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Rybalt, Catboi, Express with little clue, John with Connor, blind love, power glue. Connor honors Matty, quite achieved, A CatBoi invite, message received. Zoey with Dex, a mountain is he, But who holds sway, be it he or she? Big things, small packages, smart their sport, Matty, Zoey, reigning strong in court. Science building roof, Rusty has key?? Outsmart King Mischief; ha, take a knee! Song and a dance, a kid white lie, Not the plan for Wednesday nightlife. Connor gets exposed? No, not that way @Laura S. Fox, she has last say!
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But will Rusty be the filter or will pre-trials be honored?
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We have had a continuous crescendo of mystery with Jacob, non-standard emergence, non-standard memory, non-standard tolerance of Anavi, non-standard instincts to hide personal memories/secrets from the hive mind, etc. How we have Jacob having a vision or visit after experiencing bast of both shadow and light…could that be just a battle catalyst from Kaylec and Soullen? Or is it something unlocking from within? Could Jacob have intentional blocks to give him annonyity or to allow acceptance gateway events before unlocking his truth? His fathers died not to just keep him alive , but it seems much larger and needing skills from the time of the dam bursting…do not link, do not pass his own history. Me thinks Jacob is a Prince among Princes, currently in lockdown. But Jacob is mostly the one and only son of the Navi and Skai Princes lost/forced from the world so long ago; yes, the Great Mother said if we loose/kill Jacob, then all hope of peace in the future is lost. Was/is Soullen on a spy mission in traditional since or is his there because of Q and what he may have sensed in his and Jacob’s fairwell merging? …or perhaps just to protect Jacob if he were thought to be a spy to be terminated by the Skai at a future date/time, especially with the Kaylec history and interaction thus far. I must admit I didn’t care for some of the more violent aspects of the Navi pledge week; involuntary drugging, rape, etc. But I did continue read while not lingering on those thoughts and scenarios. I’m so glad to find the latter reading of great interest and intrigue. I’m glad I stayed from this wonderfully written sci-fi triller, drama, mystery, romance, story; I look forward to @The Writer X continuing this exciting tale. Hopefully life and dedication does not sway from your scribing more. Thank you for sharing and for all your work towards creating this tale.
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What a way to handle Kaylec. 😝 oh no, Sunny missed the google eyes but really, Soullen and a young human…hmmm??? Makes me wonder if all is as it seems with Soullen.
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Wow, such inbred hatred that would turn cousins against one another; of course, feed jealousy and greedy envy into that and you have catalysts for social super nova. Kaylec denies his own involvement; hates humans yet fell for one? Did he himself push for boyfriend to turn? He definitely pushed for the plan to go all out offensive with total disregard for the safety and experience of his newly turned boyfriend…yet, irrational greed for notoriety and hatred for the designed enemy tosses the boyfriend to the sidelines regarding risk.
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Weird call indeed and just as perplexing that John should comment that he hoped Matty would do the right thing. What does John think or what does he really know but is too weak minded to say to other than his idol/crush?
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Hmmm, Freudian slip? Connor needs to get laid, while @J.El is the one rumored to have/want his heart, but then you declared that you’re “rooting” for him?? So how long have you been contemplating cheating on Rusty? And is that a three-way implied also…”rooting for you two?”
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Oh So Dreadful Catch-22
Philippe commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Oh So Dreadful Catch-22
Hmmm, perhaps a little… shove, from their respective closets, will force these two double life lovers to actually look in the mirror to find reality and confidence with each other. Goodness, an honor roll student tudor and the social life extrovert can’t find the correct answer to their own test of honest feelings shared. Perhaps Cat Boy needs to do a strip tease to profess his real feelings and hold the Mighty Thor at bay until Rybalt sings his heart and clothes away in pronounced love. -
Inspiration for a second book! 😛
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Goodness, you just anointed @Geron KeesMaster and in the same textual breath imply that he push for Grand Master of a multitude of off-shoots to this great story….bravo, hopefully he’s not too slow on the uptake! 😊 As any kitten will attest, loose threads are irresistible and so fun to pull. So I second that opinion to spin your yarn, whole yarn-ily!
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While likewise demanding a seat, or to give up his seat, at the Table of Uncles. Hahaha 🤣 A powerful foe indeed, but an even more powerful member among the newly expanded Council. Hmmm, when does little sister manifest power and demand her seat?
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EMP, KILL THEM ELECTRUMS. The machines short circuit then Lodda becomes the King Without Clothes. Or more simply, the team hasn’t eaten…how about scrambled little egg shaped machines and fried Lodda (PIG) bellies; what a way to start your day.
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Mess with me, I shoot you…into the heart of the sun! ☀️ You can be born again as electrum chaos…or is that a short life Free Radical? 😂
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So, if the One-Eyed Porvus is launched, Flying into space. Known to all who’ve ever interacted with him to be the Devil 👿 Mage whose mind horns into victims’ minds. Killing people different than himself as he illuminates of mage energies. Then, does that make him the infamous… One-Eyed, One Horned, Flying Purple People Eater?
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Porvus is probably feeling betrayed as much as nervous of Lodda. Even if sincere, due to this problem (if real) with Lodda, should the Apprentice Masters get the upper hand of Lodda then I’d expected to be stabbed in the back as he again he sees opportunity; to steal their secrets, magic, and ultimately powers. Their help could be crucial…but does their help come as partners or as sacrifices to make him empowered over Lodda? Why am I reminded of wildlife nature / instincts? “A scorpion asks a frog to carry him over a river. The frog is afraid of being stung, but the scorpion argues that if it did so, both would sink and the scorpion would drown. The frog then agrees, but midway across the river the scorpion does indeed sting the frog, dooming them both.”
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Of course, a private reveal to verify proper salute and spit. After his second puberty, community knowledge prior to being test driven could disappoint and leave the Prince deflated.
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So they have found a place for the Red Mage; perhaps something appropriate after his death. May the likes of him never come to witness again. maybe they should have considered environmentally friendly options aligned with his life goals.
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It’s the frame of reference…8yo hands/palms vs adult size; adults from memory use present ref vs the reference used then; so yes it did fill your hand, the 8yo hand 🖐️.
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Sleeping Beauty required a special kiss to rise, perhaps 🤔… Of course, standard weights and measures after each treatment is required for science. Treatments with and without special goodfellow elixirs, and the same with any prodding injections or massaging, etc
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It makes me wonder just where home may (eventually) be…for the horses, Dakota, Conner, and of course Harry….hmmm, when Harry met Sally??? Haha. I have a feeling another horse introduction may surprise Conner; which as the desires to honor the bonds of nature thickens for not only the affectionate beasts but the young men too; as both are guided by their elder grandfathers that seem to have strong visions for the future. Wolf Boy Friend, Ashkii, leaves much to interpret of friendships to come…and where Two Guns will be holstered.
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Oh, butt then Dakota will likely mold Conner’s butt to make the very best saddle for his butt…so the eyes will have to shift soon to…seats and horns. Then maybe we’ll get to understand the non sexual (brotherly) comments and where this introduction may take us. Like the horse rotations for age and recouping, this trail may require several rotations of horses, moon and sun to get us down the path.
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I have my own sedatives to overcome…but then that normally means another round is needed, and there goes those vowels, again. Think of it as tribute to the title; Disobedience. 😝
