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wow poor Charlie, fate can be cruel and it dealt Charlie a crap hand. Looking forward to chapter 3

Wow, poor Charlie, I can relate to him a lot though, I know what that shyness is like. And like the others have said that wasnt really fair of Tina and if she had felt like that for a while she should have brought it up earlier. Nice start Wayne, gonna keep reading to see what unravels

At least it was a happy ending Jerry just has to bound into misfortune, he's like a little kid really, clumsy but always wanting to explore and try new things. Really enjoyed this Renee!

wow, and he's only ten! what a great poem from a ten year old! give him a hug off me like KC said very grown up and deep. Let's hope he writes some fiction in the future just like his mum!

HAPPY BIRTHDAY VIC!!! I second Andy's suggestion, go on have something naughty, ( I mean food of course )

Tap did a runner! wonder what Tiaan's reaction will be! And also how will they cross paths again? Tap wont return to that bar anymore to make sure he doesnt bump into Tiaan. Both characters are still blindingly stubborn. But Tiaan is a bit of a dick with his past behaviour, although slight flashes of tenderness come through. Not enough for me to stop being annoyed by him! Great chapter!

.... err.....err....quite speechless after that chapter ( in a good way! hehe) Like the others have said it was so erotic and i could feel that nervous energy Blake was feeling it was incredible. err my terrible reviewing skills coupled with my speechlessness means this is all I can say right now! Oh apart from this.... 'Hurry up with another chapter!' hehe :hug: That chapter is deserving of several hugs

Thanks Wayne, yeah you don't get to warm to Jade much but you can see how much her death affects Matt. Matt does change but that is because of Jade's sudden death. If you caught on at the end Matt is still there just behind this violent persona. Hopefully Dan will save him. Sadly you'll have a wait now. But I hope it will be worth it lol Thanks for reading

Ok, to all of you who continue to read Seeing Double. The story is going on hold. I've noticed that the story really isnt getting much feedback recently and that may be in part because of how erratically I post chapters. As a result I have decided to put the story on hold and finish the story before putting anymore chapters up on GA. Sorry for doing this but it also means I can write without the pressure of having to get a chapter out weekly. Rest assured the story will get finished, it's a story I originally set out to write for myself and still is. To all you fans may I ask for your patience and that I will post once SD is finished. Thanks.

hey everyone a new chapter of Seeing Double is now out, I must warn you it's a violent chapter. Chapter 18 I'd love to know what you think of it

DAN “Merry Christmas!!! Wake up pair of lazy arses!” Jade shouted in our room giving rise to mumbled curses and groans from me and Matt. The rune having worn off after we fell asleep. “Shut up Jade! We’ll be there in a minute.” Matt grumbled before turning in my arms to face me. “Gosh, I almost forgot how good it feels to wake up in your arms.” He smiled dreamily. I blushed before kissing him. “Well now you’ve remembered.” I grinned. We

Aww no need to be sorry Rush, thank you for the birthday message omg I laughed so much at this message Dragon ....I'm not turning the offer down though... Thanks Cia!

Thank you everyone for your replies! 's to all

I vote Dion too! We have yet to see more of Miles's reaction though

wow Coop really is battling against himself. There is a glimmer of light at the end of the chapter but I don't know what Coop's going to do. His decisions are unpredictable because of the war between his heart and his head. Great writing John (now you know why you're promising! )

I thought that was a really good clip to watch, and I've also found some of the other ones they have done that are on Youtube too. I think it's good we can see these people in everyday life that will stand up for gay couples, teens, parents etc. This reminds me somewhat of an experiment that a programme in the UK did called the Tonight programme and a gay couple walked down the high street of a northern city, Hull I believe, and al they got was homophobic slurs. Good on those people in the diner for being so open minded (except that guy who gave the waitress a thumbs up ) (oh and I also agree with Lacey, that guy was nice )

:D WELL DONE JIAN!! :D (About bloody time too)

you had to leave it there didn't you... you are one big horrible tease Love the ending actually, poses loads of questions! great story frosty

HAPPY BIRTHDAY ERIC!!!!!!!! :D :D

Wow such great comments! Glad to know the chapter was worth making you wait hehe. As I sort of said in the reply to your review, my aim was to remind everyone of who Matt and Dan are, which are two English boys, who met unsuspectingly at university and came together. Matt's situation made the whole relationship that much more interesting but deep down they still have the same doubts and thoughts as every other couple. Like the present buying I think in this chapter they are both glad just to still be with each other after everything that has happened so far. And sorry for not replying to your comment on what you think might happen I forget to check here regularly, *makes mental note* hehe. Hmm, as I replied to your review, this chapter was mostly a calm before the storm chapter and that's all I'm going to say hehehe An even better question might be will Dan and Matt still be with each other at the end of the story? Thankfully the next chapter is fully written and is with my editor so I will be able to post it much sooner than the gap between the last chapter and this one! Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment fmd, really really appreciate it!

Thanks fmd! I'm glad that this chapter showed that, strip back all that has gone on during their time on Galwrock, there still lies two ordinary people, with ordinary fears and worries over what each would like for Christmas It is a sort of calm before the storm chapter this one I will allow you to know.. make of that what you will And yes wouldnt we all love a Rune of Silence Lovely review fmd and thanks for reading!

Well I read the first chapter of this to relax me before my exam and then I couldnt stop reading it once I got back! I agree with Phana it was truly an excellent story, very vivid and a gorgeous ending. Here's another hug because you are just that special Nephy

YAY! A very nice ending! And we get to decide for ourselves what happened to them after that Great story Nephy really really wonderful!

wow didn't expect that off Mr Leonard aka Ray! I'm glad Ash's father has seen sense glad he peeled back his eyelids and woke up to the fact it doesnt matter what gender you are or what gender you fall for, it's still love. Such a lovely...well lovely doesnt cut it really but you know what I mean A hug for each chapter

Soft all over means I can hug you more Nephy! And go go Josh! hehe