Celethiel

The buzz of chainsaws filled the air like the sound of a thousand angry bees, and the smell of burning wood filtered through the trees. A single being shuddered and shook its mane, turning its baleful eyes towards the sound of men. The Unicorn had lived for 500 years and for all those years the forest knew peace, untouched by the hands of man. Now something had changed the balance, but the forest had been on the edge of a human settlement for centuries, and men knew that the unicorn was there.

A single Unicorn is forced onto a journey that will change his life and the lives of everyone he meets forever.

nope this was a guy who said something about phelps not trying, and if he had as much talet...

was he the one complaining about Michael Phelps?

you know I should say I hate you for that... it's sad I don't like sad endings.... i really really don't.... there is enough sadness in the world without adding more... even my sad stories i try to leave it in the air to the readers interpetation... that's now much bad endings bug me. You started slipping from first person to third person perspective in, the 3rd chapter I think it was, and back again, you need to stick with it... Now i need go into a corner and cry, thanks for that JC

I can safely say I really do like this story, it's a pretty good read. One i would recommend to others if given the chance. At first I was a little put off by the kids, he made me think, Brat.... but he was lovable. I was sad about chase, although not as sad as the character.... and wasn't sure which boy he'd pick, although since shadow boy and mind boy had a thing for him.... heck you could tell they all had a thing for him, Chance all of them... even if he couldn't tell I mean no one sleeps consistantly in another guys bed every night...unless they have a thing for him... I did thoroughly enjoy the story... and actually did hope him and Chance would get together... i should have known better.

interesting story, I hope you will finish it

I found it to be an interesting start to the story that you've got prepared, I fully intend to read the rest that you've laid out. there were only 2 errors the glared at me like, well like a bull in a china shop... it's spelled Sergeant not Sargent... and it was He enlisted, not he unlisted... Enjoyed reading

well that was certianly interesting... although parts of it, including especially the ending left me... well lost

yes Thank you Lord for making the Indians take pitty on us Poor Pilgrims, so that we can over the next few years... Spread diseases, and take more of this "land of Plenty" for ourselves, for the Faith and For England. Thank you for the plentiful Harvest so that we may survive another winter... And in a few years about this time, thank you for the burning of them witches, even if one was a pastor... Thank you for our lives may we live them long in our own blindless intollerance of others... And that my dears is how Thanksgiving was founded

well now isn't that interesting entirely interesting. I like it Especially the end part where Connor-pheles comes back... I wonder what'll happen then....

then why mention it in the first place?

no actually i didn't

no it's part of Celethiel's evil empire.

thats where they got their name from...

Do Brits know all the states in their own union, they have a small horde... certianaly more than the U.S. does, and i am not talking about Kingdoms... They used to have a lot less, at one point there was a Cornwall and a York, and an Essex there isn't really now... Cornwall is now at least 2 different states, and York is like six and essex at least 2. I could have sworn i responded to this forum once but it's not here And yes if you were to ask me what continent a country is in i could tell you actually... but i have a strong interest in Geography. Really the idea of not knowing or knowing the states in your country or another persons has to do with the arrogance of a national identity. it's really not that important unless the state is trying to suceed from the country... I couldn't identify Tribal groups/area in Pre-Roman Britian... I know intimately where Idaho is, especially since i used to live there I may add if you were to give me a map of Europe or the U.S. I probably could fill it out completely and even make comments on them

don't you know Texicans don't use condoms unless they're small .... Texas is still bigger than my state

yes people still use it, and why is because it's fairly new...(ie i've only started hearing the phrase in the last 5 to 10 years) it's not like Ginky, or cool beans or something that's been around since at least the 70's

http://finance.yahoo.com/news/wendy-s-kills-its-popular-pretzel-bun%E2%80%94for-brioche-211606471.html The horror! the horror! no more pretzel burgers noes!

like a dream of a dream of a seer's dream.... why do i get the feeling Brian's family know more about Adam and Jacob than they let on... or suspect more than they let on.... on a side note, Poor Brian lusting after Adam and finding that he's taken by Jacob... wasn't sure if i was going to ask if Brian was Gay or bi in the last two chapters but it pretty much says it without having to that he's intensly interested In Adam... almost like Marcus the ideot wonder is.... I might add I was kind of shocked to find out the Bartender boy was strait in the first chapter... *shrugs* it happens, in real life, i suppose... priceless how Jacob thought he was hitting on him... he's far too protective of Adam for one... jealiously guarding him like a dragon to it's horde...

oh Wow! However I really have a hard time picturing Jacob as dieing especially since he was such an intergal part of this story even before we were introduced to Adam... Although it is possible, and I can see many possible alternate happenings if Jacob did die.

oh wow Madame Rooste surely has something roosting in unseemly places... half of what she did was nothing more than Spiteful... i am afraid of that last statement "Alone" makes me afraid to find out happens because Jacob is "alone" yes I am reading this, and finally found reason to comment. good story.

to this, where is he going to go on from there... be a performance artist... .... a performance hooker something else... as to you being built that way JC Maybe we should ask your boyfriend

to my understanding it is both a culture and a sexuality, however they don't nessarilly equate to each other. And those words are the simplest answer one needs.

Well, when i was young we used to get a live tree... I don't remember much the whens... When i lived with my grandmother during highschool she'd have me putting up decorations the weekend after Thanksgiving and taking it down the weekend after christmas... I may add this was a major project, as her whole house was a christmas wonderland of blinking lights and garland... Myself I put it up the weekend after Halloween, and take it down sometime in January... (the season is JUST too short ) I used to like christmas a lot more until my dad died christmas morning... Also had more room...