Sometimes you want to smack adults for how stupid they can get. Sometimes I think children have more common sense because they havent been exposed to much of the evil in the world (I am NOT referring to Ash as a kid by the way).
Ash has gone through so much and yet people still think they know what's best for him.
Even more glad I don't have to wait a week! Great chapter
that was an intense and powerful chapter. Lots of emotion flying around.
Truly wonderful story!
(I'm glad it's complete id hate to have to wait a week! )
Thanks Wayne! Yeah this one and the next chapter are some of the longest chapters ive written, only the Owen chapter was longer than the next one lol. Im glad it seems a relief, it was supposed to be a break from the threat of war The break doesnt last long though hehe Thanks for reading Wayne
sounds good to me, it was a good way to get to know each other and chat the last time we did that (albeit the restaurant was practically empty but anyway! )
things just go from difficult to down right 'well this is an awful pickle I must say' lol
in one way im glad Ash stood up to his father and his dad is such a prick
I so hope that they can work through this. I see plenty more Nephy angst and blockades for them still!
Do I even have to say it was a great chapter?
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Josh really is in a tight spot. Several conflicting people and perceptions going on and everything is tangled up worse than a pair of iPod headphones!
The fact that Ash is legal, but it being frowned upon makes for another interesting piece of the puzzle.
Gonna keep on reading through this! love it!
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Well at least Jake has a little more compassion (only just) compared to Joel.
Poor Ash, this is typical nephy, half killing people
Really enjoying the story so far! Thanks for finding this again Nephy
DAN
It wasn’t long after settling into the Tower on Galwrock that Matt said Christmas was only a few weeks away and I was shocked it had come around so quick.
However, the chance to see Sam and Gary made me beam and Matt could sense it too. He wanted to visit his family I could tell. And Matt had invited me to his house for Christmas and Matt’s parents wouldn’t hear any of my protests about intruding.
Stepping through the portal in the Tower back to Earth for the first time I notic
I agree with rep become irrelevant after you have hundreds of rep points. Reviews are what make me want to continue writing, if I can see a reader has taken the time to tell me in writing how they like/dislike this or that about my story then I feel more inclined to want to put more out there for them to read.
I do think repping people has become the easy option. Please review people, it's an author's favourite type of feedback! If not on the main review pages via a pm
So Ryan inadvertantly likes the older man
Nice chapter Andy, enjoying how this story is panning out and I'm a whore for anything fantasy or sci fi hehe so good job with that too (that whore comment is in relation to stories nothing else )
Yay there was no cliffhanger! Good!
This was a really good chapter to read and it's good Blake and Haze have got some things out in the open. I hope this is the breakthrough we've been waiting for, though we still don't know much about what has happened with Haze, not the dive as in how he got to be introverted in the first place.
Great chapter! A for no cliffie and a for such a great chapter
cia.... evil woman.
Well I would always prefer a complete story but I read them if they're 'in progress' as long as I know the writer will post semi frequently as in once every two-three weeks at least lol.
That is quite hypocritial of me seeing as though how I post gets quite random, depending on how much I've managed to write and get edited.
But yeah, I've got used to 'in progress' stories and seeing as though the majority of stories are 'in progress' stories it helps
If anyone is ineligble to wear a halo it's you Nephy fallen angel or no lol
I bet you are, lulling us into a false sense of security is a very Nephylike thing to do hehehe
Loving the story Nephy and I just love Ace and Haze to bits
If I had the capacity to help my parents in old age then I would. They gave me every opportunity they could in order to succeed now, so if I can I woud certaintly give something back.
I'd also be more inclined to help them because they are very careful with money and mum keeps a tight hold on the finances
Hey Jay, nice to meet you and welcome to GA, I hope you have enjoyed your time here already
That's really cool having a published book, I hope the stories here impress you too