Jammi

Great chapter. we learned a few things in it. 1. Tepin has it bad for his consort 2. he has a brother Dekki who apparently needs out of an abusive relationship (by the way i think the idea you shared with me yesterday is a good one lol do it) 3. tepin is very protective of said brother. 4. for reasons he doesn't understand Taz is drawn to Tepin even though he doesn't want to be (love that btw) he wants so badly to dislike the guy but he's drawn to him i love how that is playing out. he's not all hunky dory this is what is he's upset about the drastic shift as he shoudl be, but still curious about everything. 5. this is the third of fourth time Magic has been used hehe by Tep! so i am waiting to find out about this aspect of tepn and taz's people. 6. Tep is good with kids and Taz loves that Devlin is a cutie! and finally 7. Taz and Tep are soulmates *sigh* <3 lol love this story if you couldn't tell

I love chapters that lead to more questions even as we got some answers. Poor Tepin this has to be frustrating for him. He had to come to get his consort only to learn he doesn't know everything he should know. and poor Taz. talk about world turned upside down then spun around enough to make you dizzy. His anger at his parents was understandable, though I'm glad he realizes they didn't mean to deceive him they just really did what they thought was best. I'm curious about the horses comment that Stephen went with. Taz saw something off there, and then Bethany ends the conversation hmmmm more then meets the eye there i say. So it was Taz's father who proposed the marriage of their kingdoms in exchange for Charlie being imprisoned on neper. such an intriguing story i'm greatly enjoying it.

awwww David and Christian's night out very nicely done chica from beginning to end. What i think is really great is that Chris was determined to do something nice for David, and he wanted to be there for him because he was proud of him, and then we find out he didn't even like coming to these dinners hehe. And Christian's jealous nature coming out, that was well played. That's the beauty of it...Chris may not remember completely the past six years he spent married to this man, but he's still the same guy who did fall for David so it's nice to see those sides of him naturally come out so to speak. The concert was an awesome surprise, and i love the small intimate moments, it Chris wasn't certain how David felt before he's gotta know after this night and i bet that's still a little overwhelming for him. so no sexytimes but it will happen when it is meant to Brava kim another great chapter. can't wait to see what you're cooking up next

I knew i would like this Cyn i'm excited for this story lol can't believe i never read it before today but i'm going to rectify that this morning. this first chapter was the perfect hook. you meet Taz, get a sense of who he is and a gander at his relationship with the best friend, and then boom the world turns upside down. Just enough to warrant a reading of chapter two I didn't want to move on without giving you a review. Now i must read chapter two to see what happens next. Tepin sounds gorgeous bty

Well Sarah unsurprisingly reacted the way i expected. figured she'd be the opposite of Michelle but goodness i didn't expect her to be that crazy about it oy. she makes sami brady from days of our lives seem tame in comparison. In anycase I'm glad Bill was there for all four boys and gave them the support they needed. I'm feeling wary of this place the boys want to go so i am going to keep my eyes open for that. and i did catch the song titles they make me go hmmmm. glad the boys are happy and in love despite what they are about to face.

hehe i feel like i just ran a marathon nice long chapter packed with events and info. how sweet they are one now, can't wait to see whats in store for kyle and Jacob. I also like Kyle's relationship with his mother glad he's so close to her. she gave him a condom *laughs* that made me giggle. Didn't see anything that would make me angry though.... i like that matthew and nicholas seem to be alright as well, i will be looking to see more of that as the story progresses. I haven't quite figured out if Matthew secretly lusts for his brother, or he is just that innocent and loves his brother that much. either way those scenes were intense, and i'm glad Jacob had the sense to know that it shouldn't happen or happen again. i wonder though if they will stick to that belief. guess time will tell. Ii like the dynamic there. can't wait to see where things go from here

jacob and kyle and nicholas and Matthew can't wait to see where this goes Andrew. I'm liking this a lot just so you know. The dreams were done well, i figured somehow they were the same dream or close but its cool how you worked that.. Kyle seems so much happier when he's with Jacob its like he feels complete and vice versa. wow what happened in his past, i'm really curious about that. his mom seems really angry at his father...can't wait to learn more.

wow lots happening in Chapter 2. Male bonding always nice. it was definitely cool seeing that Matthew isn't just the bratty little brother. I liked when they both simultaneously told kyle he couldn't leave, as if they realized something was off. you're really good at mounting the tension and the suspense here Andrew. I'm intrigued by the end too and what you imply. can't wait to see what more is in store for these three boys. btw the descript of the drawling was amazing

skittish jacob is cute nice first chapter Andrew. I think you completely captured the mind of the nervous fourteen year old with his first crush. I will be honest, at first i wondered if the chapter was overcrowded with description, but as i read further i realized that was purposeful and effective good job. can't wait to read chapter 2 and see how the afternoon pans out for Jacob and Kyle. by the way loved some of the metaphors you used hot knife through butter hee.

