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Chapter 2: A shocking surprise hit the Sandovals.
Philippe commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 2: A shocking surprise hit the Sandovals.
No doubt this social event has given Carlos a good dose of what Gael felt when Natalie showed up. In some ways you want to smile that he gets a good dose of what you think he could have prevented, that he had a choice that could have given him and Gael a chance at a different life; disclosing Natalie far earlier earlier and by not fathering, a child with his father imposed mistress. Ian proves yet again that not only is he rich, but he likes to play God and to gloat over others. One would have thought he would have been satisfied that he had everybody in positions as wanted, but that was not enough for Ian. He goads Alex and Natalie into the conversation that reaffirms his control over at least Alex, but it hints of control over Natalie too. Gael showing up in person and unescorted put even Ian in an unexpected position. While Ian would have preferred Gael be lead around on a leash, Gael showing up unescorted and defiant under multiple verbal attacks seems to highlight that not all of Ian‘s plans are as predictable as King Ian had decreed. Ian’s thought that Natalie was playing her part well makes one wonder whether Ian has her under his influence also, or weather he’s just reflecting upon her as a daughter-in-law, the former appears to have a stronger position from observing this interaction. Natalie‘s cousin Alex was not given a chance to address his marriage to Gael prior to Ian‘s gleeful chance to demonstrate his control over others. The setting has Natalie and Carlos having just returned, and as Natalie‘s cousin Alex seems to would have had limited opportunities prior to this gathering to discuss his own life. But it is rather strange that Ian would position the so-called murderer of his grandchild to be so grandly introduced as the mother of his grandchild’s cousin by law. It appears Ian has far too many within his clutches. Even Amanda seems to have been caught unsuspecting; either that or she played her part very well. I look forward to seeing just exactly how @vanalasplans to sort out all these hand grenades that seem to be hidden within the story. Just my personal observation, both Carlos and Gael are in similar situations. While Carlos conceded to Ian‘s manipulations, the Gael resisted to unexpected levels, neither has been free in their choices as they were still heavily coerced. Less clear is just exactly how Alex fits into Ian‘s manipulations; is it his hope that he can win Gael’s heart or is it conspiracy to bring down the all powerful and homophobic Ian? -
Part One: Painting By Moonlight
Philippe commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Painting By Moonlight
The internet has made life virtual, faux life. We used to have fantasies of our own makings, but something that also let us think through our own life choices; not something re-imagined in virtual reality and loaded in a virtual bedroom. We didn’t have chat windows, we had chats out under the school oak or down by the park. Far too many have lost themselves to virtual reality that seems to me is a virtual Soap Opera meets virtual Porn. 🤷♂️ 🤦♂️ -
Part One: Smells Like Paint Spirit
Philippe commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Smells Like Paint Spirit
Ironic that this thought process is very much the same as we go through when first venturing sexually into adulthood; will I do ok, will it be adequate for the other? But then when chemistry and nature takes over….oh god, oh god,… was it good for you? -
Omg: Doc Sawz All is ready to engineer reverse plastic surgery with a very capable one use is all that’s required tool; and I love it, it couldn’t happen to a nastier guy! 😂 Yes rushed with many possibilities for the hopeful sequel or at lease a sequel of epilogues; but that closing passage of gen 7 is totally inviting a sequel.
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Huh? The End? 😢 I would have liked the painful end of the Oscar murders included in the finale but that’s my vengeful opinion. Why the groups became engaged enough that they exposed themselves, yet that was the major reason for hunting down the Norwegian boys…huh, they kinda chopped off their noses to spite their faces. It seems it’s more about their generational superiority than about the German pledge to fatherland; it seems the they’ve lost their objective in pursuit of higher genetic status. It’s hard to tell, which is more destructive.
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Yay, @vanalasdid come through, If I may, a thanks from me and you. Gael is winning a difficult release, Interesting agreement to appease. Alex whispers little, what was unsaid, No doubt Ian wants Gael left dead. Much to unfold as we learn the game, Who may live, who may die, any shame?
