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Also we have the problem with the high volume of foot traffic, as the boys self serve, for multiple courses, and this will require that U to be a little more spread/spaced for that freedom of movement.

Likewise, just a tidbit of knowledge doesn’t automatically mean, oh hell, you know this so I might as well tell you everything. I haven’t told you yet about another part, mages, magic, of our supernatural...WHAT? That defies secrecy logic; do we go ahead and invite him to the pack meeting? lol ok, I’m done now! Hahaha Your storyline is still fantastic, so please don’t take my comments to be a slam, it’s just sharing a classification and protection type environment. Beyond what you already know, Sgt Shwartz says: I KNOW NOTHING!.”

If the boys did go to public school that would be the easiest bus route for the driver; drive to Carleton’s house load ‘em up, then return to do the drop off, ✅ It would not be nearly as traumatic for the boys to attend school now as originally thought, as now there is little chance any brother would ever be far from another brother; at any time! 😂 Even at home, where do you go to have privacy, where someone else is not already doing the same thing; shower...no, the sink and toilet are still available; you’ll have to pretend to be doing a stinky, lol, to pull that off it’s a good thing boys can fart on command! Just thinking and reflecting to gain perspective... 🤔

Don’t get too wrapped about in the details @astone2292, of “waaay too many errors in italicization and punctuation.” Like the Lycans hearing what is barely spoken. “We can read, undarstan, and Njoy wat is wRitt3n w3n them English gieks jut dont git it#” 😊 Oh Dave, did you ever wonder exactly why and how the manager “happened” to be there, at the right time, in the right place, to overhear the conversations of Lycans, when your superior hearing should have detected the presence of any normally approaching humans. 🤔 Keep the updates coming, as we have to “scratch” out a mating and quickly morph Vinnie some bonding growth; he can even do it before the stitches are wasted at the tailor! Little Vinnie needs to adapt before the smug manager and his evil master coordinates intelligence and returns to strike Vinnie in a weakened state; the presence of the NY delegation helps make up for a Vinnie transitioning weakness and Mace’s distraction to care for him. Likewise, make they are objective enough to still be wary of Quin! 😡

You didn’t forget, you were allowing the true recommended cure time on the cement pool tub; so now the concrete apron/patio can be poured and the surfacing can be applied to the below the tile water line. So you actually planned it well and didn’t let the kids get too curious, hahaha 😝

Hmmm, eye for eye vengeance due to interstate child napping, enslavement, and prostitution of minors; so...the children went missing, never to be seen again, yet living a life of slavery and sexual abuse. They deserve no better, only a trial of determination, if guilty, stripped of identity, they go missing, they suffer, repeat as necessary!

Hmmm, Mari was the fiancé of Colin and near sister-in-law to Taran. The views she has of the children being taken too quickly and without choice seems more jaundiced than I’d expect; especially from someone that had been so close within the “royalty” her relationship had placed her. But she did quit the syndicate, so how much of Colin’s views or influence did she have, or vice versa? Taran sees the major foe in broad daylight, and closely monitoring the anti-syndicate protest... hmmm 🤔.

Yeah, I think the older kids under Maria and Peter’s approval need to work as an order manager; then as the results prove themselves, let the venders know you business credentials and establish the accounts for the orders to be placed weekly or biweekly, for next day delivery. Baking bread and growing vegetables help ensure the true fresh Maria needs and the greenhouse should be starting to produce soon! Likewise, the previous order lists of clothes for the boys should be compiled as depreciating inventory, but the laundry inspection should be used to check off on any clothes needing replacement or repairs. The store room should have a back stock of shoes, socks, slacks, underclothes, and shirts. The ages, with height, weight and shoes sizes, should be a tracked for growth and health anyway. Then the growth and associated rotation of hand me downs would be easy to assign as those recorded height/weights change; thank goodness, boys or easier to dress and the focus is more towards color coordination, conditions and functionality! 😂 When is Peter picking up the motor coach? Oh, and definitely splurge for the toilet/bathroom option, it is a motor coach! Can you imagine, “dad, I need to pee”...times 30 over, and then the ole “ARE WE THERE YET!”

Charlie doesn’t mind giving up his room; now we have to hope he shares with Carleton or a brother why he is so dependently attached to Carleton.

Well, we had enough for one team of boys, now we can have enough to field a full practice of opposing teams! Lol. How long before we have the stands full of spectators too? So home schooling now has a concern for class room sizes. Carleton is soon to have his own compound with a storeroom of commodities such as clothing, shoes, and school supplies. The theater will need to seat a minimum of 35 and buses usually hold no more than 45; many challenges as even a vacation will now require either a charter bus or a family motor coach; even then, the older boys will need to form troops as they chaperone the younger brothers. lol More seriously, this is so, so sad. Even more sad is that these stories are easily true as the numbers here in this story only reflect somewhat of the cases which come to light of the authorities; the same assumptions are that the real numbers are much higher. It is tough to imagine any child in this situation, but one has to remember these are peoples’ kids; people either too poor and/or manipulated into giving their kids into sex slavery. Many of the parents were probably told of the grand opportunity or the education their kids would get, all lies of course. Either way, the level of corruption is unforgivable; whether the parents are complaisant or complicit, it matters little to children whose lives are to be hell.

They, the friends on high, can’t move any rescue kids without his presence, hence the face to face, but likewise they can’t hold the kids in a region to risk their exposure back into the clutches of the evils that otherwise await those “probable but not unexpected “ kids. 🤦

We can’t let those building contractors go home, all that time repositioning equipment would just add time to the next phase! Hahaha 🤣

Gets wind or sniffs it out?

