Jammi

I don't even know what to say except i love this story. everything is unfolding very nicely. i am completely buckled in and ready for the ride its fantastic love play q and jacob and Anthony's story was very touching and i hope mayhaps he does get his allessandro that would be nice. whatever is in store i have no doubt t will be great

wow just when i think i understand where this is going you throw another curveball. great storytelling here that's for sure i am completely engrossed. This chapter answered a lot of questions but posed many more. I am quite intrigued and can't wait to see what happens next

Note to self lol don't read intense chapters before bedtime especially when they end like that *laughs* i loved this. this chapter was so just wow and i enjoyed every minute. I must share Mark's sentiments i love Q. and that being said the ending almost brought me to tears omg. so my question is did jacob save q's life before (ala the phone booth). because he certainly just may have saved Q's life now. There is so much going on here and my mind is buzzing with questions and i think i am just as confused in someways as Jacob which is great. i love fantasy sci fi stories with romance wrapped in there. this story completely has me hooked. can't wait to see what happens next

Nice setup here though i too agree with Cia's assessment. I like the set up here, poor James can't wait to see how he copes with this and can't wait to see where the story goes from here

wow what a ride that was. i'm confused now lol you must post more to help unconfuse me! or perhaps i am not as confused as it seems if i am following this right. what an exciting ride. I have a feeling there is purpose behind Q's behavior here after all he is who he is and jacob is a pledge there is a lot at stake if anyone were to think something more then big and little was up with them. much at stake. this whole chapter was bizarre and thrilling all at once and very intense. and the end whoa whats with this mystery guy? was the he he mentioned Q...not that i expect you to answer that mind you but wow so many questions. mike and jacob are going to come to serious blows at some point i just have this feeling. thanks for the thrilling story you have my mind twisted in knots with all this keep it coming please

Wow i am enjoying this so much and you end it there ! well the mark of a good story is knowing how to keep the readers coming back. i took so long with the last chapter cause i didn't want it to end. and i was always intrigued by Q and Jacob is my fave pledge and the two of them together *sigh* i can't wait to see what happens from here and what happened at the house. an incident uh oh. next chapter please!

okay i didn't know what to expect when i started this. how intriguing i can't wait to see where this goes very interesting start for sure i

welcome newbies. hope you enjoy your time here i know i am

still loving this so much. i must say i have been waiting for this second chapter it didn't disappoint i really like Spencer. its interesting to most he seems untouchable and godlike but Seth here has the inside track already and seth gets to learn that spencer just wants to be like everyone else sometimes. who doesn't feel that way? and i really like wesley too coaxing Seth out to admit what he already knew. he's a great friend. i am looking forward to the next chapter i am sure it will be worth waiting for. can't wait to see what else is afoot

this was a great beginning to what i am sure will be a great story. I really like the concept and the idea. Scott seems like the right amount of full of himself yet he has a right to be lol. and Chase, i really like him already. and then there is Kaleb. great foundation chapter letting us meet the characters and get a brief look into who they are. can't wait to see where this goes

I love court room drama so this is great. i found myself completely taken in by what was going on in the courtroom . knew what the defense was trying to do and loved how martin outsmarted the guy and the judge milton is great. this is like an episode of law and order can't wait to see the rest good job andy. i laughed when mr colmar said his son was innocent the defense is sharp though but not very bright. hopefully martin and daniel can stay one step ahead

This was an incredible story from beginning to end. it was very intense and i was immediately drawn into the world you created. I felt like i was right there with Rick as he tried to figure out this man who had captured his attention. You could feel Ben's anxiety and as the story started to unravel it became clear that these two needed each other. It wasn't one sided, they needed each other in different ways. I love How steadfast Rick was from the door. Even learning all he knew about Ben, and knowing that he was perceived as a basketcase didn't stop Rick from wanting to help him and falling in love. you captured this so beautifully i know i won't soon forget rick and ben

you had me at the title, and then the premise kept me hooked and i must say i really loved this first chapter. i have to agree with the other reviewer the way you introduced the characters is great giving us a backdrop and letting us see personalities and perceptions its lovely and I am excited to see how this story unfolds. I was just as intrigued as Seth to learn just who Spencer Heedway was and Logan is very interesting as well. I even like Wes and his unruly red hair. likable characters from the door i can tell this is going to be good

great story. lots of ups and downs, twists and turns. i was a bit indifferent about the ending but all in all it was great. I think Jason is my favorite part of the pairing i loved how his character evolved through all this. Peter was a good help to him and a support up until the accident. Glad Jase got what he wanted it in the end and that Peter didn't give up on him. and vice versa. all the characters felt so real it was a great read

this isn't the end is it? say it ain't so. helen escaped up oh craig with someone way older yikes obviously those two love each other oh dear there isn't a resolution yet. michael's death was definitely heartbreaking. i always enjoyed that john's parents were supportive and craig's dad too i like him. most of the characters are really nice and you create this story so vividly i can almost see it before my mind's eye. i've enjoyed watching this unfold. is there more

wow that chapter sent me through a whirlwind of emotions. i'm almost sad that i am at the last part because it means this wonderful story is going to come to an end. That helene really is a piece of work and Eddie is just as bad it seems. I'm glad John made friends and was able to tell them about his life back at the old school. its good that he reconnected with aaron and wow so they got Craig to come to the party and surprised him for his birthday ? awesome story off to read the last part i'm really enjoying this

