sojourn
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Tar is a contration for T.R.julie never said, T.R. is the love of David's life. I am glad it entertains you.
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Such a cynic, tsk, tsk. T.R. was his own bait... maybe. Stay in the saddle pardner the terrain gets rougher as T.R.'s tale moves ahead. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
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'52 panhead, the beginning is one of my favorites. I am indeed flattered. I like the fact that here, at GA, it is easy to edit. I also like the feedback. Thanks
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Only time will reveal the truth about Jed and Bill for that matter.
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Thanks. I am glad you are enjoying it.
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Somehow Friday seemed farther away than tomorrow. When we got back to the clinic David started inviting people and I headed out to do grocery shopping. I had told David I would pick up some chips and dip kind of stuff. He relented only after I reminded him I was going grocery shopping anyway. I was surprised at the size of the supermarket. Yeah, it was one of those we all shop at but somehow I figured it would be smaller for a town this size. At odd times over the last couple of days I had ad
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Chapter 3 What Lies Within Us
sojourn commented on Dan Umbero's story chapter in Chapter 3 What Lies Within Us
Even in a time and place too far to imagine gay's are used for their convenient skills and talents. No doubt when Garin enters the vacuum he will have Mallory for company, writefasterpostsooner. more please -
When sex was new the earth wore brighter colors. Thanks
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Ah, refuge in memories... sometimes a mistake. Thanks
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Ah, but just as baptism covers a multitude of sins so alcohol can flood a canyon of conscience. Thanks I am glad you like it.
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In the words of Slim Pickins in Blazing Saddles, "You use your tongue prettier than a two dollar whore." Glad you are enjoying the story. Thanks
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I think I will collect all your reviews so when anyone asks what it's about, I can show your reviews. Thanks
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Ok, now I have a complaint. This chapter was too short. I like it a lot. It was hard to stop and review instead of hurry to the next chapter.more please
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I figured out what kept me interested... the internal dialogue is fantastic. I like this guy a lot.Good story. more please
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In spite of the formulaic nerdy gay guy and the beauty queen start you have pulled it together nicely. I like it and intend to read more. Thanks.
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When you read something you really pay attention. I am impressed. Thanks
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Wow! you make it sound so much like some hollywood production... I'm impressed. thanks
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I liked most of what I read. I am not convinced this is a love story as much as it may be about intimacy. I would like to see it progress and learn if this one night stand was to reconnect their friendship or the beginning of something much more. more please
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I have used similar lines... usually with food. Thanks
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Thanks. I am glad it entertains you.
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I feel like all this is leading up to multiple lynchings or the loss of a long time lover. Sorry to see Chartley go... then with Millienium, et al... It was stupid of me to consider simple solutions.
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The next morning I awoke to my alarm. I hit the bathroom, got dressed for a run, put the coffee on and headed out. I was almost surprised that I had to pay attention to my route. In a couple of days I had already come to think of this place as home. I began to consider all that had happened since I first arrived. This had been the most eventful few days since my first week of college life. I had made friends with what appeared to be really good people. I eagerly looked forward to going to wor
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Obviously my caracters have different voices I think the last thing you said, "characters have to come to life and live inthe world they inhabit" is the real telling. May be all this is really comes down to "are your stories viable by any definition. Mine are, to me. Thanks
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Wow, Thank you. I have been advised to shorten those two very long ones. I have that on my list. I can't wait to see how you feel about the ending.
