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Wednesday, April 23, 2025 (III)
drsawzall commented on Celian's story chapter in Wednesday, April 23, 2025 (III)
Humm... Nathan: MB is corrupt, being blackmailed, and scared. Check Benjamin Block, but it’s probably an alias. Nathan: Before you ask, he suspects the guy of kidnapping Kate as leverage. -
But then…the bed broke
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Well, better found on the bedroom floor than the back of the Volvo.... But organization.... order... neatness... :: weeps for colour coded goodness :: I don't have a problem... I swear. (Hides drawer of shame)
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Chapter 46 - Coffee
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 46 - Coffee
I'm still not fully buying Xylda and her story, Twani is giving too much information away to a stranger... For all we know, one of the 'powerful' families may be working with the King and Queen... -
Razi Dazzle broke a code among high-class escorts by confronting Micah, very unprofessional, and Tad should never have confronted Killian... Will both Micah and Razi Dazzle come out of the Men's room together, or will it only be one of them? More to the point, it would seem there may be more to this, such as unfinished business, nefarious or otherwise. One has to hope Jake is not involved....
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Drawers...another word for underpants, and in this case, they wouldn't be unorganized but somewhere on the floor!!!
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S2 E6: "You’re Not Going Anywhere"
drsawzall commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in S2 E6: "You’re Not Going Anywhere"
I need to refresh my earlier comment to you. The core job of any author is to attract and gain readers. And you, my friend, have done so. I'm not disparaging your work; I'm reacting to the fact that you've been able to engage me and other readers to comment with our thoughts and feelings as it comes to some of the denizens inhabiting this story. You are engaging your readers, and that for an author is priceless!!! -
Loved this chapter, not the abuse of the Volvo tho!!!
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Rory & Slav’s end of term
drsawzall commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Rory & Slav’s end of term
Looking forward to what is next and returning to visit with old friends! -
The dreaded B word...according to a friend, it is almost as bad when the GF drags one through furniture stores...
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So...what is Captain Handsome up to??? The only reason AHOLE is bothering with the investigation is because Captain Handsome himself wants all mindbenders under his personal control.
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Looks to be very interesting reading!!
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She's preggers with a slave's child???
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Well...ya gotta admit, it's a lot to fit in with his busy schedule....
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Soap (TV series) - Wikipedia
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Where will the rest of this semester go??? Will Cal be able to fit everything in...with his busy schedule? Get your minds out of the gutter, boys!!!
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Ah....the old smell of 'bleach'...one of the reasons I learned to sleep, ahem...after personal exercises, with my bedroom window open, that and discovering very early how to do my own laundry... Actually...I'm reminded of the old TV sitcom Soap...
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This is their last chance...
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I still don't trust the newcomer Xylda...
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Well, something is going on with Mistress Carolyn. Is it financial difficulties, medical issues, or psychological??? And Frank...and Sawyer...and Tom...Poor Henry, having to see all of this... How about Miss Brittany and Mistress Carolyn tumbling down a flight of stairs together??? Is Miss Brittany carrying some ner-do-well's child????
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Five and a half years into retirement, and I'm walking four miles a day in the morning, starting between 5:30 and 6 AM. Our power company has been 'forced' into maintenance along the powerlines along our streets and has left me a couple of seasons of wood for my wood stove. A couple of hours a day with the chainsaw and the log splitter help me in trimming my waistline as well! Let's not forget the stacking of the wood! Our spring was unbelievably wet, and then zippo here in Central Mass. We could use some soon!! Thanks as always for the update!
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What to do.... “Would you like another chance to capture moments with Harry?”
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Chapter 44 - Three
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 44 - Three
It all seems too convenient, Xylda has Twani musing on about going to Falland, killing the King and Queen. To me, it is a clever way to get Bix back and the capture of The Ghost.... Can you say...mission accomplished??? -
This is all Noah's fault, and Nick needs to flush him out of his system... Should be an interesting weekend to say the least, and bring on the visit from Grandma!
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S2 E11: Careful, Dylan…
drsawzall commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in S2 E11: Careful, Dylan…
Dylan is like a candle, he'll burn out by the time he hits his late 20's, and way past trading on his looks... I'm sorry, but Troy is a vacuous airhead...destined for a career in the back office somewhere unimportant. Poor Elliot, he deserves so much better....
