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Soppy Romance FTW So happy for you both, you make a wonderful couple

How about tomorrow? Or is that too far away? Honestly this story is delightful, Rune is being a bit of pillock at the moment lets hope we get an explanation soon

Sounds as though you dont know yourself what is going to happen (Although that's rich coming from me when it comes to my story )

Grrrrr you cheeky teaser This is gripping we are ravenous here we need more!

Hey Armaan good to meet you Have an excellent time here...or else! (JK ) Seriously have a blast on here

(Belatedly ) Happy Birthday Paya

You had better explore their relationship mister! I love this story for me it is only just beginning. Please write more?

HAVE A GREAT BIRTHDAY CHASE!

You're gonna love it here Kavrik It is a wonderful place

I might...I might not! :P

You're cute

Congratulations Krista may the rest of your days together be happy and full of light

What an ace trial!

Oooh this sounds interesting, I'd like to see more definitely

Excellent choice Dargon (*drools* over Jin Kazama)

Happy Birthday Cam, many happy returns :D

I really enjoyed this poem it is full of meaning and full of thoughts that we as the reader can relate to instantly whether ourselves or looking at other people. Very well done

I wouldn't say it was an unfair advantage. In the natural world plants and animals have their niches into which they fit and they are suited to living within a particular niche well, whereas others not so well. And it is sort of the same here, people that have been gifted with physical advantages may want to use them and therefore go into sports etc. Whereas those who are more academic will prefer to use that ability.

I concur with Benji that that was the most evil cliffhanger I have read! Arghhh need more! That was an awesome with so much happening and the tragedy at the end. There are many different directions that this story could be going so I'm not even going to try and guess what's going to happen. I will lie back and flow with the next chapter Wonderful Anyta please keep going with it

aww always a loveable comment from a lovable person phana

Thank you both I never know what to expect when I put my poems up so :D

Hey guys and girls Its already posted in efiction but here it is anyway My 3rd poem which is called Salvation Through the whispers of the trees I hear your name, As the rain falls I see your tear streaked face, looking at me through the abyss. Pain etched onto skin, I reach out. My tears match the rhythm of your own, my hand slips through Your light still shines in my mind, my heart, banishing the creeping shadows. Our cries ripple the void beyond, the barriers between us we will shatter My breath, my heart, my mind, my soul, my love Are all shared with you, until damnation or salvation I will be with you.

Can you get any better at teasing Nephy? yes it is a good job I like it, otherwise I would be whining for more (of the story) all the time But we love you as you are Nephy and may you never change

Hey NightOwl, I will now apologise for not getting on this thread earlier The story...love it... (No that's not all I'm writing ) I love the plot line as it has a mix of traditional settings but with the twist of seeing life through people who cannot use all five senses. Reading about how Zeek manages to retain a degree of independence is really interesting. The ways all the characters navigate around the disabilities of Lou and Zeek is great especially the word formation on Zeek's arm. The whole story is really easy to pick up and read (you made me stay up till 2am to finish the last chapter you posted once ) I am really looking forward to seeing what happens from here, and the news that Zeek has a donor is exciting. Thank you for posting a great story.

WOW what a bizarre thread this could be my second home ! I've finished your story Nephy and...well... I'm afraid I can't find anything bad to say! :P I loved the interaction and tenderness that flowed through the boys and into the story, the trials and tribulations were all worth while in the end. ( But you do like leave us sodding cliffhangers all the time) But then again I love being teased