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Gael has suffered two months of beatings and malnutrition, no doubt suffering delusions and unable to discern normality. Yet, it appears Alex is playing to Ian’s directing at this time. However, it makes me think there is much more at play beyond this captive hell Gael has endured. How much is real and how much may be for Ian to witness to his satisfaction? Why would Alex be so worn? Why did it take this long to win what was supposed to be a hard fought bargain for release? We are still lacking the continuing storylines from others and away from Ian’s watchful eyes. I suspect Gael will not find relief or understanding until it is absolutely safe to to do so; I believe more lives are at stake than Gael’s.
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Part One: Son, You Stink
Philippe commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Son, You Stink
Tyler Scott, awake, numb, sweaty, Five hours sleep, the night a bit heady. Shoulder covered with a blue haired mop, A hand, firmly wrapped about his cock. Too much drink and weed, now the sun, Separating drooling partner must be done. Lay back down, Brandon‘s sleepy plead, Expected you gone, his morning creed. Where is the bathroom? said urgently, The can in the corner, if you can believe. Morning Wood restricting Tyler‘s flow, Brandon steps to the bucket, letting go. Question posed, ever pissed on someone? Tyler‘s disbelief, that really something done? Better pissed off, than pissed on, Tyler thinks, Brendan likes the golden flow, the idea sinks. Discussion of pissing in pants and shower, I really must go, Tyler thinks, my look at the hour. Tyler’s mind in review, a smile of elation anew, Never made it home last night, sexuality askew. Explaination or excuses, results all the same, Lawyer Tyson, Therapist Isebelle, rents not to game. Too much to drink, text before drinking my boy, Not with Devin? Communication, key to enjoy. Missed my waffles, balls…At Brandon Myers’ Did you sleep with pigs? Waffles to his desires. So lunch with Henderson, or with your wine? Tyler you stink, we don’t always drink n dine! My afternoon free, no money to eat, I’m poor, Allowance will provide, objection counselor! No door dash, bread and processed cheese, Strike, counter, ok, forty bucks if you please. Second opinion?? $100 for sage advice, sir, Phone taps him money, eat healthy Tyler! All about eating healthy, Tyler glowered, For god’s sake, Tyler, go get showered! -
Chapter 1: Welcome to Miguel's world.
Philippe commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 1: Welcome to Miguel's world.
Well I can’t say that I have a good feeling for where this story is going just yet, as it’s still developing, but it does promise an interesting dynamic between Miguel and Christian. Now just a little tongue in cheek poke at the author for leaving us hanging with an Evel Knievel cliff dive on his previous story posting. Yes it’s a repeat from chapter 8 of where love lies, but for those that were too shocked to go back and visit that ending, I’ll post it again here as this story is referenced also. Release of Where Love Lies - Book 2 Don’t get hopes up or loose a screw. @vanalashas an evil woman, clicking heels, Waiting around a corner, see who she kills. But first give way to a new Savage Rose, Where men seek revenge, no heels, I suppose. i expect a good mystery, perhaps a triller, Excitement may peak, exposing a killer. Could it be, @vanalas ties Savage Rose…, To Amanda, Ian, Gael, and to Carlos? If not, Where Love Lies, will need review, Is it possible, even eyes balls get blue? BALLS! BALLS! BALLS! Hear the calls too? It’s anticipation for Where Love Lies- Book Two! -
You were not alone…I see dead people. 😈 Release of Where Love Lies - Book 2 Don’t get hopes up or loose a screw. @vanalashas an evil woman, clicking heels, Waiting around a corner, see who she kills. But first give way to a new Savage Rose, Where men seek revenge, no heels, I suppose. i expect a good mystery, perhaps a triller, Excitement may peak, exposing a killer. Could it be, @vanalas ties Savage Rose…, To Amanda, Ian, Gael, and to Carlos? If not, Where Love Lies, will need review, Is it possible, even eyes balls get blue? BALLS! BALLS! BALLS! Hear the calls too? It’s anticipation for Where Love Lies- Book Two!
