Andrew Q Gordon

You are something else. You new name is Dr. Evil. Yup. And your a tricky little dickens to boot. You figured everyone would suspect it was Cameron, Scott was hiding, but it's some dude named Andrew [bTW all Andrew's I know are TROUBLE]. Glad I didn't bother trying to predict this one.

haha so you threw an ex into the mix eh? So they all want Charles in Charge eh? Sounds like material for a sit-com . . . oh wait, they did that already Despite all the road blocks you set for Charlie a part of me thinks things are working out a tad to easily for him - which of course means evil Wayne is about to toss another monkey wrench into things Evil man, evil evil man.

You are an evil man, Wayne. Evil, evil, evil. You couldn't, just couldn't let the boy have one nice day without doing something to muck it up. Tsk, tsk, tsk. Remind me to vote for someone else when they're electing God.

HAPPY BIRTHDAY MOMMA!!!!! Do something fun, do something great, do something that when you see the pictures, you are going to hate! Much love and a big kiss from Baby Q!

Boy Chuck is a fast learner isn't he, from straight boy to full on, I wanna get it in, in about a month - whew. One thing, if Scott is this hunka hunka burning love with these massive shoulders and legs, how'd he hurt his back pickin up little Chuck? Seems awful fishy to me, like he was trying to get a chance to stay over. But that's just me -

Walbaum's? Not King Kullen? Grandma LOVED Walbaum's but I haven't heard that name in years so it made me smile. Of all the people to single out, I suppose Rick figured his younger brother was the only one who was fair game; Rick - Tonya would kill him, Becca, he'd have to deal with Bobby, Charlie - well no one but mom and dad - schmuck So Scott invites himself over for the nite and sleeps on the couch?? And I though chivalry was dead. I guess I didn't know that Scott was pushing 50, I figured mid thirties, but if Richard was the 27 when Chuck was born, that means he's 51-52. Do I have the age wrong? I mean Charlie said someone your age, but that didn't mean exactly Rick's age - so gonna tell me or do I have to go find that ineffective Turban?

First, small mistake, hell it's what comes of writing something over the span of months, but readers get to read it over the span of days, you forget small things you wrote early, but we remember. You said, Charlie hadn't been to the movies in years, but in chapter one, you wrote, when Tina suggested movies, he bought the tickets, so he'd been to the movies lately, he might not have picked any of them, but he'd been with Tina. Now, for a man who didn't even think he was gay 2 weeks ago, Charlie is on the Coming Out Express. Meet the family, see your student's at the Movies, what's next? Nuptial announcements in the Newsday?

Me too And hey, I know Hella Busy right about now Mark - I feel ya.

It's always good when you can toss in a few surprises like that. Seems that even those who bluster the loudest go meekly into the night when no one is willing to support them. BUT just because Tonya gave it to big Rick, that doesn't mean he has to like who his son is dating or that he is gay - hmm that darn Turban is calling me to make more predictions, but I ain't biting this time, been wrong enough already.

Good F'ing grief, you should have called the Mostly uneventful life of Charlie Wagner that suddenly turned upside down and round about Dagnabbit I'm wrong again, gotta toss the stupid turban away, it's never right. So Ricky and Wade, but no Ted, Poor ted, he can't get a Wagner if he feel on one, can he?

Guess i was half right, Ted wanted to have wild crazy sex with Chuck, but Chuck wasn't into it. oh well, sucks being half right sometimes. Wait, wait, Karnac is having a vision. Ted and Ricky doing the mattress Mamba when Chuck and Scott get him. Wait wait, there's more - Tina is joining them. Hey if we're doing farcical comedy, why the hell not?

this time I nearly stopped with that - it was like an episode of Will and Grace at the end when Karen told Tim Curry her name was Anastasia Beaverhousen. Funny, cute, entertaining in a farcical way.

YESSS!!!!!! I knew Ted would be back and he and Chuck would be boinking link bunnies! Then again, you have a decidedly Roman streak in you, Sounds like it's gonna be a Roman Orgy now that young Rick is there - well once Mama leaves of course.

