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Will's grandmother, aunt, and uncle restored my faith. Now talk boys!!
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Jennifer will soon realize the shitstorm she created is an equal opportunity poop fest, only I suspect she may come out a tad dirtier...
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Thank goodness for Brody, and the threat of deportation, they'd better go back in 4 hours and bring someone from the O.P.P.
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It isn't that the cat's out of the bag, it's more like the hockey pucks!!!
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Loved the following... She nodded, "Well that explains that, Cool so you're friends with the Captain of the team, that's like circle jumping and since I'm your best friend I get to jump with you. Hello popularity... I need a new wardrobe..."
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There's a serious need for Will's father and stepmother to undergo an assholectomy...could prove to be fatal tho...fingers crossed...
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During the winter of 2014-15, we had nearly 150 inches of snow in less than 2 months...I killed 3 snowblowers as it seemed it would snow every other day or so...funny how my appreciation for the winter season dimmed considerably... Here's hoping the boys get rescued quickly!
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It wasn't English but history that came so easily to me; my lowest score in four years was a 98...but...I love algebra 1 so much I took it twice.... Here's hoping the coat thief gets caught and the boys are ok...
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As suggested, I'm giving this a gander. And what is it with you and torturing Volvos? The last time he had just relaxed, holding the bat like a cricket bat, and had connected hard enough to send the ball right out of the field, into the coach's Volvo. That had ended his sports career. Though it had bought him the respect of his friends who thought it was cool that at 16 Will could hit a home run and make it look effortless.
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There's some mighty fine reading here. I often wonder just how lucky we all are to have a place to come to where so many talented authors take the time to freely share with us, the product of their efforts!!! And I am deeply humbled to see LaTombola so well received. I owe you all heartfelt thanks!!!
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Powerful chapter...history and the bible present multiple conflicting accounts... Salome - Wikipedia I got a kick out of the following, just a whimsical scene, I mean, all the expense to build the new studio and this... Behind him, John was in motion, a man possessed. He seized the lightweight metal table and pulled it toward the easel, the squeak of its wheels cutting sharply through the stillness.
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Chapter 47 - Bix - 1
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 47 - Bix - 1
This whole friendship between the three girls is happening all too fast, with no thought for discretion. It seems that with every chapter Xylda learns more about Twani and Bix's secrets and the answers to a whole lotta mysteries...I believe it could possibly be a set-up. And plans to somehow 'capture' them and bring them back before the King and Queen.... Hoping I am wrong, but loose lips sink ships and other stuff.... -
Funny how life has a way of interrupting one's plans....
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Wednesday, April 23, 2025 (III)
drsawzall commented on Celian's story chapter in Wednesday, April 23, 2025 (III)
Humm... Nathan: MB is corrupt, being blackmailed, and scared. Check Benjamin Block, but it’s probably an alias. Nathan: Before you ask, he suspects the guy of kidnapping Kate as leverage. -
But then…the bed broke
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Well, better found on the bedroom floor than the back of the Volvo.... But organization.... order... neatness... :: weeps for colour coded goodness :: I don't have a problem... I swear. (Hides drawer of shame)
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Chapter 46 - Coffee
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 46 - Coffee
I'm still not fully buying Xylda and her story, Twani is giving too much information away to a stranger... For all we know, one of the 'powerful' families may be working with the King and Queen... -
Razi Dazzle broke a code among high-class escorts by confronting Micah, very unprofessional, and Tad should never have confronted Killian... Will both Micah and Razi Dazzle come out of the Men's room together, or will it only be one of them? More to the point, it would seem there may be more to this, such as unfinished business, nefarious or otherwise. One has to hope Jake is not involved....
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Drawers...another word for underpants, and in this case, they wouldn't be unorganized but somewhere on the floor!!!
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S2 E6: "You’re Not Going Anywhere"
drsawzall commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in S2 E6: "You’re Not Going Anywhere"
I need to refresh my earlier comment to you. The core job of any author is to attract and gain readers. And you, my friend, have done so. I'm not disparaging your work; I'm reacting to the fact that you've been able to engage me and other readers to comment with our thoughts and feelings as it comes to some of the denizens inhabiting this story. You are engaging your readers, and that for an author is priceless!!! -
Loved this chapter, not the abuse of the Volvo tho!!!
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Rory & Slav’s end of term
drsawzall commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Rory & Slav’s end of term
Looking forward to what is next and returning to visit with old friends! -
The dreaded B word...according to a friend, it is almost as bad when the GF drags one through furniture stores...
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So...what is Captain Handsome up to??? The only reason AHOLE is bothering with the investigation is because Captain Handsome himself wants all mindbenders under his personal control.
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Looks to be very interesting reading!!