Wow. I really love this. I love the way this story is set up where us the reader is finding out things as John reads the book and he has the same questions the reader should be having. it's very well thought out and really good.helene sounds like a piece of work, does she get hers in the end ?" her and her cousin both need to fry that's just horrible what they did to john and all because he accidentally dropped meatballs when he tripped over her bag no less wow just wow.I felt bad when i heard what happened to Craig. it was nice to know he didn't deliberately leave john though. and wow the end with charlie he has some nerve punching john after he's the one who did the leaving. very intense story i am really enjoying this i am still curious what happened though i suspect michael is sick or something. going to go read the next part now

I was intrigued by the summary of this story so i wanted to give it a read. just finished chapter 2 and i am still intrigued. I am looking forward to finding out where the people/characters in John's book are now just as much as he is. i'm going to read the next chapter just wanted to let you know i like it so far

Happy birthday. hope its a good day for you

I'm a coffee drinker and i love tea. Also love my occasional coke. there was a time when i would drink more than one a day. I've managed to wean myself off though and only drink soda occasionally. but i love my cup of coffee in the morning and my tea. i also love chocolate but don't eat it as much as i used to

thanks for all the welcomes. i hope so too. i am usually very wary of message boards but i like the feel of this one so far. can't wait to start posting and reading more great stories

I Love that song too it's one of my favorites. I am also glad i found this thread. I have a lot of favorite lyrics, those that just stick out as your favorite parts of the song. "So I own not a notion i escape and ape content. I don't own emotion I rent." What You Own from the musical RENT-lyrics by Jonathan larson When you say you love me by Josh Groban Like the sound of silence calling, I hear your voice and suddenly I'm falling, lost in a dream. Like the echoes of our souls are meeting, You say those words and my heart stops beating. I wonder what it means. What could it be that comes over me? At times I can't move. At times I can hardly breathe. When you say you love me The world goes still, so still inside and When you say you love me For a moment, there's no one else alive You're the one I've always thought of. I don't know how, but I feel sheltered in your love. You're where I belong. And when you're with me if I close my eyes, There are times I swear I feel like I can fly For a moment in time. [ From: http://www.elyrics.net/read/j/josh-groban-lyrics/when-you-say-you-love-me-lyrics.html] Somewhere between the Heavens and Earth , And frozen in time, Oh when you say those words. When you say you love me The world goes still, so still inside and When you say you love me For a moment, there's no one else alive [bridge:] And this journey that we're on. How far we've come and I celebrate every moment. And when you say you love me, That's all you have to say. I'll always feel this way. When you say you love me The world goes still, so still inside and When you say you love me In that moment,I know why I'm alive When you say you love me. When you say you love me. Do you know how I love you? To Make you Feel my Love lyrics by bob dylan When the rain Is blowing in your face And the whole world Is on your case I could offer you A warm embrace To make you feel my love When the evening shadows And the stars appear And there is no one there To dry your tears I could hold you For a million years To make you feel my love [ Lyrics from: http://www.lyricsmode.com/lyrics/a/adele/make_you_feel_my_love.html ] I know you Haven't made Your mind up yet But I would never Do you wrong I've known it From the moment That we met No doubt in my mind Where you belong I'd go hungry I'd go black and blue I'd go crawling Down the avenue No, there's nothing That I wouldn't do To make you feel my love The storms are raging On the rolling sea And on the highway of regret Though winds of change Are blowing wild and free You ain't seen nothing Like me yet I could make you happy Make your dreams come true Nothing that I wouldn't do Go to the ends Of the Earth for you To make you feel my love i'll have to think of more

thanks for the welcome. i will definitely take you up on the offer for help. i've checked out the site a little it seems easy to navigate so i am optimistic. it should be a lot of fun

this sounds like a good book i think i will give it a try. I read a book a few years back called Leave Myself Behind by Bart Yates that i highly recommend. it. It's the story of Noah York coming of age and dealing with a lot including the loss of a parent and his sexuality. here is a review i wrote it doesn't do it justice though Whoever compared this book to Catcher in the Rye was right on the money. Bart Yate's Noah York, is witty, insightful, opinionated and wonderfully sarcastic. His narrative is never dull and the story unfolds with ease. I liked Noah immediately, and loved J.D just as much when he came on the scene. Both boys will pull at your heart strings with this riveting tale of coming of age in a world that won't accept you for who you are. Noah's grief over his father was poignant, it showed how hard it really is to lose someone you love and to have your life so drastically changed at the drop of the hat. I reccommend this book to anyone who likes a good story. Noah is definitely right up there with Holden Caufiield as a literary character not to be forgotten

Hi i'm still fairly new to the forum. joined in January, and forgot about it for a minute but i have found the site again and am looking forward to becoming active. i have stories i would like to share...so i hope i can get the hang of this <div><br></div><div>jammi</div>