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  1. Philippe

    Chapter 19

    What a terrible nightmare to have to live with; hopefully the subconscious is pulling a memory fragment from his gray matter that may be a clue to this familiar but yet unknown man. Despite the crowd now occupying the room with Rick, the winds of Marty’s voice have left a clue in the pages turned of that yearbook; who is this man? Was he school staff, the parent of a student, or an entrusted community member masked as a school supporter? 😣 Such evil manifesting the devil himself. 🤦‍♂️
  2. Philippe

    Chapter 26

    The old advertisements were so powerful…just, let your fingers do the walking.
  3. Philippe

    Chapter 26

    Log out of Grindr
  4. Philippe

    Chapter 26

  5. Philippe

    Chapter 26

    Who shot JR was discussed here first, then aired on TV.
  6. Philippe

    Chapter 26

    Davin runs from these sterile home environment for a night OUT in a different town…say Tempton, he like orange see through undies.
  7. Philippe

    Chapter 18

    Yup, back before the internet a higher education from self studies was hard to cum about. I might have an old VHS of those same studies myself. Such art is hard to trash when so much was gleamed from those studies. 😇
  8. Philippe

    Chapter 14

    I had thought the same though at the time I didn’t comment, but then as you point out they mention avoiding the cab company being a possible compromise in locating the guys. Taking the cab around the city blocks then back to get Sara’s car would have at least given them an escape but then no location leak.
  9. Philippe

    Chapter 12

    Adam seems a little possessive but agreeing to give the neighbor boys a ride to school earlier shows his compassion or at least some effort to meet Rick part way. Nevertheless, I think Adam will have to do some adjusting to fall within Rick’s calling of heart.
  10. Philippe

    Chapter 11

    It could be awkward for some but this relationship Rick has with the parents tells me they would accept Adam coming with Rick and the boys on the placement trip. Rick promised to tell Adam all about Martin. What better way than having his parents embarrassing him with tales of childhood.
  11. Philippe

    Chapter 7

    I enjoyed the reflection of my own acceptance of being more gay than bi, and the slower acceptance affects on my life decisions; especially with my college roommate and lover of my senior year. So my perspective is rather biased as it is somewhat biographically commiserating my love life; not sex life, my love life.
  12. Philippe

    Chapter 7

    And the familiar face was present near the pub where Rick met Alexis; hmmm, old teacher, aide, a student’s parent/sibling, etc.
  13. Philippe

    Chapter 26

    Twinks look hung just in comparison to their build. My twink college roommate looked somewhat hung but he was actually only slightly longer there himself but he then looked rather slim there too when laid side by side with mine.
  14. Philippe

    Chapter 26

    It brings a whole new meaning to the expression of being a bench warmer; but warming the team bench or rostr is an admirable position…to play with the team.
  15. Philippe

    Chapter 5

    Top tier, he can be chief bitch.
  16. Philippe

    Chapter 4

    Hard to ignore candy when in the candy store; he’s only a few years difference in age, so it’s totally understandable that he would notice and possibly be comparing his options…it’s only healthy and natural to know yourself. 👀 😋 😇
  17. Philippe

    Chapter 4

    I thinking maybe street cops on the Jarvis payroll or being blackmailed into providing cover; so threatening Shane with his own problems and a reminder that Jarvis will know you’re talking is quite intimidating for a kid thinking this is honest cops. Yup, the detectives need the security tapes and some monitoring on who these cops really are. And now that I read the other comments about these cops I see I’m not alone; Golden Boy Run a Sting.
  18. Even at my age now I still think it’s a near life long friend passing by when I’m out working in the yard and a curious neighbor slows in passing. I also want to call and update him on my parallel project that obviously he can no longer continue at his place. He was unfortunately working on his project and had a tragic accident. A friendship of many decades is now just an echo of my friend. I can’t even ride my motorcycle without thinking of him as we learned and played on our first bikes back in our early teens. Just a few days ago I almost bypassed my own exit to swing by and visit him…not at the cemetery, but at his house back around in his shop. The mind is a tricky thing, yet it also allows me to remember all those good years and memories; for that I’m eternally grateful.
  19. Philippe

    Chapter 26

    No it’s from before he gave up football and focused on being himself…a power bottom.
  20. Philippe

    Chapter 26

    Which one was later known to be the 18-wheeler truck driver?
  21. Philippe

    Chapter 26

    Yeah but kickers are not the burly, scrappy type. If anything it’s more likely to be the poor little sap that dad wants to be an athlete, but the coach is afraid of him getting crushed and mangled in any contact sport.
  22. Philippe

    Chapter 26

    No! She would dare do that to Trace. 😇
  23. Philippe

    Chapter 26

    I big factor may be how the news spreads and how it’s handled by his old teammates; spewing hate and traitorous words may give Joel motivation to play hard for the team that embraces him now. So Fletcher had better accept him if they want his best.
  24. Philippe

    Chapter 26

    @Krista, thank you for expanding this great story and for all the extra work involved in doing so. I’m loving the story and feel it has much more depth to explore. The character development pace and depth are filled with suspenseful anticipation; both within the story and for us as the readers. The balance of character significance and contribution to the story content is what I love about your writing. Even when a character is absent, we can feel they will again nudge the story or give it levity sometime soon. Ahem, is Cody asking, “are we there yet?” Thank you again for sharing your stories and the interactions you share with us so frequently.
  25. Philippe

    Chapter 26

    A qb that loves getting sacked and piled on?
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