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Marzipan

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  1. I like both singles and series and it all depends of the strory told. Sometimes it is just better to leave it be where it ends, no matter how good the story is. And then there are situations, that offer oppenings for the story to expand. I love short stories! The thrill of reading something that is just a glimpse of happeningsor the big picture. and you as a reader have to fill in the blanks, is deeply satisfying.
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    Chapter 9

    That Dustin is a real devil for a innocent lover. The psychology behind Eric is really peculiar. I really want a happy ending to this story.
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    Chapter 8

    Eric seems to be in deep trouble, oh dear. He seems so fragile, doesn't Dustin see that? Curious about the way this story is gonna go. I do see a glimmer of hope though.
  4. My ipod has been busy with: 1. Queen (fror gym) - Another One Bites the Dust - I want To Break Free - Show Must Go On 2. Bat For Lashes (for reading and writing, especially Daniel) - Daniel - What's a Girl to Do 3. Prodigy (for running) - Breathe - Firestarter - No Good (Start the Dance) 4. HIM (for writing and sketching) - anything from Uneasy listening vol 1&2 Well, there are more favs too...
  5. I'm so sorry for your cousin. *hugs* All life is precious, but prolonging life at all costs is not ethical. You have such a stong message here.
  6. Lol, thaaaanks so much for appreciation! Well, call my English Finglish from now on, k? It's not that bad, when I see those myself, right? Right...
  7. I started a thread earlier that's titled 'How does a sory come to you?' I was just about to press post, when I noticed in the last possible moment that the title had a typo on it. It said: 'How does a story come on to you?' Now would that have been a totally different discussion...
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    Regrets

    What did he regret? Bad sex? Realizing too late he was just paid to be used, not to participate? He surely took the act of prostitution qute lightly, almost like a game, until afterwards. Then it sunk in. Well, these shorties of yours are so cryptic and that makes the marvelous
  9. I love beautiful covers, but the smell of books does nothing to mee. A drob dead gorgeous cover might distract me for ages. As a kid I used to eat books... Must have tasted good
  10. Thanks for sharing
  11. **does the same google search **
  12. I do appreciate the laughs I earn with my typos, and laugh along since they are many times FUNNY! And I'm not being malicious when asking other peoples typos... You can by all means just put a list of what I have done, since it is a long list! And I don't mind being corrected of the, how else do I learn if I don't see them ? here is one: - Trip over --> tripple
  13. Lots of questions! First, welcome to GA! This is where you can start: make five posts so that you can kinda activate yourself. Every member has a profile and everyone can choose the way they are active: some are just readers, some use chat and forum discussions as well, some keep blogs, some write stories and/or poetry, some are editors some do all of that. I'm sure that all questions are answered here! https://www.gayauthors.org/help.html Just hang around the site, look for stories and be as active as you want and ask what ever comes to mind! And have fun!
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    Chapter 3

    Textbook excample how to deepen your storytelling description. I kinda liked the second chapter most, the manly grunty sentences fit weel to the were scenery as this later version was almost sophisticated. There was a one very obvious downside; I wanted to read a whole lot more of this werestory. It has quite interesting setting around it, aside your play with the rules. Do you have more were-tales?
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    Chapter 2

    This must have been a hard rule, using only five words per sentence! It was fun to read, knowing the play around it
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    Version 1

    Wows, that was a long sentence! Who made the rules? You or? Fun!
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    The Third Fire

    Interestingly framed firsttime experiemce. It was almost threesome! Did you see it like that?? The more I think about it the more it makes sense Bi-threesome A quickie that made me smile!
  18. Do you remember any funny typos youy have done or seen lately? I so wanna laugh at other people's expence for a change...
  19. Falling in love with love is so common. When one gets to know the other person, then the truth comes out and hearts shatter. I may be romantic, but I also am a bit cynic too.
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    Chapter 7

    The endig was a real cold shower, touch of relity. You can so esily flip flop between the emotions of pure bliss and agony. That makes this story an incredible read. I never thought it was possible, but I actually need a security blanket to read Comicality (you have been that for me before, lol), so I read Iarwain in the side. Very good progress with the story!
  21. WB! I'm new here, so nice to meet you!
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    Death of Innocence

    I read this as my beadtime story last night and had a wonderful dream of unicorns. So... thank you This was a story of sacrifice for love right? It was bittersweet but lovely. What a magical, alternative reality you painted with only a few straws.
  23. I have never fallen in love at the first sight, instant attraction is a different thing. I fall for the whole package, and a first meeting doesn't really reveal that. But I do have this feeling of destiny, that I'd somehow sence the right person for me very early on. But time would really tell the difference.
  24. Soldier's Girl was a hard one for me too. It broke my heart for it was a true story, just like Brandon Teena's story in Boy's Don't Cry.
  25. What do you have to loose? Ask him to a movie or something, or you could also just wait forever for him to make a move (which he seems unable to do) and regret it until you find someone else. Or just seduce him to ask you on a date by being the cutest, most adorable you as possible. Make him have his socks turn in his feet and make him wonder all kinds of hints. If he doesn't go for it, maybe he is just stupid or not that into you. Any help?
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