Oh come on we've got to wait how long for the next chapter?!
There certainly are questions to be answered, I think off the top my head you've covered what I want answered as well (although some of the cannier peeps on here will do a better job of asking q's)
I really like this story and can''t wait for the next chapter
I really liked this chapter Anyta
I like the way Rune told Scott exactly what he needed. And the lack of action will make any we see later on all the sweeter
Scott's mum seems to need more help than she is getting.
Their behaviour once they finally admit to each other they like each other is very cute and it was almost like they were kids again with the constant want to hold hands
Look forward to more
In relation to the translations during a story Anyta, personally I dont mind and I would skip sometimes in my own stories if it needed to. Sometimes a story just doesnt follow day to day. As long as the reader as a brief outline of the gap then I don't think it will confusing or broken. (Just my thoughts)
aww Phana you're making me blush
I didnt say she was on my christmas card list I just appreciated that she didnt want to go through with it in the end (she's still a bitch though )
And to the tennis analogy. Kelly and Tim would make an excellent doubles team
I almost feel sorry for Anya after this chapter, she didnt really want to go through with all this and she gets more than a slap in the face in the end!
Better her than Jayden though!
Firstly a very warm welcome to GA I hope you have a great time here.
To access the chatroom and several other places (that ive forgotten!) you have to made 5 posts or more
Don't worry about the mistakes no one's going judge you
Once again welcome
Well well well I wasnt expecting that at the end!
Very nicely done, i really enjoyed the fact that Scott and Rune managed to spend a day together that didnt revolve them arguing.
Chance of a happy together? I hope so
Although I would love Scott to just drop everything and make a thing of it with Rune, I can see Scott getting really confused and it will take him a while to come around.
I hope they do get together but with the way things are who knows! (except maybe you Anyta)
Dont hide the jokes by my account
Everyone is a good laugh here as well as being here if you need them
you can ask anyone and they will try to help you as much as poss
(watch Nephy, she might take you back to her lair...)
..."JK Nephy Pleaase..."
Well...first Nephy...then you Anyta! What is it with my fav authors and making me tear up lately!
I thought this was such a wonderful chapter the roles have truly been reversed now as Scott cannot fathom his true feelings or sort himself out . And to leave Rune standing there...
Bloody brilliant
welcome Curti hope you have an excellent time here on GA.
You've certainly come to the right place!
Lots to read by great authors and everyone will give honest and kind advice about your story
Welcome once again
:o :o
Nephy for the first time in a long while I cried at the end of this chapter. That was incredible. Moving, shocking, Kelly needs seven bells of shit kicked out of her!
:mace: ( thats for Kelly not you!)
massive for how this chapter affected me
OMG what a chapter Anyta!
That was intense, with both characters expressing long repressed thoughts and feelings. That was a horrible twist of fate with the boysenberry juice!
And oh yes there is enough to keep me hooked, especially with Scott just walking about.
Keep it coming