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  1. drsawzall

    Chapter 15

    The comments above covered most of my thoughts very well. Like others, I don't think anyone should let their guard down. I'm not sure just how far this crew should go in surveying the outlying areas. The further they are from their base, the more trouble they could get into. I am sure the smoke from the fire at the lumberyard will attract others, and some of those may not be zombies, but those with ill intent. Those who simply take what they want/need by any means necessary... Simply a fantastic chapter, and Buck's conversations with Shannon were so well descripted!
  2. drsawzall

    Chapter 2

    Nothing remains a secret in a small town...news travels faster than the internet at times...
  3. drsawzall

    Chapter 44

    Phew....did you save your bacon as an author with the following at the very end of the chapter..... I looked across at Jordan’s expectant expression. I took a very deep breath. “The truth is I’ve known since about sixth grade that I prefer boys to girls.” Oh, my God. It’s out there and can never be taken back. For a couple of seconds, Jordan stared at me blankly. Then, finally, a smile slowly formed on his mouth, eventually growing into a big grin. “Gee, Cal, I was hoping that was the case.” So, big sigh of relief. Jordan didn't throw the table
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    Chapter 46

    I'd be very leery of signing all of my rights to the designs away, and accepting a position on The Board of Directors and settling for profit sharing....What would stop the other members of the Board from deciding to terminate your contract 6 months or a year down the road...leaving you with bupkis...and more than likely, a non-compete clause in your termination....
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    Chapter 27

    Should be quite the showdown, or should I say, throwdown!!! It was quite the wedding!!
  6. drsawzall

    Chapter 9 S3

    Sometimes, when committing to a recurring deception, it can be the little things that can, and will trip you up...here's hoping Clint finds a boyfriend soon!!!
  7. drsawzall

    Loss

    There's a price to be paid, let's see how it is extracted...Glad to see your muse is back...
  8. Enjoyed this very much! When I was working the office needed to send me to the NYC office. Myself and the Director of IT flew down and on the taxi ride back from our sojourn to the office, we were in one of the tunnels. Coming in the opposite direction was a box truck in our lane after he had bounced off the the tunnel wall on his side. We narrowly missed being hit, and in the traffic jam coming of of the tunnel to the airport, two taxi's in front of us had a minor fender bender, trying to squeeze each other out of the lane. From that point on, whenever I had to go to the NYC or DC office, it was by Amtrak Acela, a ride I thoroughly enjoyed, as I was able to book first class!!!
  9. Was this filmed in your neighborhood???
  10. drsawzall

    Chapter 5

    Thank you for taking the time to read and comment, it is deeply appreciated!
  11. drsawzall

    Chapter 1

    P'town has much to offer considering the surrounding areas...it can be a very magical place, even more so in the offseason...And it sounds like Maverick is all set to take off!!!
  12. Escape was never going to be easy, and now with Nuji shocked, will her spells work??
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    Confession IV

    Somehow, I think Tobias is desiring to see the wider world, might he end up on the road with the Bard???
  14. I get the feeling there will be some bumps in the chapters ahead....
  15. Somehow, I think David's night will be anything but quiet...
  16. I think the following was spot on and very incisive... “Be yourself, if some things are a bit off colour, then don’t worry, and I’ll soon let you know if it goes too far. It took a long time for me to convince Vince that he didn’t need to bridle every time someone mentioned prison or criminals.” During this latter Vince had returned and sat next to Peter. Vince simply gave a wry smile. Peter continued, “It’s out there, let’s not pretend otherwise, but it doesn't define me.”
  17. I'm wondering if at some time in the past, Kellen f'uped with his magical abilities and subconsciously has burried his magical abilities... With a noise sounding more like a coming from a horror movie, he took a deep breath, threw his head back. His eyes were half open, which made it even creepier. And then he slumped down and sobbed even more. “Kellen,” I whispered gently and pulled him into my arms, ”it's all right, do you hear me?” Trembling, he snuggled up to me. “Are you okay?” “I'm okay.” Slowly, I caressed his hair. “You're okay. We're safe.” A little aimlessly, his hand slid over my body and he sniffled. “Promise me...” he mumbled, strangely powerless, ”promise me you're okay, Dust.” So he knew exactly who he had in front of him. I hate to admit it, but Kellen is growing on me slightly. He can do pancakes and scrambled eggs; can he do home fries? Then there's the case of the cursed backside, while I personally believe curses are just old wives' tales, some of my friends look askance at me when I tell 'em fluctuance is a normal bodily function....
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    Prologue

    Maverick is a man on a mission....
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    It Is Enough

    We Have BINGO folks...BINGO and light finally shines on Marblehead... “I’m not fooling around,” Ryder said, his back still turned. “For me, this is more than I’ve ever experienced with anyone else. It’s as if I’m destined to be with you.” I think Cassandra is divining future portents from a septic tank overflow...
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    Chapter 1

    Thank you for this, you took a very difficult and sensitive topic and handled it masterfully!!
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    Chapter 9

    Should I say this chapter was puntastic..... Emerson’s gaze lingered on the bat. “That’s the question. Fruit bats are tropical. Central America, Southeast Asia, South Pacific. No known native populations in North America at all.” “Maybe someone’s pet got loose and it's trying to find some fruit,” Isaac suggested. Grithen didn’t miss a beat. “It found the whole damn produce section.” Isaac lost it. Lennix sighed. Aaven scowled. "Making jokes right off the bat is my job."
  22. drsawzall

    Invisible

    This has taken an interesting turn...
  23. Could not agree more with this story review. A fantastic read that will entertain you from start to finish!@!
  24. drsawzall

    Chapter 2

    So very true!!!
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