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Woop woop woop. I love all of Jwolf's stories. Man, this is EXCELLENT news.

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Hahaha. My madness. He did check behind the door. But remember, for any magic to happen Bradley told him he must go thru the door.

What would you do if you were to come across someone building a door in the middle of a forest?

“Sir, excuse me for asking, but why are you building a door here?” The builder, caught unawares, drops the hammer, swings around. “Damn! You scared me.” The long haired young man approaches him carefully. His shoes squish the water-sodden soil. “Why would anyone build a door in a forest? Totally unexpected.” The builder considers his question, picks up the hammer, and smiles. “Indeed, but this door is special.” “Or any forest for that matter,” says the young man, his eyes wide. “For what pur

An absorbing work. The sexual nuance is pronounced. But I didn't understand the reference to food.

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Hmmm....the only thing I would change is all the Kiss me's. The sentences would work well without constantly saying kiss me with...otherwise I enjoyed it. It shows your passion for the written word.

RIP Ghost Ryder. Always sad to hear of a passing. But hey, you're in a better place now. No war. No conflict. Just peace. Besides, you'll always be with us. Your footprints cannot be erazed.

I'm Catholic and didn't know all this. I thought that, apart from the Crucifixion and the resurrection, Easter bunnies run around town giving away chocolate eggs or expensive Cadbury slabs to kiddies and adults who, in later life, will develop a taste for dentists and have half of their teeth removed by the age of thirty. This, of course means that A. Easter bunnies buy chocolate from the supermarkets and B, distribute such to kids and adults, who C, spend money on the dentist, who D, insists they return time and again for the same treatment when the actual reason for visiting the dentist is purely to be fixed once, and not visit again. So the dentist makes money. Your teeth rot and fall out. You become poor. Do you see the kickback the dentist has with Cadburies? LOL Easter ensures that dentistry lives! Long live The Dentist! From here on in we shall call Easter, Dentister! ROFL.

Thank you for your comments, Val. Glad you liked it.

Thank you for your ongoing support, Lisa. Yup, I'm glad they all got together. I think Rywan will teach Corneles a lesson or two in discipline. LOL

Maybe I should have included the time lapses. But each scene break does infer a time lapse. Maybe you mean Will accepting Cornele's presence so meekly? The last scene occurs about three weeks later. Thank you for reading Irritable. Glad you enjoyed the journey

Thank you Gene. I am glad you enjoyed the story. It could have been longer, but I intended it to be a short story so I had to follow up on that.

Building sandcastles is a metaphore for the insecurity that Baz is feeling with Will. He knows he has fallen in love at first site, and this is one of the themes throughout the story. Thank you for your kind words, appreciate your support.

William is such an old soul. He is wise and mature beyond his age. However, he is young, no escaping that. What does he want? Read on.

William is such an old soul. He is wise and mature beyond his age. However, he is young, no escaping that. What does he want? Read on.

Thank you Valkyrie. 2nd person is difficult to write. The tag or attribution, YOU SAY, is so ugly lol, but unavoidable lol. 2nd person present tense is a challenge, but I am over the moon that it panned out exactly as I wanted. The characters were not intrusive, in other words, they did not argue with me as to where the story was headed. Matt Cardle Is such a special guy, and so gay friendly it hurts. Lol. I can totally relate to sitting on the beach and listening to his music. There is always music in my latest stories. Its part of my formula.

Thank you Valkyrie. 2nd person is difficult to write. The tag or attribution, YOU SAY, is so ugly lol, but unavoidable lol. 2nd person present tense is a challenge, but I am over the moon that it panned out exactly as I wanted. The characters were not intrusive, in other words, they did not argue with me as to where the story was headed. Matt Cardle Is such a special guy, and so gay friendly it hurts. Lol. I can totally relate to sitting on the beach and listening to his music. There is always music in my latest stories. Its part of my formula.

I thought you'd like it. Thank you

One week has passed quicker than the swat of a fly and every day has been a challenge. But, what would life be without challenge? In this instance, the challenge has come from nature. Unlike a computer, a botched challenge is not easily turned back to default. There is no “give me back my arm” button. Unlike an artist’s canvass, there is no brush that can sweep over a mistake and make it right. You’ve come to realize that learning to do basic, mediocre chores like brushing teeth, signing a do

Thanks Joan. I hope I don't let you down with the final chapter.

Thankyou Nostalgic, I was hoping for an emotional response from someone. Means I'm doing something right.

Yes, C0rneles is my hubbie's middle name, lol

A response to Prompt 307.