Marzipan

I liked this poem Or not - Actually I really liked this! A few thoughts that came to me: I'm always fascinated of the opposites, but mixing the opposites the diversity is created. In my mind that means the flirt between light and shadows. Also you played very creatively with the options: making a choice creates yet another options, multiple options in a never ending cycle.

This felt very real and familiar. Could say more, but I wont.

Purrrrs....

1. I think the Dreamscape brought Inception (the movie) in my mind in a good way! I felt I was in there with Kynan. I felt the walls coming down on me as the Dreamscape collapsed. 2. What a marvelous villain, so sexy, scary and appealing. Also the half uncle of our hero here... I wonder if the Prince Drakness stays a villain or is transformed by love. 3. I have a soft spot for warewolves... yes... I have read my share of those stories a while back **blushes** Your ware wolves, like Alan, are fascinating. What did you mean that in the Dreamscope he looked like a million dollar poster boy for a wolf (my choice of words), no matter what he looked in a reality. This brings me back to Dreamscope. It is like our online world side by side with our real world. We can make belief and play with images, truths, expectations and needs in online world. Also call out and make peeps come closer than would be possible irl. 4. I'm not a fan of pain culture, but when the torture is well written like yours, I see it more as an act of dark arts. It has an allure for sure (would not want to be in the receiving end). 5. Your writing style is so addictive to me! I can see myself begging on my knees for new chapters in no time... Make me happy, will you! So, that's what came to my mind after first chappy. Than you Dark, the story didn't let me down! It gave me high hopes for the next chapters! Ps. I think Kynan is gonna be a really intense lead. My favorite part of this chapter was when the prince of Darkness leaned close to Kynan and called him feisty - and beautiful. **sigh**

Very powerful start Darky! Got the hairs in my neck up! This means I'm going to read my first 'alternative reality' story from you. If you hook me with this one, I'm eternally yours and read what ever you put in front of me. I must now decide how to balance between this and 'The one I want'... I'll read the next chappy of this then chappy 2 of TOIW and gonna mix it up real good in my dreams.

You got some peeps worried here Glad to have you back!

So, I'm just interested in the folks opinnions in this matter. Speak your mind freely! My opinnion on the matter is: I'm an adult. I write sex and I like to read about sex too. I'm not embarrassed to admit it. I also want a real, solid story around the sex. To me a story is not only about the sex. If I'd want just a quick fix, I'd find it somewhere else. It is the whole experience about reading. I read a lot of stuff without any hints of sex in them and I'm not at all annoyed about that, the situation varies with every single story. Just like irl, sex is a big part of who we are and how we function as people. Reading about sex can be both liberating, fun and well... a turn on. But if the sex is written with bad taste... I rather skip it. I don't need sex in a story, I don't judge a story based on the lack or overload of the sex in it.

My hoppy is kinda wrapped around GA these days. Reading here, writing here, talking to peeps here... Well... I do some art too just for fun. My job plays the hobby role too, I get all the exercise I want from it.

This gave me tremors down my spine. I can feel the appeal of the unspoken you bring it on very eloquently. Even if the darkness wins, there is different kind of illumination there... Lovely, lovely poem! Don't stop with these!

It has been such a long time since I have read honest erotica This was great! I loved the Shakespeare talk and the seduce scene! It was both funny and hot! Wonder, if I'm right... is Spencer gonna turn out to be much more important than just a roommate and the best friend with benefits...

Interesting start! A list... The sex felt realistic, the pacing of this story led into it rather easily. Did you say you write romance? So is this gonna turn out to be more of a sexual adventure for the boys or is there gonna be developing more true feelings? **moves to chapter 2**

My guess is: - scent - old souls recognizing each other - similarity in personality ... But hey, those are my quesses of what might explain the phenomena. Does my guessing count if I don't believe in love at first sight?

I'm a woman (at least I think I am) and I'm allowed to change my mind. For a while I thoughed I was straight. Then it turned out I like the ladies and really thoughed I'd be lesbian instead. Then came the "I must be bi". Now I'm just thinking outside the box. Love is love is love. So putting myself in a strict box is just boring. I will, in the honor of this thread, go and take the tab "bisexual" out of my info box. That just doesn't tell the whole story of me. I haven't read that story yet myself.

Oo-ooh! I'm nearly speachless... my stomach hurts from laughing. The granny and the itty witty sister were amazing! And who liks someones face when there are relatives whatching? The sex was like fun-fun-fun too! Can't think of anything negative to bring up. I love stories that make me smile!

Plaah. Stupid gal... Lily darling, what do we do if you fall in love with me at the first sight?

Ohhhh... so that is the infamous Justin Bieber... he doesn't look so awfull at all. It's not the poor boy's fault that everybody is making fun of him... is it? He actually does seem sweet and cute and young.

Would it have been the happily ever after without ll the obstacles you faced and growing as a person in the middle of it? I'm so happy for you guys. I have to believe there is love too, just not at first sight though.

Well, I know nothing about musicals and I do realise I was generalizing way too much with my comment ... Maybe I'll start with them when I'm finished with GA stories

What a horrible, horrible secret Alex had been carrying. Hate crimes make my guts turn, this story didn't. It didn't leave me jumping for joy since it was quite a sad story, but the ending gave me hope. I'm leaving only this short note here since I'll be giving my more deatailled review in Dark's thread 'Improve and Encourage" in writers corner. http://www.gayauthors.org/forums/topic/31363-improve-and-encourage/page__pid__289528#entry289528

I have no passion for musicals. Classics or modern. I did love Baz Luhrman's Romeo and Juliet and Moulin Rouge, but I'm not a fan of the genre at all. Most of the musicals seem fake-happy to me.

I used to be addicted to shopping. I bought stuff to fill the void in me. Now, I hate going to shops, trying on new thigs etc. I only buy what I need and I have sold everything I bought at my manic shopping years. Things don't make me happy anymore. They make me sick.

Hurraa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :2thumbs:

Jihuu! Time Wrap is in!!!!!!!!!!! **Secretly perving the straight peeps**

Don't lick until it drops... My boss has to approve the songs first. As much as I like the idea of playing Rocky Horror song in my class, she is a prude... I hope she has not seen the classic. I'll let you know. -Sigh-

Sorry Sara, I'm double posting a review that was cut short for the chapter 12! It started with: This was awesome And was gonna continue with: chapter. I loved the way Connor felt raw in front of Jared. And how it actually was Jared with the insicurities. I'm a big hinking freak so that part of the story was a treat aswell. I appreciate the time you took with the description of the nature. That was also about sharing, Jared ga¨ve a piece of himself to Connor. And even when Connor really did not prefer the hiking, he saw that too. And Jared must have seen that in Connor.