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Everything posted by drsawzall
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Humm...With the difference in age, I can't see this going anywhere past friends.... ‘That’s exactly what I did.’ Justin gleamed from satisfaction with himself. ‘We returned home and when we reached File Quay, I suggested we’d have a beer at my place. That was okay with him. He just left his backpack upstairs and accompanied me home. That way he got to see my place. It was very nice and after one beer he got up.’ ‘He’s just as curious about you as you’re about him. He only doesn’t want to show it and gladly leaves it to you to take the initiative.’ ‘That’s how somebody with knowledge of human nature speaks.’
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Of course, Theo Pencildick survived...only to fail spectacularly when they next meet, hopefully Cassandra is a very large elephantine woman and smothers him by sitting on his face... I believe Ryder can be cured by an injection of Danny's special sauce....
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I can't help but to think back to the beginning of the story, when Nick gave a friendly wave to, as we find out, some snotty upperclassmen...I wonder, based on the way they acted, if Jack had a run-in with someone like them....
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Eve hopefully will discover that karma is a bitch... and Uncle Charlie is a godsend!!!!
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A story that reminds us of the power of a smile....
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A very powerful story, thank you for sharing!
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Retribution, or Another Mistake?
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Retribution, or Another Mistake?
Channeling my inner @weinerdog...whoopie... pies ya troglodytes... -
Alan's only doing research...
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Well...that's a significant development.... and groan... Aaven nodded and let out a slow breath, shifting Cricket onto his hand. “Well, buddy,” he said, “looks like you’ve been promoted from emotional support bat to science experiment sidekick. You’re batting a thousand.” Aaven beamed. “Not bad for a wingman.”
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Drsawzall prescribes the @kbois treatment plan until all chapters have been released... I'm curious tho, where does the age 'regression' stop, we see how it affects adults, what about teens. preteens, and babies.... And on the other hand, it would seem, short of full-fledged biological/nuclear warfare the rulling classes are doomed.... So many paradoxes!!! To the gummy jar!!!!
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Marc is fighting a superior ship, with technological advances no one knows about, kinda like bringing a gatling gun to a water pistol fight and it is 100% unfair... Now, like a couple of others, buried in the sensor data of the 15 minutes prior will be clues Captain's Keith and Hunter will find. I for one look forward to the possibility of surprising Marc....
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Louis (+ freedmen rights and politics)
drsawzall commented on Celian's story chapter in Louis (+ freedmen rights and politics)
Hope springs eternal… The Internationalists are the smallest party and difficult to categorize. They are primarily in favor of openness to new ideas and to the traditions of other countries. They want new people to come here to live, and they don't want foreign men to be treated like potential criminals.” Ma paused briefly. “And yes, they are also in favor of abolishing slavery, because slavery in our society is based on religious grounds, but on the other hand, there is the separation of temple and state- it's called laicism- written in the laws.” -
Chapter 4 The Game is UP
drsawzall commented on Tomkin Watts's story chapter in Chapter 4 The Game is UP
Nice to see the good pastor will have a special place in hell…. -
Very tender and so sweet!
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Chapter 1: An Unscheduled Arrival
drsawzall commented on astroguy's story chapter in Chapter 1: An Unscheduled Arrival
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I like boxers and boxer briefs for serious outside activity, hiking, and yard chores like the three cords of wood cut and split for next winter... It was tidy FTL whities till the end of High School, commando for a while till I discovered farts can have lumps, and quickly into boxers so the boys can breathe.... On another note, as a premium member, I appreciate the site being ad-free, per your comment about the following.... We do have our Premium members that help out immensely I'm one myself Just in order to keep the site free, we do need other revenue streams. That is where we signed up with Google AdSense. When you have a ad pop up now and then, yes it is probably a PITA (pain in the ass), but you are keeping GA free by tolerating them. I'm a tad confused, which is a normal SOP these days. Will premium members be seeing ads? If so, I would rather see a minor increase in membership costs than ads... The weather here is about to get hot, very hot and stinky...gotta find some boxers that can pass for dress shorts.....
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Between Shadows and Light
drsawzall commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Between Shadows and Light
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Yet he has talents in fixing things that allows the ship to operate and communicate, skills I would consider valuable. I have to believe there must be some sort of legitimate transportation fleet that could use his skills...
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That a parent could willingly sell/commit/or give a child into slavery is nothing short of despicable...
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This chapter is a duplicate of Ch 47.
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S2 E5: Why is the door locked?
drsawzall commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in S2 E5: Why is the door locked?
To Dylan, Troy is simply a hole to use, and Troy needs to take some vitamin backbone... -
Amen brother...
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Between Shadows and Light
drsawzall commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Between Shadows and Light
I had to check this out early this AM, looking for Red Herrings....so far, the coast seems to be clear...for now... There's a lot to unpack here; most of our early questions have been illuminated and or answered!!! Two things stand out for the moment, well, possibly three... What was the reason for the deception regarding the living arrangements, and where did Josh come from, for that matter, his "parents"? Josh has/had an instinctive reaction to the FBI and agents...is it possible the two who were in the hospital were rogue agents??? Knowing now the car has been 'collected' and what was found processed, how long before they go back to the scene of the accident to search the area? One of the two jumokes was injured pretty badly in the scene in the hospital, likely needing medical attention. Might there be a record somewhere? What came of the crime scene investigation in the hospital corridor, DNA, fingerprints, and video? Loving this and feel free to...- 41 comments
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Who's inexperienced???? Hours passed. Days passed. Jeisa kept only the barest track of time. Tablets were fixed. Intercoms crackled with new life. And Jeisa’s sleep-deprived mind pondered his situation. He was leaving the ship. That was nothing new; he had taken dozens of future bonded to Athalaea. But this time, Jeisa would not return. And he could not tell anyone his plans. What were his plans? He had barely ten thousand credits to his name — that would be enough for a hotel room for… fuck, probably a year or two. Food would be no problem either. But eventually that money would dry up. How would he support Leo? It wasn’t like he could get a job; Jeisa had no experience. At fifty years old, no experience was highly suspect.