Oh wow, what a rollercoaster you have built for the journey of these young lovers. I was very unsettled in the way book one ended; thinking that the story had terminated before its time. Then you started with the posting of this continuing saga, and what a tale it is. Together, these stories take us on a journey of every emotion known to man; and it’s so intense as we often go from one extreme to the other within a paragraph or two. But the rollercoaster theme does final arrive at destination love; but not just for our power team but their besties too! 😂 Now little Sean gets to grow while surrounded by his complete family of blood and love. This is an intensely emotional but a very rewarding read, the plot and twist will have you ready to puke 🤢 and then screaming in excitement, then to jerk to tears before discovering love ❤️. Thanks for sharing you story, your discussions, and time with us; and congratulations on completing a wonderful story.

Arrrgh, the anxieties of adolescence, puberty, and sexuality; nothing but unpredictable and law defying, with high likelihood of unstable compounds! 😂 You capture this so well, as we often don’t recognize our own attributes for focus on our insecurities. Conversely, we tend to place the objects of our desires for friendship, love, and attention, upon an unrealistic and unobtainable pedestal of perfection. I look forward to the emotional journey of possibilities we are sure to find in this tale of Trey, Dallas, and the team. As always, thank you Comsey, for sharing your masterful tales of gay life.

Wow, what a egotistical maniac! So sad the blindness this shadow mage Gregoro has; the disrespect for anyone or anything that doesn’t support his further empowerment. Elaine proves she is indeed a fierce adversary. It appears her peripheral awareness and cooling thinking multiplies the strengths of her native powers. This is a great backfill store of context and character of these mainstream characters; excellent and exciting chapter!

Woohoo 🎉 a new post! Settling in for the read now...yippee Oh yeah, a great chapter. The emotions of love enveloped in anxiety are very real and so reflective of social influences; love is so much sweeter when served with banana caramel cream! I suspect the team is about to learn in the biggest and most realistic lab available; the real world with all it’s challenges. It’s great to see an update on our young heroes, loving it and please keep the posts coming!

Things that make you say hmmm 🤔.

LOL. This made me laugh. There are things you want to say, but you want to at least try to appear to be reasonable and considerate. You think, 'Got to give him a chance to take a breath. We only just got this chapter.' Then someone comes along and says it like you really want to on the inside because you're just enjoying it so much. Well, @astone2292, the testament to your success is being driven by demands without regard for a breathe, nor opportunity to wipe the tears of joy shed realizing you achieved your goal. I do await the next release with eager anticipation; without whips or prods, no sha-pows of that barking whip today! LOL Thank you for the recognition of contribution, though that contribution was nothing more than a shared thought and notion towards an already noteworthy creation of your own labor; I appreciated the attention given without resentment of meddling in your creation. I now wonder what beautiful creature the mating bond will give Vincent for is Wolf; will it be of something traditional or will we be gasping at a reflection of the shadow mage’s unique soul and powers? Thanks again for the wonderful creation and journey for which you’re taking us.

You remind me of the old smokehouse and root cellars of country pantries. The ranch is sprouting boys so quickly that we are looking at a shortage of pantry space. Likewise, I believe too many of the old ways are totally dismissed when relying on modern conveniences; yet when the power goes out, the time before spoilage is reduced so shouldn’t we combine the best of old and new? lol Hmmm, smokehouse, greenhouse, root cellar, etc. I’m enjoying how the boys’ home is expanding. That life connection between boys who may or may not have crossed paths on the city streets, have certainly crossed paths on the streets of hard knocks; the immediate bonds between the boys surviving those trials are something of a beautiful rebirth born out of tragedy, This brings emotions so deeply sad but can’t help but end in tears of joy. @CLJobe Thank you for the heartwarming journey!

Fantastic, the visualization I got as little Vinnie displayed the power and manipulation of his magic, in multiple affinities, was like his clairvoyant roller coaster...an exciting ride. The power of the non-magical side was great as it was a very natural introduction for Mace as he too had been included in the personal petition to the pack and as a mate; Beautifully done! Thanks for creating this fantasy tale and sharing it with us here; now more, dance is over! 😝

To expand upon that, I think that bonding is also a deeper more determined bond. Those boys, newly cemented brothers, are not as likely to abandon or give up on one another. By extension, the grieving loss by Carleton, of the first child of shared circumstances has given those boys the strongest testament to him as their protector, a loving father, their dad.

@centexhairysub, So true of betrayal: betraying the kingdom, betraying the emperor, betraying their lord, betraying their commander, but worst of all is betraying their own humanity, it’s not a done deal and it’s eating at Ferino enough to have him begging forgiveness. It will only get worse. Lady Nisa is no Lady and is a major supporter of Lord Revi and treason against the kingdom; did this selfish “Lady” contribute to her own father’s death? The Burning Feather and Empress Rushi need to be caught and terminally corrected in a fashion that the treaty in marriage will not be in breach; publicly betrayed by her own people?? Lol, that would be rich. @lilansuiThank you for returning to post yet again to this wonderful story. Please, I beg, continue to provide these installments of love, mystery, murder and betrayal.

Uups, I have the prublem tuu sumetimes.

I have no idea of their concept for the layout, but the the idea of an outer perimeter of rooms opening into an inner atrium (w/kitchen) garden would help bring a sense of equality and inclusion while avoiding long dormitory halls and the separation cliques that configuration may bring. Many like a performance hall, amphitheater or other layouts that bring the audience to the central attraction; here the family space needs to be more central with more equal distance to all. I’m hoping for more jelly beans! Hahaha