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Cute quickie shortie. Poor Kelly though Do you still write shorties? Would love a new one!

I'm 100% sure you will meet your lover. Just mark my words hun.

I wish So nice, I'm happy for you! It is always great to hear that someone cares, especially with such a special way.

Your poem danced with the dancer. Just beutiful.

Oh my God, Sam! This was just amazing, powerful and heartbreakingly beautiful. The oppostive feelings tangled together and the inevitable sorrow mixed with love and lust and hurting made this poem so bittersweet. **sigh**

Hello hun! I'm reading and I'm gonna be leaving a word or two everytime I'm back with your story I admire your love to write, it is a struggle if no one comments or leaves reviews etc. I wish I would have gotten to your story sooner. I won't be judging any typos or anything since I got loads of them myself. You can expect the feelings your writing ewokes in me, 'k? Here it goes. The starting was typical, nothing too stricking, BUT the chapter ending with a literal cliff was not! Though, it felt a little bit seperate from the story idea, but then again accidents do happen and lead things forward! Teen crush to the best friend, that always melts my heart. One of my favourite story themes. My favorite part in this story was just before the fall to the river, when Keith held Thomas from the back and almost kissed his neck - before getting a smack. Such a teaser! I'm looking forward to see how Thomas pulls out of his river and how the story starts to build up. You might want to give some thought to the words chosen, maybe avoid using the same word too many times in a chapter. But that is the kind of thing that can be pointed out with a beta reader-editor. Keep writing hun!

I hate labels too. They are so oppressive and never the whole truth. This felt familar to me. Too familar. Words have too much power to hurt us. Thank you for sharing this. Are you participating to the Spring pom anthology btw? I hope you are!

You are such a tease I some how new I would not have get it any better than I did. I went on a wild goose hunt then.

Prophecy/prophesy, was on purpose, right. After that I just got lost and fast. I read it three times, and still I was lost. My bad. I really really would have loved to get it.

Guns as in Guns or "Guns" Post it already, pleez!

What about Wilma I always have liked that name. Congrats for your new puppy! Give her a hug from me

Harsh way to figure out one is uninteresting. Alone in heaven.

Where did the birthday-sex go? *** On the other note, the seriousnes in this chapter made my heart ache.

I got myself a headache too, you are THAT good. Luv how brave Coop is, I just hope he would let Mich take care of him. And Mich's shiner!!!!!!!!!!?

No!!!!!!! Shut up - errr - darling.

I'm affraid to ask what...

Hello! Welcome to the colorful bunch! I don't have English as my first language either yet I continue to throw my words out there! So... Looking forward on what you got!

Slap? What kind of dates have you been on?

He definitely has a voice, but only in the hunter's mind. Rythm of flight, there's a thought...

There is nothing better than a kiss if there is a connection. *sigh* But... if not, don't do it! You'll just know.

Happy Birthday Douw!!!!!!!

You and me both I was thinking about turning this into a full on fantasy story, but I think I'll stick with the poem form. If I decide to continue. And here is a link that will work, thanx to Colinian. My Beautiful Dragon

I was wondering, is this kind poetry something you'd like to read in series? I feel I have more to say about my dragon and his hunter. My Beautiful Dragon And, sorry the link won't work

Yeah, but I'm right? Right?

Keep blogging - I'm reading Thank you for sharing your experiences, big or small.