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  1. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    Not for nothing, I would have liked to see Browbeat as he was....tho I think he's simply adorable!!! We have the beginnings of another great mystery...and as noted with a new enemy!!!!! Channeling my inner @weinerdog...sorry dog...I seem to be doing this a lot...must be my age..... "Well, that one guy, Murphy, he complained and whined the whole first part of the movie about the giant bugs coming closer, until that woman, Vicky, turned to him and said, 'Why don't you grow a pair?'. That's what got me thinking maybe I could grow some new stuff!" So that's what it means....new stuff anywhere besides between the legs???
  2. drsawzall

    A New World

    Late to the party, but the comments pretty much covered my thoughts... You had me molesting the box of Kleenex with the first part...the rest, scratching my backside(ass) trying to make sense of it all... Rodney, to me is more than the sum of his parts...While I wouldn't say he was a 'plant' I wouldn't be surprised if he was...why do I feel we'll see him again... The whole trip from the hospital was overboard and overdone, I suspect it was at "Walter's" request...His institutional knowledge tells me he more than a player, someone hiding in the background who knows what levers to push and pull, all the while watching the marionettes dance... The house, it is in a neighborhood where a landscaper passing gas, draws attention...something is off here...screaming don't look behind the curtain al la Wizzard of Oz...the question is...where does a state trooper come up with the funds...if it is old money Daniel would be working for an investment bank...if it is the wife's...he'd be selling real estate in the Hamptons for the father-in-law, or sub-prime mortgage loans...something isn't jibing... Then there is the whole trip to Langley, simply so Walter could meet the mystery boy...something is also off there....there are so many innocuous, less obvious ways to deliver that the situation is ''Black"... Now to the large family gathering for the holiday... What's up with the investigation concerning the second car the night of the accident... What's up with figuring out who the Jumoke's in the hospital were, the connection is undoubtedly with the CIA...who sent them...someone had to get medical attention for stopping a cane with his face, there has to be fingerprints in the stair well...DNA , the latex gloves were taken off before scrambling down the South Stairwell...where is the video from inside and outside the hospital...you can't sell me there isn't any, not in this day and age...and the gun...not sure it was untraceable..... It is clear that the red herrings have successfully spawned....cause all we got is...
  3. Jeeze...thanks...there goes 50K in word pictures.....
  4. Please no Ethel Merman singing.....
  5. Who knew Dan Brown existed in so many realities??? Nor was that the end of their struggles. An ornate puzzle sat in Arlo’s hands. Hundreds of tiny Thassilonian runes lined the case in various configurations, making Arlo’s mind spin just from the jumbled nature. “Oh fuck this DaVinci Code bullcrap….” The amurrun set the case carefully on the ground. Flipping through his transmutation spellbook, he glanced over a spell.
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    The Bond

    Truer words never spoken, I am constantly amazed at how we don't see the forest for the trees...The following gave me pause and truly reminded me of just how important your comments below are... GOP Rep Bashed for ‘Mistake’ Post Celebrating Millions Losing Healthcare
  7. drsawzall

    The Bond

    As much as I would like to, I simply can't surpass @kbois comment, nailing my thoughts exactly!! A master class in wordsmithing!!!!
  8. This chapter was a hoot, could not help thinking of Morrie and is swimsuit lines.... I'm guilty... Scandiwegian sun worshipper I'm gonna pass on the dental flossing whilst engaged in a favorite pastime... 'I like a guy with a furry crack',
  9. I have to agree...tho while it is highly improbable...I'm on team Alarik & Wolf....
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    Chapter 5

    Not sure about this chapter, there's a lot of angst in the air, perhaps an enforced nude weekend would help....Seriously maybe an away game of pocket pool might help... And don't forget, talking to each other is ok.... I have to agree...Noah is a snake...he's been places where the sun don't shine...or was it his place????
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    Chapter 11

    Danged if you do and danged if you don't, there's a interesting learning curve coming....
  12. drsawzall

    Chapter 3

    Oh...No...The dreaded opening the door hanger....
  13. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    It would be nice to know what you are ingesting in case you don't wanna share....
  14. And here I was thinking that not having the collar and getting lost, dazed, drunk, and confused, in front of a policewoman was the most serious trouble Dante could get into.... How long before we find out if a little bundle of joy is coming?????
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    Chapter 6

    Interesting, layers upon layers...and to whom to the Overlords serve? I think we are going to need a scorecard to keep the lineup of evil one's in order.... And Renn, if he were to create or have need to, a resume...it could be looked at as 'occuflation' a nobody with self-exaggerated worth....
  16. There's lasagna and then there's lasagna...
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    Nonna's Blessing

    An ex once convinced me to use cottage cheese in my lasagna, you can figure out for yourself why he's an ex.....
  18. drsawzall

    Chapter 19

    What he said. I can't say it any better....just hoping Jim's rear entrance is a path less traveled....
  19. Not fer nuthin...I spotted some dust bunnies and penguin assassins lurking around the edges of a dream the other day...
  20. That's what quality writing will do for you!!!
  21. Oh great, take my good ideas...now I gotta rethink my submission... remember that tangential link and add a fluffy kitten or a flame-throwing unicorn and start writing! I mean...I've got exactly so many words....ooops....nevermind....
  22. Someone needs more...
  23. It's like he followed Alice down the rabbit hole...
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    Epilogue 1

    Loved this and it needs more!!!
  25. drsawzall

    He Came Over

    “Get more comfortable,” Chris said. “Get on the bed. Lemme see that hole while you gag on your neighbor's cock.” And then the bed broke!!!
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