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Michael9344

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  1. Maybe it's cos I'm reading it from a hand device, but I can't see the link or photo...
  2. Then she'd turn him around and smack his backside.
  3. Michael9344

    Chapter 1

    A different take on things. A More personal story I enjoyed reading.
  4. Michael9344

    Chapter 1

    Great tragic story. Really enjoyed the Michael Critchon effect:)
  5. Michael9344

    Chapter 1

    Okay... This was otherworldly, but that didn't make it any less interesting. I enjoyed the descriptive at the begining of the story and I think the ending particularly tasty.
  6. Michael9344

    Earthdrown

    This is very sweet, touching, short story. It was just the appropriate length and I kinda liked how you switched back and forth between the past and the future. I just thought you'd have told us more about Greg and how he got to where he is.
  7. Michael9344

    Breathless

    I like. I was bothered about the length but eventually, I enjoyed reading it.
  8. Um... I was loving the story, up until the accident. It sort of put this invisible damp that has nothing to do wit the quality of your story but more with the emotions it arose. I really Michael's (why did he have to be me?!) guilt and kinda wished it was a dream. But you expertly put an excellent ending to it, letting Vance find love and happiness in the end...
  9. Happy 30! I know you've heard it repeatedly for twenty-nine years but it doesn't get old:). Happy Birthday!!!
  10. seriously?!
  11. No, I don't. It's weird cos we believe in the afterlife and how our dead loved ones fight our battles in the underworld, but I've never done this. I've (imaginarily) seen my dead uncle but that's the most of it. I just tend to leave them alone... P.S It's called Apostrophe (in literature), I think.
  12. Jar Of Hearts by Christina Perri
  13. No. Those things put together point towards GAY.
  14. This has trouble written on its forehead. No matter how look at it's this scenario is scary. Developing a romantic relationship with your friend is...dangerous cos when it goes fatal, you lose a lot. The answer to your questions is within your reach, you just have to find them.
  15. Animal by Neon Trees
  16. Michael9344

    Chapter 1

    LOVE it. Really do:)
  17. I was just about to put this up...(you can't imagine what I wanted to say..,) Seems like Carl beat me to it. Well, Happy Birthday, Mr. Clay:)
  18. Michael9344

    Chapter 5

    Leave it to you to give us a little hunky action and leave us begging for more! Now I'm really interested in why the pack has to leave in such a hurry. Next Wednesday could be a long time coming...
  19. To risk asking a very dangerous question, what kind of dumper is that?
  20. :-O Happy Belated Birthday!
  21. Been a Red Cross member since 2004. Have saved a few lives, too few... And I know the things in a first aid any and what they're for...
  22. .Lol. I've posted from the loo...like twice. It's not that it was overly important. The conversation was just so interesting and I wanted to go. And I'm going to stop here:)...
  23. Happy Birthday, Andy:)
  24. Michael9344

    Chapter 4

    Hmmm... That was kinda fast....
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