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After reading this chapter my Uncle Albert was quoted as saying..."Right On" or something like that before he disappeared in a puff of electrums smoke...just saying...
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Don't know why but I was blubbering after this....and it just got so much better... This time, it was Perry who looked smug. “It’s a fancy word for making people feel bad about themselves.” Ava ran to the sofa and grabbed the big blanket, then went back to Perry and pulled him to the ground. She tried her hardest to wrap the blanket around her and her uncle. “Sad-i-piwer.” Perry’s brows pinched in confusion. “What?” Henry grinned and joined Ava. The twins worked together until they disappeared into the blanket cocoon with Perry. “Sad-a-pier-war,” Ava enunciated from under the blanket. “You can’t weave until yous happy.” “Until I’m happy?”
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Lot of references to wolves, let's see what happens to Connor when the full moon hits... I like the following as well...
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I'm thinking the same thing here...
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Like others I am glad to see the last of Urvan, what isn't surprising is the empathy Jamie has in taking Urvan to his final resting place., this is what separates this group from Lodda and Porvus. Will they have the time needed to fully understand the miracle of magick being born, conversely...magick in others being nullified?? One has to expect at this point that the battle now comes to them. I can't envision that Lodda will stay on the defensive... As noted in a previous chapter's comment,how do Jamie and his fellow travelers ever go back to the world they left? While it is a bit premature, I couldn't help myself...no munchkins were harmed in the creation of this comment...
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Well done, thank you for sharing Grandmere with us.
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Just wondering if Pro nd Oblivion got a little mixed up...
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Has Jamie unwittingly placed the Prince in grave danger????
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Sure it wasn't an Olds Rocket 88?
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I am reminded, given the circumstances of the quest Jamie and the gang find themselves on, of an old image that is somewhat apropo...
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Best use a rope for a belt...just sayin...
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I'm of the opinion that Seeri is a force for the good, being the twice great granddaughter of Wanda Pigfoot. Jamie would have been able to sniff out any deception. Something that was overlooked in all of the commenting, I believe Seeri was in the red tower they are traveling to, and now...getting there has become so much easier. I don't think they will be going right away, they still need time to figure some things out, such as understanding the fundamental nature of magick, learning the ability to turn it off and on, like we would do with a lightswitch...or to remove the ability from those who are deserving of such a fate. Just as importantly, they need a blanket spell to counter the mind control pf Lodda, Porvus and Urvan, and free the mages affected... A trip to the nether is needed pronto!!!
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It is sad and discouraging to see how we as a country have, and continue to treat Native Americans, and if some have their way, our educational system won't teach, or other parts of our history, it for the 'harm' little Johnny or Suzie may feel. https://www.npr.org/2023/07/11/1186771880/west-water-rights-tribes-climate-change-drought https://www.newyorker.com/news/letter-from-the-southwest/how-native-americans-will-shape-the-future-of-water-in-the-west
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Thanks Quokka for another installment!!!
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Ya beat me to it...I was gonna say the playtex led to latex which led to...certain form fitting appendage coverings...
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Let's hope they now have the time to refine the new ideas concerning electrums and magick...it would be wonderful, if a bit anticlimactic, to finally face off against Lodda, Porvus, and Urvan, and the three of them suddenly find themselves without any magickal abilities. Especially if all the underling mages were without their magick... This also has me pondering...friend or foe, I would chose, friend... In the distance were some of the towers, resembling the inn in structure, but many floors higher. Between the towers and their window was a wide, flat stretch of ground covered completely by the gray stone of the ancients. Directly across this span of stone, and slightly to their left, stood an odd-looking....something. Jamie had never seen its like before, and so had no name for it. It somewhat resembled a tree, but one grown by the most demented of gardeners. Its bole was blue, somewhat crooked as it climbed skyward, and looked metallic in nature. The crooked trunk spread at the top like many leafless branches, all of which were as equally crooked as the base that supported them. Such a thing could not be alive. But even as he watched it, it moved. One of the branches twitched, pointed in their direction, and a light briefly glowed at the end of it. Jamie felt a familiar tingle to his senses; but in the same instant, another of the amazing rounded things flashed past their window, heading in the opposite direction from the first one. So sudden was the movement that Jamie and Garvin both took instinctive steps backwards, Geert extending a hand to stay Garvin, while Jamie backed straight into Snave's unmovable form.
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This can't be good... Perhaps I should see a therapist or something? Naw, I’m fine. Like they say, if you think you’re crazy, you’re not. He dried his hands and forgot all about Prometheus and Oblivion. Looking back, Travis marked this as the point at which a small part of him became seduced by Oblivion.
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Part One. Chapter Three.
drsawzall commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Three.
Late to the party again and everyone hit the points I was thinking of. This is possibly one of the best chapters you have graced these pages with, kudos and well done!!!- 110 comments
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The discovery of semtex had profound implications as an offshoot of semtex was...playtex!!!
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Thanks for the latest action packed chapter, looking forward to the next!!
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I believe some small chance was missed, unless Jamie was able to glean some of the info Kundun's library, from the mage himself... Knowing now the the plan is for Porvus , Lodda, and Urvan to wipe out much of the known world and those not like them, could their plan also incorporate interstellar travel and not settle for world domination?? This begs the question, and while it is ever so important for Jamie, to come into his own, let's hope the Council of Mages are there when needed. Once again, I feel this is very important... "No." Jamie turned to Flitch and smiled. The nether being's eyes reflected that smile back at him. "Thank you again, my friend." Flitch somehow looked pleased. "It is a small thing in return for watching your growth, which has increased my own powers here in the aether. What I have learned from you is beyond placing a value upon." From Ch 24 Ah. There you are." Flitch's voice sounded as delighted and interested as it always did in Jamie's presence. "You needn't have dropped what you were doing," Jamie protested. "Not at all. A matter of freezing the process in action. I am creating a nexus to contain my elsmits, so that it travels with me as I move." Jamie raised an eyebrow at that. "Sounds complicated."
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@weinerdog, like this...
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I pity the fish with all those experienced fishermen, and prayers for Arnaud....
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Would the Czech be in here?
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