Sending good thoughts your way. get better soon brian

I'm going to be pulling out my hair waiting for next monday! you don't play when you do a cliff hanger do you KC. Amanda has lost her mind. not sure what's more disturbing, the fact that she stole the gun from her father with the intent to use it, or the fact that Ethan is so incapable of forming his own thoughts and is so easily manipulated that he would want to bodily harm someone because of jealousy.; On the flipside loved Gibby thinking about Tanner and the small little moments between them in class and such. And Poor Tanner! i hope somehow gibby finds him and helps save his life *nods* yes that would be nice. oy anyway great chapter can't wait to see what happens next

This chapter made me smile. Watching Christian out with his best friend and the "little monsters" or "Devils" lol Taggart's love for those children is very apparent despite the names he chooses to use hehe. A favorite Line; "Let’s go find your dad a suit before I eat you.” Vice versa you can tell the kids adore him too and don't really pay his little comments any mind lol gotta love the dynamic. On the Flipside Christian got hit with a lot of info didn't he ? Good thing he has Tag to help talk him through. Loved Tag being annoyed at the waiter who was flirting with him too lol This was a perfect build up to the date. Christian and David both looking gorgeous and ready for a night out. The little monsters safe with their godfathers lol . Ethan holding the pizza slice that was almost as big as him is too cute. Tag swiping Jimmy's pizza even cuter! looking forward to the date. great chapter chica

Oy Ethan, stupid is as stupid does.. Amanda is a piece of work. but then we knew that already lol. My favorite part of the chapter was Gibby and Tanner at the pool. Nice scene seeing them away from prying eyes and the rest of Tanner's "friends" i use that term lightly since it would seem they use him more then offer friendship. I especially liked that he was looking at Gibby and just saw Gibby, even though you know he had to notice the scars, he wasn't purposely looking for them or trying to see them. his focus was Gibby and that was nice. Great chapter, it made me chuckle, and btw love Jonathan too

aannnddd I'm caught up. such beautiful description at the end there. Did our Lucca just fall in love with Sam's voice? certainly seems so. great chapter. Getm in the next right? oy this will all come to a head soon won't it? I'll be awaiting the next chapter :-)

and the plot thickens. I'm glad i had twelve chapters to read. great story hope updates will become frequent yes? though i do understand how that pesky thing called life gets in the way. I'm glad Lucca came to see Sam. Shall i guess what Sam will play at open mic?? love Addie's part in all this too. she's right. Germ should make matt listen oy.

I reached my liking quota on your story! That should make you feel good ha! I kid :-) This chapter was great all the way up to Matt showing up. I'm glad Lucca wants to get over Matt he seems genuine about that. He has serious feelings for Sam and vice versa. Oh dear my poor Germ. good stuff here I'm sad that I'm almost caught up

complications are complications. Sam kissed Lucca....I think I am team Sam thank you very much lol. I want happy for Germ too hmmm complications...

ooooh i see how it is. you like big messes hehe this is my kind of conflict; all twisty and curvy lol. Oh Lucca if only you realized the tangle you are weaving into. Still love Germ by the way. so will Sam see Lucca while he's there?

Andy's thought are along the line of what my mind was conjuring. nice tangled web being woven here. Glad i was correct about addie's intentions. can't wait to see what happens next.

well this story definitely keeps you guessing Germ is upset and hurt...don't like that! time to start piecing your puzzle together hmmm... this should be fun. love that Lucca is as confused as i am and yet at the same time part of the complexity.

It's Germ! He's still my favorite though i can't explain why lol. I like Lucca he's still a mystery but a good one. I want to know more about him and his brother as well. And Matt, hmmm they haven't spoken since the prior week? great job keeping the mystery going.

nice. clever revealing just enough info to keep the reader guessing and reading as the case may be. things are starting to come together nicely here. I'm enjoying learning more abot Sam and can't wait for more Germ. and Addie is she mayhaps attempting to set Sam up with Lucca?

nice chapter. first let me say i love that the story is set in PA lol i live in Philly made me smile to see downtown philly mentioned. anyway back to the characters, was Jeremy the friend Matt went to go see? Just curious if that is the connection there So i guess Lucca has made a mess of things at the moment. there is so much pain being conveyed here , i like the tone of this. i can easily believe that Lucca doesn't have a cell phone, some famileis are modest and old fashioned as such it works here. the simplicity and complexity of this story is really nice.

I missed Lucca but that's okay, i love meeting new characters the beginning of stories is always fun you get to meet all the players and watch the story unfold. In anycase I like Sam his story already has me wanting to no more and how he factors in to things. and Jeremy, or Germ as he is called by Sam, i like him a lot from the minute he was introduced. I hope we get to see more of him too. can't wait to read more

im intrigued already. What is Lucca's story? can't wait to learn more about him and Matt. great start