Agaith

It looks really exciting. I just hope that with the split they can be the closest films to the book. By splitting it they cant make excuses!

Hmm, well ive lived in a town all my life so i got to know concrete well! But if we go anywhere and there is greenery it is very welcome change. Like our Scotland holiday last year

Not intentionally! Just commenting on why I feel that way.

I can only go by what ive read and so far all that ive read have incorporated the sex scenes in a way that allows the reader to share the emotion that has been either building or been flowing throughout the story. So good job! When i first came across this site it wasnt because i was looking for stories with those scenes in it, it was because i wanted to get an idea of the emotion and issues faced and brought up by the authors here. There are plenty of ways to come across sex on the net and elsewhere but to be able to attach emotion to the physical act is what sets stories apart.

I can normally be somewhere in between, but for me it can also depend on the genre or setting. For example I like fantasy writing so i like the writer to convey in detail the world they are trying to build so i can picture clearly the scene. In more modern settings like urban areas or schools, we know what these involve so very little detail is needed. In relation to characters, I would give some details but respect the fact that readers can imagine for themselves via a short description what the character looks like. Even with a long description there would be variation im sure between the images in different reader's eyes. I suppose, personally, that I have an image in my eyes and I want to show the reader exactly what i can see. (But then a re-read and the backspace button comes with a vengence!) When writing I can describe and describe and describe...then come back later and hate what ive written. Its all about balance Ramble over

Well due to the wonders of inheritance it looks like ive developed my dads development of hair! I do like a bit of hair though, feels more natural to me (but thats because ive got enough)

Um, hi everyone this is Agaith nice to be part of the site now!