Marzipan
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Hmmm... I have been told this A LOT lately. You can't choose who you have feelings for. Just try to figure out what it is that you excactly want. This could be an indicator that you are not in the relationship with the right person. Or it could mean that you just spice up your life with daydreaming. I'm not the best advisor though. I let go of a ten year relationship since it just didn't make me feel complite and I was constantly wanting something else. The amount of unhappines I had been hiding inside came clear only after separation. Now I'm happy - mostly. I still have unrequited feelings and that is just a bitch to live with.
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Ditto. And that is beautiful what you said about the never ending love to your wife. Yoy'll find new love too one day Bleu.
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[DomLuka] I'd pay good money to read....
Marzipan replied to JM_Finnerty's topic in Promoted Author Discussion Forum
Wouldn't mind reading their story either -
Stuart
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Remember, you promised good make-up sex.
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This was just super cute start. Big C and Big... hmm Hero made me smile from the starts just as you promised. I wonder what Andy was saying in his rev? You are planning to make changes to the start or? Oh well, I enjoyed this so much!
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Welcome Pabz and every newbie in the thread that I have yet to wlcome. Have fun and just poke me if you need any help or a friendly face
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Errr... They are men or boys at least, right?
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Darn stubborn guys. If they were women, theyd be fighting with words all night long and then have really good make up -sex. Oh well. They are men. Sad, I broke my heart too.
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Did I just write down Lisa... meant Tina. OMG I have been reading way too much lately. Sorry for this double review also Hmmm... well... I liked Charlie with his kids too and the music in the background. Was that the special Adele song you had been talking earlier?
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Chapter 6 - The Music Knew the End
Marzipan commented on comicfan's story chapter in Chapter 6 - The Music Knew the End
So Charlie makes some relevations of himself. Really good. Now who is gonna go and look for the other, Charlie or mr. Blue Eyes? Setting Lisa free is something I can relate to. Been there and done that with my ex bf for likely the same reasons now coming to surface with Charlie. I am so looking forward for more. I thing this pace, slow and melancholic is perfect for this story, so if someone says speed it up, don't listen. Well that is my opinnion. -
Lymphoma
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I had the same questions as Com, but now that you explained them I understand the poem better Sometimes really personal meanigs can be lost from the reader and that can create a drop from the idea. Yet I encourage to use as much personal feelings and experience in the poems as possible. That is what brings me back to read them. I liked your poems as I said in my revs
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With some blunt, almost funny lines inside this was still a tender and sensitive poem. Really beautifuly written Jian.
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Thank you for sharing this personal moment of your life. Wise words from such a young boy.
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We all have shadows of past lives. Some stronger and some whisper only in the weakest voice. They should be listened. Thank you for sharing Jian.
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Sheherazade The beautiful and wise Indian storyteller who could talk all night long
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I'm speachless. I hope you could have had this discussion earlier. I think I'll be begging for more poems from you now! Please!
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Shape-Shifter (my Anthem)
Marzipan commented on oneinillinois's story chapter in Shape-Shifter (my Anthem)
Ooooohhhh gooossshhhh. This is my river of thought also. I loved this! -
**sigh** I think I have been there too. Brought back memories from January 2009, when My eyes opened. Thank you for sharing.
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Though there were some editing needed, I did think you captured the lure of the unknown well with just few words. It is the door we all once open. And the 'sheephead', that rose from the poem quite powerfully. I think most people are sheep if not all.
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That was dark and I felt uneasy reading it. Not because it wasn't good, since it was. I think you have so much to tell us with your words. Please don't stop.
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Live forever!?!?! Hmmm. I had to double take this poem, and though it was so wide for interperations and quite litle to work with I still loved it. I felt the words chosen flowed beautifully and I really had to think the meaning of this poem so it did it's job. It wasn't casual to me
