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LOL, a nice yarn indeed! Yes, the murderer has definitely complicated his/her life if it is suspected to be the same perpetrator; the MO appears to affirm that at this time. So the local police probably have the state involved or possible taking over the investigation…which is good that Seth’s murder gets a fresh look …if Killian’s dad I’d out of the decision making process/influence this barrel of monkeys may finally get a true look. While I don’t believe the FBI can take jurisdiction, federal law mandates there assistance even if not intrastate occurrences. So FBI profilers, lots of interviews, and …then maybe we’ll get an FBI BOLO profile description; at least I think so?? 😛 The killer seems to be obsessed with Killian. It looks to me that Killian was possibly an accidental victim when Seth was murdered; totally unplanned, while the real target, Seth, had taken Killian’s focus like no other in those last two weeks. So, could it be that Zach messing with Killian caused his own death? Caught in the act of vandalizing Killian’s car…did the killer get exposed while trying to stop the act? or did the vengeance/rage demand blood for such transgressions? Was the note actual Zach’s or was it from the killer himself? A timeline of all events, from Seth’s harassment letters, to this latest turn of events and that letter is needed. While Todd makes an interesting subject, I don’t see him regretting stabbing Killian, nor the motivation to kill the one caught harassing Killian after upsetting his sister Gilly so badly; the timeline doesn’t seem to point at Jake either but as to his jealousy, we may understand more with Asher’s new status. Interestingly enough, Jesse leaving Zach’s side seems totally out of character to me. Hmmm 🤔, could Jesse be obsessed with Killian? Could Jesse be a frustrated and closeted gay living in the shadow of the homophobic Zach? Serving as a lackey under the bully Zach? OMG 😱, still too many variables but they all seem to be within 7 degrees of Kevin Ba….ahem, Killian. 😆

Batman is most likely adversarial whether he is Seth’s killer or not. An antagonist is dangerous as they provoke emotional responses to what should be considered a verbal assault and perhaps including hate speech. Killian definitely needs to identify anyone wanted close reach contact, and needs to do that prior to having more discreet relocations. Maybe with luck things can soon return to a more normal if the killer is locked up; but then that leaves Gilly. Gilly was obsessed from the beginning of this tell, but the little reprieve of winning her opportunity to turn the gay boy straight has now backfire on everyone involve; Gilly was dishonest with Killian and more importantly herself…she’s incapable of being a female friend, Todd is a putz for not allowing Killian or his sibling Jake explain…and then to betray his brother without hearing their side. If indeed Gilly is the culprit damaging Killian’s windows, windshield, and the car in general, then she is dangerous. Rage killings or manslaughter are too common as the victims know the perpetrators and allow themcloser contact that puts them at severe risk for rage 😤 violence. Rage/anger unchecked is a mental health issue; Gilly is not just some love sick teen girl, has has crossed dangerous lines in escalating violence already…that makes continuing violence more likely; whether now or in the future. 😔

The blame remains with her for being greedy; wanting max when a settlement would have been more than adequate and not added unnecessarily to the cost of the case/to the state; she took her risks. The likely earlier settlement offer minus all state costs and damages to image would be the max in my mind.

Sure Mom haha, like a wild bull jumping the fence to take the cows, I was out late carousing with multiple girls. Don’t you worry though, I’ll let you know as soon as I find out whether you’re going to be a grandma soon or not, ok? Haha ….That’s the unbelievable truth my friend had to smile and laugh about as he told (sold) the truth about a night of debauchery …when in fact he was sweating 😅 the next month!

Haha 😂, Hmmm 🤔, would there be subtle differences in detecting a lie, a white lie, or the ole lie by omission? …sparkles dance, twist, elongate and flip, etc??? 😂

Oh yes, you do very well; storyline and production line. Haha Perhaps all too well, as anticipation can be an bitch in heat with no jackals for chase!

Simple fix, see.

However…patiently is a relative term. 😛

The fact that there is only three boys breaking away, out of thousands over six generations, itself is troubling; and that’s assuming a lot since much of the split programs should be veiled from them. So how many programs and how many Aryan Nation people are in this secret society…and why? What are the present goals?

Even a marriage takes time and context to understand the many years that culminated in the two parts that are now becoming a whole. So is a hold back strategic for more personal reasons or for the overall game plan…or both.

Oh goodness, these two need to stop over thinking, and over reacting; stop, think, and talk about your own feelings as well as listening and learning more from your love interest.

So should we ask what makes the auras pulse? Well I guess the rise in body temps and associated sweat may be a giveaway, but do they pulse in hints as to shapes…resembling say… a peach 🍑 or eggplant 🍆 ?

Yes, but what the hell did Beethoven say?

Their main goal was/is to expose them, but they are running out of options; maybe the more simplistic thinking humans can add a new element to the mix that opens new options not yet considered/tried??

Yeah I’m thinking I would have at least asked what is Ahnenerbe, and why are you guys considered risks, before jumping all in; this is much more than sauna to pool jumps.

Problem solving doesn’t always take the most direct path to the solution; while trial and error is not a silent teacher.