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Ahh yes, the Argentinians of unknown ….well, many unknowns, but should they find interest, and should they have a current research, numbers, and intent, they could suddenly become rather problematic, influential, or a significant ally. The uncertainties of allegiance within the organizations is very problematic, as you’ve pointed out, they are highly intelligent, and essentially spies of high capabilities embedded within the organizations that would tend to entrust. How aligned to local German heritage and allegiance versus the possible allegiances towards the fatherland and their very origins. These considerations are far more involved than I had considered, as I was more of mind that the Norwegians would essentially be seeking protected asylum, without full conflict becoming a real consideration; after all, these programs have prided themselves with advances thus far in anonymity, while quietly embedding within political and business positions of power and control. Is it close to the time of action, or will the timelines be accelerated due to risk of exposure that spoils the element of surprise?
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I somehow fell behind on my reading, so at the end of chapter 10, my thoughts held to the notion that such an alliance might be in play. The separation of the captives did leave questions as to the true intentions of these captors. what a wonderful surprise to find that they actually want to have the Norwegian’s join in alliance. Even more surprising is that the North American numbers rival the European numbers. It seems much work is still needed for the Norwegians to recruit and persuade from their European ranks. Hopefully the North Americans have a good Intel network and have good tracking on any of the hardline to Europeans that may already be in the North American region. Hopefully the hardline European’s strategy allows time for fortification of the North American-Norwegian alliance. for me, it was a chapter 10 in chapter 11 read, so a great addition to the story. I look forward to this next installment.
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Part One: Son, You Stink
Philippe commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Son, You Stink
Hmmm 🤔, a subliminal message of thanks to good ole grandpa; the first time in years that you’re able to be yourself, that he didn’t complain of your orientation or your less masculine presence??? May he RIP. 🪦 -
Part One: Questioning Everything
Philippe commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Questioning Everything
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Part One: Rejection Is Never Easy
Philippe commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Rejection Is Never Easy
The head of the pointer is your compass. 🤷 ♂️ Any adventurous trip to Mars would be expected to have a couple of preliminary, deep space probes. -
Part One: Rejection Is Never Easy
Philippe commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Rejection Is Never Easy
Here lays Pandora, she had a lovely box, and magnificent boobs; rejected by Tyler, RIP -
Part One: Son, You Stink
Philippe commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Son, You Stink
Understood, it’s just never going to be a rewarding relationship, even as it complicates a normal friendship. I’m not much for being a straight guy’s welcome mat either. But horniness does make us do silly things, especially in our younger years. -
Part One: Smells Like Paint Spirit
Philippe commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Smells Like Paint Spirit
Brandon Myers, long known to Tyler Scott, Though with distance, an anti-social despot. His foot in Brandon’s door? a brown paper bag, Through dyed hair, eyes gleam a gift, not a gag. Off to the attic retreat, old brushes, paint, and oil did stink, Heat of the attic, heat of the nerves, shared bottle to drink. Share this as friends? Long over due Tyler, just to get high? Brandon senses payback time, Tyler’s confusion multiples. Payback is hell, tales of adolescent thoughts they tell, Tyler strangely turned off and on by Brandon’s smell. Insecurity and doubts, when did you know you were gay? Brandon enlightened in second grade, boys made my day. Then why not me, Tyler asked? Lots of reasons says Brandon, No longer friends, a punch in the mouth, you might have done. I would have punched you not, nor sucked your dick, Tyler says, Brandon queries about now? Still not sucking your dick, jeez. Tyler‘s thoughts a haze, Brandon, can I spend the night? Stay as you like. Brandon, did you really fuck a senior tonight?- 36 comments
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Part One: Son, You Stink
Philippe commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Son, You Stink
Yeah, on the ski trips with guys nesting on sleeping bags on the floor, always claim the middle spot between two good slalom skiers; an absolutely wonderful night as they dream of slalom runs down the slopes…yeah, work them poles,…jump, oh hell yeah! -