I'll second Ramon's comments about rehash and leave it at that. Scott is smooth, but seriously? The dude must have HUGE Balls to invite someone over who he didn't know was gay, who never gave off ANY hint he was gay and do what he did. Okay tiny gripe - hey I've been good so far and well after that comment of yours thinking I suggested Charlie and Ricky hookup, I owe you - If this was written from Scott's perspective, how come we didn't get his thoughts there at the end? That would have been a better way to end that particular chapter. IMHO at least.

Well I bet Charlie is wishing he let Sam take his place now, doesn't he. That would for sure end all connection between the two and you'd have a much less interesting story to tell. I'm most interested in seeing what happens when Charlie learns that Scott is NOT Julie's dad - seems like Great Scott has a twisted streak in him

That's it, just Good thing Charlie didn't giggle like a girlie man when Sam cornered Scott. Clearly Mr. Scott has his eye on a different teacher. But then, that might be awkward too because as we all know Wayne . . . err Charlie, isn't gay, right?

Go on with your bad tricksy self Wayne, why is it everyone reading knew the 'local businessman' who wanted to help with 'Reeding' was going to be Mr. Reads, Scott Reed but Charlie had NO idea? But what has me more intrigues is the whole Rick Jr. thingy with Mom and Rick Sr. So are Unc C and nephew R going to have a swinging gay bachelor's pad anytime soon? I mean, for a hot naked ass, I still know my way to Patchogue.

Hmm shades of advice to come, perchance??? Will Rick Jr. give Unc the same advice as Charlie gave him?? Stay tuned Batfans, more is on the way Sorry, just a silly moment, but interesting that Rick Jr. told him. How much of - tell Charlie or Granny is true and how much is tell Charlie cause he's m age and hmm i sense he might be just like me. Evil Comic leaving us so befuddled.

Thanks for the review, clearly you've kept up to date on my doing as well so thanks for the baby well wishes, she is already a bit of a handful, but Mike and I are doing well enough. Sequel, well yeah, hmm, actually, I had something of a companion story in mind first - involving characters other than Jason or Peter as the main character. I'd also like to do a sequel five years out from Peter's perspective this time. But got a few things occupying my time right now so writing isn't easy at the moment - so be patient Personally I'm a scotch man - single malt, aged long - but right now there is no lock on the cabinet, so we'll need to fix that and other things once she's a tad older. Thanks again Andy

I guess with a clan as big as this one, there are bound to be things that shock and awe folks. Patchogue eh? The Wagners could have been neighbors with my grandparents, for a time at least, they died a bit ago, but still. Small world. Now if Charlie starts dating Rick Jr.'s ex I'm gonna buy tickets for the fireworks

Cute Chapter. Hopefully we see more of Julie and Nick, they seem part of Scott's 'family' so to speak.

Barbara Wagner is NOTHING like Hurricane Barbara Tellerman They - whoever 'they' are - say a mother always knows, so what does mother know this time? Eh? Only the shadow knows. Seems also that mom was all that fond of Tina either, could be just me but she didn't seem too upset that Charlie dumped . . . err. . . let her go. Hmm what does she know?

Am I allowed to say UFF and just leave it at that? No? Well, wow, I don't know - no scratch that, I KNOW I couldn't do what Charlie did. That took some fierce guts to do that. So NOW does Ted appear, then profess their undying love and have crazy wild sex for hours on end? Please?

Blueberry Buckle? what's a buckle? Maybe it's me but did it seem that Wayne - - oops, Charlie spent more time thinking of Mr. Reads than Tina? Just sayin.

Baking? I thought his name was charlie not wayne Despite his appearance, it appears the good Mr. Reeds is something of a nerd as well - hmm that could be good for Wayne . . . err . . . Charlie, especially since he's been asked to come back. One can't say no to the man who saved your life - in some cultures - Like those on Long Island's south shore - if a man saves your life you're required to have intense sexual relations with him for as long as you can both handle it - at least that's what I was told when I lived on the 'Island'