Michael9344
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Okay. You've got to tell us what Michael's problem is. And I love the length. Easier to read and sweeter. I don't know why. Maybe that's how the story was meant to be read. But I imagine reading this kind of story in a stretched version could be ...... Looking forward to the next one:)
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Welcome, everyone!
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Hmmmm... Okay... I'm just gonna say it. It's good. It's good for a first chapter. Proper introduction of characters, interesting "hero" and all. I like the way you told the story. And I could taste the...rare style of the non-British or American authors. There were a few mistakes, but it's good. Looking forward to the next chapter:)
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The Twelve Days of Christmas
Michael9344 commented on Mchoule's story chapter in The Twelve Days of Christmas
Okay, I love this chapter. It made me smile, and smile. I greatly enjoy the simplicity you employ in your story, and Gary is adoring!. Can't wait for the next chapter:). Thanks for writing this:) -
If Wishes Could Come True
Michael9344 commented on Mchoule's story chapter in If Wishes Could Come True
Okay...short and crisp. But I'm kinda lost. I think it has something to do with the time leaping. I'm going to read the chapter again so I can get a hang of it. Anyway, I still think this is a potential good story. It has all these...interesting stuff:). You're going to explain about the little girl, right? -
Interesting first chapter. Really intriguing. Can't wait to find out what's going to happen...
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I wouldn't say much, since everybody else has said everything. This looks like a good story. I'm hoping you're starting out cold and the story will get progressively hotter...
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The name nearly had me thrown off, but it really is a great story. I love the plot. And your writing. It wasn't amatuer-like. Interesting, captivating and electrifying. Short and crisp. I hope there'll be more chapters...? P.S. I think you missed some spelling mistakes. Something an author would usually miss... she asked with tremolo in her voice
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What do you do when you're feeling depressed, or stressed?
Michael9344 replied to WatchPatRun's topic in The Lounge
Music. Great Music. And then, sleep. I listen to music a lot. Whenever I get stressed out, I play some powerful, soulful stuff. That usually works. If I'm really really stressed, I could watch a movie and then put myself to sleep. -
Mine is not broken, it's non existent. I've been wrong countless times that I'm now sure I don't a gaydar....
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Happy Birthday! Enjoy:)
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I have no idea what the title of the story is. I haven't read it yet. If this is found, I wanna check it out, too!
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Fishy!!!
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*swallows huge ball of bile* Happy Birthday, Saz:)...
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Ha. Short fun! Enjoyed reading this! Great:).
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Interesting. The first vampire story I'm reading from the anthology and in a long while... Was thoroughly entertaining:).
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I didn't get it at first. I had to read it twice to understand it, and I still don't get some of it! It was real fun to read, anyway:).
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Lost At Sea - Spring 2013 Anthology - A Night To Remember
Michael9344 commented on comicfan's story chapter in Lost At Sea - Spring 2013 Anthology - A Night To Remember
Touchy story! Liked it. The length had me bothered, but it worked out fine... Thanks for sharing, Wayne... -
Great story. I especially liked how you didn't tell us everything. You left somethings up to imagination and deduction:). By the way, I thought the story would be kinda boring... But it was!
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I Can’t Even Remember
Michael9344 commented on Dolores Esteban's story chapter in I Can’t Even Remember
Really interesting poem. Really good one. -
Funny! Haha!
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"I have never stopped to consider how lucky we are be able to walk, breath, blink without thinking about it. Automatic reflexes to our inner program to live. Reactions of our limbs to our desires to move from one place to another. Actions I’d taken for granted, movements I’d never stopped to think about or reflect on." This sentence jumped out at me. It...well, it kinda touched me and reminded me of something I already know. Of little we sometimes, appreciate life. Good story, Rob:-).
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At the End of the Rainbow
Michael9344 commented on Bill W's story chapter in At the End of the Rainbow
Interesting! It was an exciting story, Bill. Good work. -
Beautiful. It isn't exciting or interesting for me. It was just beautiful.
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Congratlations to all the winners. Really congratulations.
