heads and Ryan being safe--all I could think was what if the sword represented Mike. I'm worried for these two. But think they're both great.

Another well done chapter. I read both five and six on the iPod today, enjoying myself loads. I'll post on your thread, in the hopes it gets more attention!

No, no. Life AIN'T over, it's just beginning. Really, Truly, Honestly. Kids are miracles. But it's something that you'll truly appreciate only when you have your own little one with you. Not that this counts for anything, but I waited until I gave birth before finding out the sex of my baby, so I had uni colors, yellow, green, blue for the baby room. Now, my hub's parents wished and thought it would be a girl, so they kept sending us pink stuff. (Yeah, so my boy wore quite a lot of pink, lol) Anyway, just wanted to say, you'll probably be given HEAPS of pink things. So, green and yellow would make a refreshing change. Happy knot-tying too!

Yay, I got to another chapter. I can't say how much I'm enjoying this story. Well paced, great suspense, LOVE the mystery big time, and it has just the right amount of splash of romance too. This is gonna be a hit, I'm sure. Thanks soooo much for writing and posting here. I will try to get to the next chapters soon. Just got a long list of 'to dos',

This chapter is so sad and poetic. I really enjoyed reading this. I only hope there's some more light to come for Coop and Mich in the near future. Thanks John!

Thanks so much for reading it!