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I have to ask myself, just where is the Cal that said no to doing porn, adhering to the constricting 'bubble'...having that adult conversation with his father, who has found a potential boyfriend? Is Jordan ever going to be able to trust Cal knowing he potentially slept with a STD/Covid timebomb? After discovering Alan, throwing everything concerning their safety down the toilet, I Cal's reaction and acquiescence to another sexual encounter, deeply. incongruous. You only have yourself to blame for my harsh reaction, that the quality of your writing struck such a nerve is a credit to you.
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Yes...how close is the real Simon???
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Chapter 38 - Sorrow
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 38 - Sorrow
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Stephen's Visit With Dr. Taylor and More Jeff
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Stephen's Visit With Dr. Taylor and More Jeff
A lot of good news/progress in this chapter, theory is working, Jeff seems to have seen the light!! -
Can't disagree with any of the comments, and as noted...much to unpack here... This was an incredibly well-presented chapter!!!
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To me, it seems that after leaving, sepia-tinged memories aren't necessarily the same on return....
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I was gonna say when it rains it pours...
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Adam's about to find out dicks don't have eyes....or brains....or a set of morality...
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Chapter 1: The Old Oak Tree
drsawzall commented on Tomkin Watts's story chapter in Chapter 1: The Old Oak Tree
That 'fervor' is insipid, pedantic, and illustrative of a serious lack of knowledge... -
Prologue: That Smile She Gave Us
drsawzall commented on Tomkin Watts's story chapter in Prologue: That Smile She Gave Us
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Interesting set up with the slow boil, I suspect things are about to get a bit hectic...
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Can you ever go home again???
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Is anyone gonna share??? What the actual fuck. Each blade of grass had two bulbous protrusions right at the ground, the shaft extending from them, and then a flare out near the top before reaching a curved point. They were dicks. Each blade of grass looked like a long dick. And the ones I spit out? They were leaking white fluid where my mouth had cut them. Did someone slip me something?
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Act III - You'll Never Walk Alone
drsawzall commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Act III - You'll Never Walk Alone
I can't wait till Ray turns the Bitches back on themselves, he has the ability as we've seen with his future MIL.... -
Cal is an ass, WTF was he thinking having sex with Alan??? Of all the stupid things he could have done, this is the worst!!! Let's face it, Alan is shameless and could have had a leading role in the TV series by the same name... Stupid Cal...he certainly is a stupid idiot... So much for the "discussion"...I simply cannot believe that Cal folded like a cheap house of cards... I can't for a moment even begin to think how Jordan would react if he found out Cal has no frigging backbone.... Color me done with Cal...what a frigging dolt....
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This brings back some wonderful memories of my past and the slightly older boy who made learning so much fun....
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Humm Vince crouched and picked from the ground what appeared to be a piece of incense. It was still smoking. A short sniff convinced Danny’s bestie that it was at least half as bad as Jack made it out to be. Funny thing, he himself couldn’t smell it at all. Or maybe he just wasn’t bothered by it.
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Dark blood magic and possibly an ancient evil wizard walks the ground again...
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Chapter 37 - The Island
drsawzall commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 37 - The Island
How many of the thirteen will they find??? “Yes,” Othri said to Toque in a relieved voice, “and I’m sorry, I’ve already forgotten your name, but she’s right!” he called out to the islanders. “The Humans are actively hunting down whoever of us remain. You asked how we found you; it’s because of me.” He turned his orange eyes to Toque. “I can feel you, and you’re not the only Urcai who can do magic. You’re the second one we’ve found, and there are thirteen others out there who we are trying to find before the Humans do.” -
S2 E3: Take Your Time With Me
drsawzall commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in S2 E3: Take Your Time With Me
Time for Dylan to use his return ticket, Troy isn't a possession.... -
At the beginning of this chapter, I was wondering if we could have some of what he was smoking...As Dorothy said, we ain't in Kansas any more... What could possibly happen now?
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It would be, sadly, poetic justice....
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Friends' Reactions, and Gavin's Visit
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Friends' Reactions, and Gavin's Visit
Low skill well paying jobs? Can I get what you’re smoking? Better yet, share it with the morons in charge. Inmate to Entrepreneur: Transforming Lives Through Business After Incarceration - FatFIRE -
Is it too much to hope that their funds were securely hidden in the cart???
