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This was painful. Extrenal coldness was luckily overcome by internal heat. As long as the flame in your heart is burning there is hope.

I think it was honest and truthful and came from your heart. That makes all the difference. Love this poem babe.

Nothing will ever be the same. I hear you. I liked how you played with the theme.

I liked this one. Now, I'm gonna read the second poem. This made me smile. Or think even. This could form into a copy cat poem... End I must this rev now * * * * Really good one Renee!!!!!!!!

Now I'm scared... This was like a finishing touch to The Hills - poem.

I sence the same apocalyptic theme in this poem as you had in the last antho story. This is haunting and so good. I feel I stepped into a nightmare.

**Blush** You didn't fail, it rose some interesting images. As intended. You devil.

I cried for the second time with this poem. It brought me to the death of my grandpa. I can't really comment anything else except that this was beautiful and meant a lot to me too.

This was somewhat personally touching to me, so Ill just say what it brought out in me: I too might appear confidant and smiling to the outside but I hide something else in the inside. And it takes a really special person to crack my shell. And it is cracking now. Though the outcome will be me building an even thicker wall around me than being wrapped in love. Or maybe facing these emotions will help me through this time with lesser crumbling. Thank you for sharing this poem.

Thank you for sharing this poem! I think it spoke volumes, and carried a strong message. Future is what we make of it.

Sam, what a thoughtful poem the first one was. I think it was beautiful how the two paragraphs melted together in the end. Secon poem, *sigh* you have dragons too. I love it. Wonder if the dragons you posess have the same meanings as mine.

Such honest words. I love this. You could start writing more poems, you know...

Awww... Now I'm feeling all blue.

Well, it was definitely a Comsie style poem You didn't need to add anything more, I pictured the rest, you gave all the significators needed to open it. Really sweet. Thanks for participating and sharing this rare delight !

Musta been... I love how you own the words with negative signfication and turn them into something beautiful. I love that you don't bow at people. A daring and provoking poem, just like I expected from you. This woke me up complitely. A mega brainstorm going on now. My favourite of your three entries and I must add, this is gonna be hard one to topp but I'm giving the rest of the poems a fair try

And it's a boy! Congrats If the soul thought it was hard and scary to be born, wait until he lives a bit... A good one.

Awww a baby. Seriously, tight yet airlight poem. Really enjoyable with my morning coffee.

What a U-turn babes. I feel awful, I want things cleared soon. If he killed his wife a year ago, he hasn't done his time in jail yet so he is on the run? Or what... I can't help but want things to turn good, not again but finally. I loved the metaphors in the sex scene. Made me snicker, they felt the fit in and they were sorta cheap (dunno a better word, but I know that you chose the words carefully and they were perfect in the situation). And I love the language your guys use, it is so believble and yet again fit in the story with ease. Love your work! Post fast!

I think this was a important chapter, a one to show us how Charlie prosesses his thoughts. I loved the slow unwinding feeling in it, letting things sink in in Charlie's pace. Now, the next chappy soon, please

Falling in love and finding a special someone doesn't look age. I do think people look for different things in a person at different ages. And have different expectations about life. For some it means they would never settle for something that they thought was an ideal mate at their twenties, for some it means they have lowered their expectations from the sky hights. I just believe everyone can find love, and if the timing is right keep it too.

Cartheras please. **needs more**

Did i get caught?

I read this last night before I went to sleep, so I decided to wait until morning before reviewing it just to make some sence. I loved the chance encounter of the guys. Billy must have lived a rutined life with pleasantries and some happy moments, but I don't think he had been trully happy before Nate. Nate with his child like behaviour opened his eyes. I love how Bill observed people at the subway. I do that too, so much fun. The idea of having just one day in a whole lifetime with someone you know would make you a better person, a happier person, loved and everything, is so interesting and I was very excited from the start. At the end, the tiny info about Nate becoming a dad was subtle left out hanging. It could be either a prize or a hinder later in their relationship. I loved the endin, it was just perfect for this story! :)

I'd put my money on Montreal too. --> Though Saku Koivu, my hero now plays in Anahaim Ducks

This reminded me of my friend Jenni. She lives her life just like that and I admire her ability to do so. My heart yerns the same, but I'm too limited to my premises. This poem spoke to me immediately, I was able to reflect my own life with it. Thank you, 'The Fool' made me think about my choices.