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Again, another fantastic tale proving time waits for no one….
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Ryder’s “outing” one would think he would have a sensitive approach to Owen’s complicated situation. I also realize that ripping the “bandaid” off quickly could go horribly wrong…is it fair for Ryder to treat Owen the same way he was treated?
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And soon!
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Chapter 07a: Chloe and Isaac
drsawzall commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 07a: Chloe and Isaac
And she had an operation and now is a butler…when no one is looking and late at nite.. -
Chapter Seven: The Lion
drsawzall commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter Seven: The Lion
About frigging time Caleb’s rights were stood up for…there’s a shite pie that has slices for all who stood by knowing what was going on… Did I mention that this variety of Shite pie is costly? And expensive? -
The unresolved red herring was who was driving the expensive sedan? Isaac zoomed in. He pushed the magnification past the optical limit, the image breaking down into a mosaic of colored squares. The image was far too pixelated and blurry to identify the driver. The dark interior of the sedan swallowed the details. He hit the escape key, closing the photo. The driver remained a ghost. But the make and model of the dark sedan were clear enough. It was an expensive car. The kind of car an adult drove, not a high school student
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This was an amazing chapter and the title could have been called Breakthrough
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I have to wonder if Taggert’s grandfather left him a substantial piece of the Yoder ranch….
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TBH…A bit icky for me, well written and loved Grams
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Therapy Harry…get the to a therapist…ASAP
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Germany – Munich for the day
drsawzall commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Germany – Munich for the day
Now I am intrigued and inquiring minds want/need to know more! -
If our victim was suspected intoxicated, was or will there be a blood test or look for other signs, like under his fingernails?
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Loving this…
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Another Brick in the Wall
drsawzall commented on Soren Kraft's story chapter in Another Brick in the Wall
So…that’s what happened…looks at self in the mirror… I’m not exactly the poster boy for boulder gyms. I’ve got… layers.” He gestured vaguely at his midsection. “Factory work keeps the arms and back decent, but the rest of me decided to get comfortable.” -
The Risky Business Variation
drsawzall commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in The Risky Business Variation
Great…memo to self…make the appointment with the chiropractor before emulating the dance… -
If careful, not only will the good scripts come but the awards that recognize the work, work that is history in the making .
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Growing up is never easy…Rather Captain Underpants than a toilet bowl swirly
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Germany – Munich for the day
drsawzall commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Germany – Munich for the day
Neil’s education is expanding and life Neil, I love nothing better than traipsing through museums and local historical sites…even better, I will be in Munich in mid-November…. -
The gauntlets have been thrown, o the fun to follow…
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Sad but a truth over eons, think Jim Baker and Tammy…and don’t forget the selling of indulgences either…. It is a lie!" he thundered. "The Church has become a whore, sitting on a throne of gold while the faithful starve! She blesses the swords that cut down the poor! But God sees! God is not fooled! God is sharpening His blade!"
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I was reading The Arms of Krupp, and came across that little nuggett. Their business model was to create an armor that was superior to all others, sell it like hotcakes then sell something that could defeat the armor. This really took off after gunpowder was in widespread use…it was a cycle of “new and improved “ armaments that went on for few centuries…
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Don’t forget Ashot has his own band of feral munchkins, once they are aware, I suspect a lot of ghostly mayhem….
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Wylan is more than capable and don’t forget Bran….Let’s see what the Ladies come up with…
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It’s been what…five days and so much to still discover ….there are however, multitudes of red herrings…. And we have met the killer, if not Larry, how about the gardener?
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Malik and Rhaelce need to stop this childlike behavior and truly sort things out…their current behavior is not helpful…accept what has happened and understand it for what it was….Malik is a bit disappointing ATM….