OMG, these two are clueless. The words from Carter about Jeremy’s concern for him actual sound as if it’s two fold; his concern for Carter making a rash and wrong decision indeed, but concern for himself too, as his fear of losing someone precious to him yet again. Dang Jeremy, get yourself together and speak the truth of your feelings. Umm 🤔, well umm 🧐, yes Carter we’re more than just best friends and I’m thinking we should see where this takes us…together; you frustrating idiot. Argh, poor Elena trying desperately to get to Carter, to tell him her most important message, for his safety and for her love,…my son, Ethan your twin murdered….instead we have …I love you, then lifeless limp; Pray that once again she is as tough as she has proven thus far and Carter is able to get her her rather quickly. 😤 😡 🤢 #%&@ that dirty thug needs to be pursued right back to Dexter while detective Cliff Hanger figures this crime out; obviously the gun shots didn’t leave the tape marks, bruises, and bloody concussion evidence that Elena is sure to have. Maybe the thug shot both her kidneys and she’ll need a donor, that prompts testing… Maybe Aunt Sheila will can and recognize Elena as Carter’s mother Grace, at the hospital in recovery I mean 😪. 🙏

I get the feeling they’re all doing that to some degree Todd wanted to talk before, now he’s unwilling to listen. Gilly is much too hopeful to convert the gay boy. Jake just wants to have fun…and that’s also with the same gay boy. Gay boy is following his pointer…which turns to wherever he’s focused. Asher sets himself up then runs away, but now wants to act as if everything else is suppose to be on hold while he’s sorting himself out. Kane is so excited he foolishly yells and chats with Killian…while still within the lioness’ den, if she overhears that could be devastating to him, Adam and Killian. EVERYONE SETTLE DOWN AND THINK!! 😛

Yup, the bigger they are…the harder they fall, he should have known even he can’t defy gravity.

Wow, so when in PE he really could be picking his team! Hahaha 🤪, assuming he’d risk it. 😜 🤷‍♂️ 🤔 Score points with jocks or score while team building with the rainbow coalition, oh goodness, too many possibilities. Yes, stereotyping is allowed in humor!

It’s a nice blend of humor, mystery, suspense, and romance. It going to interesting to see where you take this but I love what you done for the start of this story. It’s l also hard to tell how much of Aaron’s personality is indeed his or whether society has morphed to taking on a more direct interaction with people which have shown interest. Haha, whatever the case, it seems to work well so far.

Dexter is indeed the Devil 👿 in disguise. Wow, how and why did Ethan not report Dexter’s manic and brutal attack? Then likewise, he didn’t share the wild claims of Jeremy’s unrecognized love for Dexter??? Huge mistakes, but what was the reasoning, as I have to believe something kept Ethan from telling of these events. Yet any manipulation of Ethan didn’t result in Dexter’s wish for Ethan to refuse Jeremy’s hand in marriage. Hmmm 🤔, most curious indeed. Goodness, poor Elena/Grace is looking for a miracle at this point it seems. But hopefully a miracle 🙏 it will be, and a quick enough recovery to speak of Dexter’s misdeeds. Poor Ethan radiated at high dosages but yet not recognizing and suffering burns. Yeah, like Jeremy is really going to love you as a jealous and insane murderer…as the love of his life suffered and died at your hands, and twisted mind. It sounds like mental instability may run in Dexter’s family as his mom was divorced but by Dexter’ reasoning she committed suicide due to ex-husband’s re-marriage to another women; Elena.

Feedback is a complicated thing, is it quantitative? Qualitative? And how accurate would the design of those measures reflect the emotions you’ve invoked? While the feedback on GayAuthors is superior to most any other posting platform; audience size, recent posting exposure, and our wonderful seven (7) emojis to summarize our feelings at the end of each chapter, and the forum type comments with each chapter and/or possibly an author community page. For the more savvy or dedicated readers, we have the main story listing page, listing all chapters and allowing overall story emojis, with story comment and review. Of course, like many critics, there are no qualitative metrics of the reviewer other than the more quantitative popularity of the reviewer, reflecting their total comments and collective emoji counts. Again this is superior to most any other feedback an amateur or free open press author will probably get; in my humble 2 cent opinion of course. A Dog’s Life according to my granddaddy; Sniff it. Can’t eat it, fuck it. Can’t fuck it, piss on it. Which is somewhat quantifiable, as the availability will guarantee the dogs return… Well, until qualitative things enter the equation. Did we consider the head petting and ear scratching? Two bowls of equal food offerings, one on the empty porch and the other next to man in the rocking chair or the boy with the ball, each with those plentiful pets and ear scratches… My simple science says the more emotional and qualitative elements win. So the long story now short. Don’t you dare stop writing! Though not all readers provide feedback, not all readers will comment at all, not all comments reflect total review but focus on highlights or personal emotions, many comments after a rollercoaster of emotions with the emotions at the end of the chapter reflected most in emojis. Like the dogs, your readers keep coming back, you scratch the ears by responding to the few that comment, and even the rest of the pack lives vicariously through the following reflected in views of story and comments, as even the emojis in commentary is really yours. You inspired those and most anticipate more. And the wonderful thing is, the comments of a follower gets attention of their followers and a new reader starts your story from their own start point/time. So for one comment, no telling how many viewers agree, other than views that multiply. You have followers both active and passive, so don’t stop writing or posting! For me, a very big thank you; for sharing your stories for all of us to enjoy, thank you for your many reply comments, and for your personal interactions you have with so many. Also, thank you for having the courage to open yourself and your own vulnerabilities to criticism from the faceless keyboard audience. Once in a while the dog nips but hopefully doesn’t bite. The fact that they are there at all reflects their interest, despite any inter-turmoil they may have. Be yourself and stay your course!

Stellers, this is a nice rope I thought you would enjoy. Oh, I bet you can’t tie this special slip knot…it’s call a noose. I know you’re a brave man, but I bet you’re not brave enough to put that over your head. Wow 😮, you are amazing. I think the coach may have a new position for you; like in baseball it’s called home 🏠, if you’re lucky that is. As they say, give them enough rope to hang themselves.

Yup, money, territory, political power, power over others, etc, it all seems to comes back to that key ingredient…greed for more.