Tease over, now let’s get to the bottom of Amanda’s revenge plot. Did she have anything do with Gael’s mother’s death? With Mia being best friends with Gael’s mother, how has Amanda’s revenge been taken on her? As I have suspicions that Mia is scared for more than just Gael; is her first son being used as control over her, for appearances of Ian’s dynasty? What a warped SOB, Ian has no concept of family, no concept of love, and doesn’t even understand his own sister. This whole scenario makes you wonder who is truly in control and pulling the strings; but no doubt Ian and Amanda are bad news. Ian has no concept of family, no concept of love, and doesn’t even understand his own sister. This whole scenario makes you wonder who is truly in control and pulling the strings; but no doubt Ian and Amanda are bad news. Where does Natalie and her family figure into this grand scheme? No doubt her family has money, and her parents are probably just as warped as Ian, but were they truly apart of putting Natalie together with Carlos? Natalie is way way way out there to be pushing to get married and pregnant while still on the very hospital bed where she has been told she lost the precious child between her and Carlos; again, begging the question, was the baby even between her and Carlos? Is Natalie in cahoots with anyone else on this scheme? or is this just another wicked person acting independently and unfortunately praying upon Carlos? it seems more than coincidence that Amanda has known of the boys relationship for a long time, and then that Natalie which to our knowledge has never met Gael, was also aware before her pregnancy. Yet instead of talking to Carlos, or Gael, Natalie pushed to get pregnant, push to get married, and then, ironically, after losing the baby pushes to still get married in two days, from what could have been her deathbed. 🤷♂️ We have some major warped people here! Ahem…not implying that the author here is included in that reference, but then again… That depends on how long before we see the next chapter. 🤣
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Chapter 7: A night to remember. Or is it?
Philippe commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 7: A night to remember. Or is it?
Ian and his sister, Amanda, both are caustic; how could his wife tolerate him, as hating him yet tolerating is giving him too much respect. I’ve been thinking that some thought from the beginning, entrapment by Natalie as Amanda schemes her revenge. But what revenge is it that she hates Gael and says he is like his mom. So did Gael’s mom win over Amanda’s first love? Is that why it enraged Amanda when Gael said she didn’t get to criticize him when she hasn’t planned or had a wedding? Regardless the wrong doings, these women don’t deserve the love they fight over. They are cold hearted, manipulative , and full of vengeful hatred. You don’t continuously badger anyone, and Gael wasn’t the one to hurt Amanda and likewise didn’t know of Natalie. In fact, Natalie knew of Gael before she got pregnant, so she is the one stealing away someone’s love. That also comes back on the parents and even Natalie herself, as she had knowledge to make her existence known months before. Now she lays broken, possibly at risk of losing her life, and risking her baby too. She ran to grab Gael as he was trying to distance from her and her antagonist ways. She precipitated her downfall. Ironically, she could expire, leaving her baby to be raised by her husband and his lover. -
Part One: Questioning Everything
Philippe commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Questioning Everything
It’s probably more entertaining to you to see how I interpret your words. 🤷♂️ 😆 My own are too much… Twisted mind, twisted tongue 😜, oh my, Hey Siri, strike that thought…, Help! save me from AI. Buzz words of marketing, AI. Dare not give autonomy, Program for AI interpretation? My own frontal lobotomy. -
Part One: Questioning Everything
Philippe commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Part One: Questioning Everything
Glacier Bay, boring AsF, many would say, Tyler Randolph Scott, has a bet to pay. Trapped between mountains and ocean, But tonight between stall walls, with gay notion. Devin insists, you just put it though the hole, This is not right, and just how do you know? I watch porn, but your debt is to be collected, With you watching? hell no, I’m more selective. I can do, video the act, then shown to you, Heigh ho, an open stall, I see teen-ish shoes? OMG, deep breathe, he tapped a foot, oh lordy, Have faith, as I breach this hole, in all my glory. Oh goodness, oh my, full right rudder I try, Better than any girl, ahhh, my balls draw high. His small hand, on my boys, the other walking his toy, Be thee warned, his moan to cum, my gift is his joy. Such excitement, his compliment, splattered about, Mine swallowed, his, spit shining my boot I shout. I run in confusion, these thoughts, hard to outrun, Devin wants evidence, video a no, check my boot for runs. Climax, confusion, day is done, yet I can’t go home, Answers await, perhaps a friend, with blue haired dome. Familiar face, perhaps the tone, much time I’ve missed, What do you want? Is he frustrated or just plain pissed?- 57 comments
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