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Chapter 11 - Third Date
Philippe commented on ChromedOutCortex's story chapter in Chapter 11 - Third Date
If Marcus witnesses who agitated Dean is around Kris or to a lessor extent Leah, he may put things together. I think Marcus has found peace after venturing out from his father’s oppressive presence; it also seemed he is more progressively adjusted in that life after; perhaps by happenstance Marcus will catch Dean’s longing to step out for his real self and real interest. I think Dean will need that closer sense of acceptance to consider himself normal. -
Home for thanksgiving!
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The ole undefined…we need to take a break…or let’s start over as friends. What does that really mean? Too often I venture to say the meaning is different even for the two people involved…well I thought you were saying we’re done but trying to spare me, while the other may saying no I was just trying to thinks; well care to share on that as a wait for me, but I’ll ghost you until I’m ready. 🤔 I’m supposed to mind read or be happy being shunned? If I step back and do the same thinking while likewise not being able to share thoughts or progress with the one I’m supposed to be in a relationship with, then I’m thinking it’s not meant to be. So don’t act surprised when I didn’t wait for weeks, or months, thinking oh yeah, my boyfriend isn’t talking to me …but we’re still together???
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out of this world!
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Nah, go big, go strong,…go Tigers!
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Another red herring? The sleep deprived Killian hung up and ran back inside. The narrative doesn’t confirm or deny Killian’s intended copying those papers. It seems a possible twist as the distractions with min sleep is affecting his judgment. Even sleeping in his car out in the open is another suspense cliffhanger. Argh 😠, Killian reminds me of a genius tested best friend of my dad. Even my dad would shake his head and say throughout the years, “how can the idiot be a g#$ d*(& genius?” He was very book and studies smart, but in everyday life he was less than fully engaged. Him and dad convinced me to sell him a 1970 Chevy muscle car, with the less common large block, large heads, 454 engine; this car was classic within the post production years. The genius didn’t maintain it as I did, allowing a coolant hose to leak without him ever checking the fluids. Then after getting a red idiot light for Temp, he continued to drive it home as it was a very sturdy car that could handle it. The engine cooked warping the heads and scoring the cylinders as even the oil could not protect it at those temps and the neglectful abuse. Yup, an absolute genius, as dad regretted having to tell me that my muscle car, former but still beloved, was irreparably damaged as an original limited production vehicle. 😢 So…did Killian actually make those copies or was he too distracted in his sleep deprived state of mind?
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Oh goodness, is the retirement seeking detective wanting to remove a murdering criminal or does he get enticed by a sizable retirement package? My oh my, Killian, please tell me you had copies of everything made; whether camera, phone pic, or copy service app. I want to believe the detective, I want to believe the department is safe, however, this is the jurisdiction of the murder and I’m sure Fenton has eyes somewhere…just hopefully not within the department. Likewise, you already made the connection to possible deals already within Micah’s story, a copy leaked to the freedom of speech press may have been the best Plan B to handle Fenton, as the cat can not be put back within the bag…without some damage from exposure. No, no, no Killian. This is not the time and place to let your guard down, even at the police station you’re very exposed. Likewise, the clock is ticking for Jake. You have to figure out a way to extract him WITHOUT alerting Fenton Black; remembering Jake wasn’t exactly cooperating last time you met, as he basically brought attention to the situation alerting Fenton Black to your presence.
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Don’t forget the person that took the photo as the description is as it is definitely not a self, nor would Fenton Black have allowed it.
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You know how to drive a stick? No, butt I know how to ride one. 😇 Those bumps really jar your teeth too.
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The gif only has that two seater but we know there’s a third occupant there somewhere.
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Well the key words were repeated and 3ven distracted I have to believe Andrew heard…bible thumping, civilian, doctor. So those pills need to be lab tested immediately but through an alias account name; Silas is on his own mission of revenge for Gallagher as he continues the mission for Father. Poor Will, trying to watch out for Andrew but sets him up to get psychotic drugs make him bat shit crazy 🤪.
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Baja it is
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Self-immolation seems a better description as they were all committed to their own demise; unrestrained and not immobilized. They were not killed, they sacrificed themselves voluntarily, moving to the pre planned area knowing the consequences of their actions and embracing their own destiny. None were classically murdered, it was mass suicide by fire/ explosion .
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Wow, wow, wow. Mom, Dawn, and Arthur are all so wrapped up in running Creek’s life but are totally ignoring what he wants. Dad noticeably distanced himself from the shit show making me think he’s not so much on board to not listen to Creek. Good on Dailan for his plan and for sticking to it. Good on Creek for standing up to his family and for defending his own will.
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Only contested for a short while…then that 18 wheeler came out of nowhere. So actually, In a very convoluted way, the knowledge of possible funds beyond the estate sales could put a motive on the backs of those relatives that might need/want to control the brats (Darren’s) estate monies. So the question is; did any of them have access and motives to set up the accident of his parents?
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The Message in the Rock
Philippe commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Message in the Rock
It’s as if Ron Weasley is seeing the spiders, I’m seeing riddles. Riddles why did it have to be riddles? Why, why riddles? I hate riddles. 🤦♂️ The Alpha is having quite the time practicing restraint at level apparently never required before. The little clairvoyant twink done put a spell on his wolf; a powerful spell…where he removed his shirt, exposing his spell casting milky skin with powerful little teats within an areola concentrated blossom. The whole of this twink begging to be licked completely to remove the confusion from not being claimed.- 15 comments
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Running back Defensive lineman Offensive lineman Quarterback Coach Touchdown celebration
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I think the Chinese people much like the Japanese civilians, view the military and government for the policies and actions that allowed the actions of the individuals that treated others as if they were a mad-max overlord. My ex is Japanese, yet we had several Korean, Chinese, and Philippine friends. Even my marriage to a former war enemy could be viewed the same way, yet all is different from the past for most…though we were told once to leave a seafood hut, that they would not serve a Jap. That only happened one time with outward animosity. It also happened once in Japanese as it was not what the man approved of with a Japanese marriage to an American, yet the vast majority view it much more openly accepted.
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Yes, her part was noticeable skipped over in the security cam vids and there were no laser eyes targeting Elenor; perhaps they already locked her in the basement for obedience training.
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Still early early for make up BJ…unless Davin wants to demonstrate what he thinks Joel owes him.
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@Okiegradtakes it back! The regular posting schedule will work just fine! 🙏
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From his vantage point Joel hasn’t exactly been welcomed either, so if I’m not one of you then I must still be a Tiger! I kinda see the irony in that they don’t like him being from Templeton but that says unwelcomed at Fletcher to Joel. So in reality he is a traitor to Templeton but he is a traitor to Fletcher too…hmmm, how does that work?
