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Celethiel

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  1. why is anything abandoned...?
  2. here i thought Adam philips was putting it out there that he decided he was going to be Bisexual "AGAIN" making me wonder what he decided he was before but no it's a study.
  3. XP was already obsolete, it was obsolete emedietly after windows Vista or 7 came out, we'll say 7 since it came out after Vista... this is not to say that the new systems are better, just that the older system became obsolete when the newer ones came out. after all reciprocating engines became obsolete after the Turbine, and Steam after Deisel...
  4. yes yes, you must get on your knees and appologize and beg for forgiveness, I know it'll hurt. but you must sacrifice yourself for the greater good of all the dom Luka Fans out there, and every one else who misses him.
  5. I have heard that the natural world has taken over Chernobyl. There actually quite a few towns that have disapeared in the last 200 years much less in human history.... Montana has so many that there have been books published on the Ghost Towns of Montana... There are at least 2 in Namibia (Kolmanskop, Elizabeth Bay), and the tv series "life after people" actually talks about quite a few abandoned sites around the U.S. and the world. These things always makes me want to rebuild and restore them to their former glory...
  6. http://news.yahoo.com/blogs/trending-now/incredible-video-shows-river-returning-to-the-desert-in-israel-after-years-of-drought-150925806.html?vp=1 I thought someone might find this interesting
  7. http://news.yahoo.com/video/whoknew-ghost-ships-060000673.html here you go something more.
  8. you're pretty much useless for anything but manuel labor WHEN you've graduated Highschool, (I would know i can't get a "decent" job and I did graduate from highschool)so there really isn't much difference in getting a job... the difference would only be I graduated from highschool, i can now go to college, where as you might not be able to with an 8th grade eduation.... My grandmother only had an 8th grade education.... she also owned at least two businesses.... her mother didn't go to college until she was in around her 50s.
  9. and what is the difference between primary and secondary school? And if it's elementary, and highschools... Why make a marked difference?
  10. http://travel.yahoo.com/photos/hauntingly-beautiful-ghost-towns-across-america-1394143079-slideshow/ another one of my interests that i thought i should share, ghost towns
  11. http://screen.yahoo.com/buzzfeed/31-random-movie-facts-know-175455702.html
  12. nope Luka left because he's mad at you, and won't come back until you appologize for that thing you did that one time Bad bad billy
  13. what about unicorns they're extinct i tell you! we killed them off to make things like Denmark's Throne, Chinese Folk Aphrodesiacs and to help emperor's Age gracefully.
  14. Celethiel

    Chapter 1

    hmm interesting I like it, That being said the only reall major problem is that you're stuck on very long detailed explainations. It takes away from the story, and slows it down. You should piece it out through your chapters... a casual reference here or there... remember your character has to deal with his past throughout the entire story not just the first chapter, therefor the long explainations aren't needed. btw for all that big explaination of Jayden not showing himself... the reader never saw his face even when you reveal it, i would almost expect it to be shocking or something the way you kept pointing out it was being hidden from the readers/main characters point of view.... also what was the main boy's hair look like, i either missed it or you didn't put it in It's a good premise over all and I want to read more WRITE MOARE!
  15. well that's mideaval politics dear
  16. https://news.yahoo.com/rare-diamond-reveals-earths-interior-wet-181429521.html Found this as i was leaving yahoo to come here a while ago.
  17. it's hardly advice when the doctor says: here take these it'll make you feel better.... and doesn't even do the nessarry leg work to find out if these pill will counteract with ones you already take for one or for two if it's even whats really wrong with you.
  18. http://screen.yahoo.com/broken-news-daily/mysterious-ghost-ship-incredible-history-004502570.html It's interesting and just too bad
  19. good news: it's raining, does that mean spring has sprung?
  20. horse meat in dog food.... anyway i understand Horses don't taste that good so thusly i can't imagine people being fooled for very long by that... for a second i thought you said you still had the first deer you ever killed... i was like erm... that can't be very good by now
  21. nnooooes! they call that erotica when it's written, there is a difference or as i like to call it, perverted Drivel.
  22. *thinks practical and viable can be equatable.* you mean they're taking Pediatric Cancer patients and making them do a dance marathon for research the horrors! the horrors! (we also need a Horror emote ) and people are paying them to do this I think there are some sick sadistic people out there
  23. what are they asking about and really why are they asking.... as in does this have relevance to anything... i predict after this cerculates through the net for a while, the voices calling for Bieber to be tossed out of the U.S. is going to skyrocket. agreed... we'd see a totally different young man after that
  24. which is hard for me to imagine "teen to be the youngest to make a fusion reactor." when we haven't been able to come up with a viable one yet....
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