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  1. Jwolf

    The Date

    Thanks for the review! I was really glad to your hear thoughts on the chapter. I completely understand your position on Corbin, and how you get mixed emotions. I think that's what makes him such a complex character, and in the next few chapters, he'll have to deal with his more manipulative side head on like he hasn't before. Thanks again! More to come.
  2. Jwolf

    Bullet Bites

    I must have missed this somewhere along the way! There are some plans to have Corbin and Amanda interact, probably as we round out to towards the next semester. Their lives are too intertwined to avoid it. Hope that enough of an answer for you without giving anything away
  3. Jwolf

    The Date

    Hey! Thanks for the review. I think Corbin has grown up a lot in the story as we've seen him progress. I'm hoping his reaction to Pete's latest move indicates. That growth. No spoilers, but we'll see what happens. More to come!
  4. Jwolf

    The Date

    Thanks for the review! Interesting juxtaposition between mike and Pete, which will continue to be a theme of the story as it has been before. Although it's a similar situation a we've seen, look for Corbin's reaction to be anything but. I'm glad you have destroy dom on your to-do list for him! Love that.
  5. Hey folks! The next chapter is up and ready! I hope you enjoy and will leave a comment/review, and come back here for the discussion. I'll be back with the next installment in about two weeks. Thanks again for your continued support. Enjoy!
  6. Jwolf

    The Date

    I felt the pulse build up inside of me like a volcano ready to erupt. I did everything in my power to stop it, but by then, I had become powerless. “Oh fuck,” I sighed. It was like I was floating above myself. I was torn between wanting the relief of letting myself drain into Lee’s mouth, and wanting the feeling of his mouth around my impossibly hard cock to continue on forever. But I knew that I couldn’t make it last forever, so I sat up, broug
  7. The next chapter of the story has been sent off for editing and will be posted soon. I'm excited for the next phase of the story, and I really do hope that those who have become attached to the characters will continue to enjoy it. I just want to thank everyone for their continued support of this story and for giving me the continued inspiration to write. An in-progress story is very difficult to keep up with, especially with life's other obligations, surprises, and nuances, and the fact that folks are still willing to stick around and see what happens to Corbin even months after I've posted, is encouraging and humbling. It means a great to deal to me and every author on this site. I can't wait to roll out the next season of the story and look forward to reading everyone's responses and thoughts as we continue to follow the lives of these characters.
  8. Thanks Timothy for your amazing words. The support for this story had been overwhelming and it's what keeps me writing. I can't wait to start posting updates soon. This story, being so close to my life, has been an experience I'll never forget. Thanks again!
  9. Hey folks! Just wanted to stop in for a quick update I've started working on new chapters of the story, so please expect those soon! Thanks again for everyone's support of this story and me as a writer. Can't wait!
  10. Jwolf

    Bullet Bites

    Alvin! I'm glad you found the website and story okay. 2 days to finish all 27 chapters is quite the accomplishment! I'm so glad that you enjoyed it. I think with the filler in each chapter, it's magnified when you read multiple chapters at once. Taken one chapter every couple weeks, the way it's released here, I'm of the mind that the filler serves the story. But I agree, if I were to bundle this up in one publication, there are a lot of scenes that could get cut. The majority of the story is autobiographical with only some minor changes that don't affect the story and the outcome. I try to read different stories here and there, but honestly when I'm not working or watching Real Housewives or Scandal, I'm writing this story. Thanks again! And another chapter should be up... hopefully, before the Thanksgiving holiday
  11. Jwolf

    Bullet Bites

    Don't be tardy for the party... whoawhoa!! Thanks for the review! Loved it as usual. The next chapter begins with a scene with Lee and Corbin that I think will answer your questions about that dynamic... So far we've only seen Corbin have sex with someone he has some sort of feelings for (even Lee the first couple times, there was something intriguing there...) There's a shift in Corbin that is much more... well, I'll let you read it for yourself very soon. Thanks again!
  12. I'm really excited to explore this next phase of the story. I think Corbin is at his best when he's working on something or had something up his sleeve. Let's just see how far he takes it with lee and the freshmen.
  13. Jwolf

    Bullet Bites

    Thanks for the review pfox! I'm glad there's another person in the Pete camp. I think you're right, he is a complicated individual which might be what's splitting people on him. As for lee, well I won't spoil what's coming... So nevermind thanks again!
  14. Jwolf

    Bullet Bites

    I think you're spot on that Corbin sees in Pete someone he can't necessarily manipulate. I'd say that's the same thing with Mike as well. With those two, Corbin isn't the master planner he is used to being. I'm glad you continue to enjoy the depiction of the relationships so far. One caveat: who said Mike is on the back burner for the entire six months...?
  15. Jwolf

    Bullet Bites

    So glad to read a review from you! Thanks so much for taking the time to write something up. I always love your takes on the subject. I read the 'toxic' comments as more of Pete influencing Corbin to make questionable decisions: re his revenge plan, dumping mike, the list goes on. If they were perfect for each other, this would be a very short story I love that someone isn't sketched out by the lee/Corbin dynamic. I wonder how you'll feel as it unfolds. Thanks again!
  16. Jwolf

    Bullet Bites

    Love the different reactions to Corbin going to the 'dark side'. Can't wait to hear what you think as his master plan unfolds. You know what they say, the best laid plans of mice and men.
  17. Jwolf

    Bullet Bites

    Reminds of the Britney Spears song thanks for the comment!
  18. Jwolf

    Bullet Bites

    Thank so much for the review! I'm going to think about the word you used, toxic. It's an interesting take on their relationship. As for dom, Corbin might not have had a plan going in, but he definitely has one now. More to come.
  19. I agree that it was a biting thing for Pete to say, which is why it sent Corbin on a tale spin. Rest assured, Corbin does go after some clarification in their next meeting...
  20. Hey folks. The next chapter is out! Again, thanks for your patience, as I know it's been a few weeks between chapters. I hope you love this installment, and I can't wait to read your reviews, thoughts, questions! Get the chapter here. Enjoy!
  21. Jwolf

    Bullet Bites

    “Michael Loggerman, that is not fair,” I said with a strength in my voice that I knew wouldn’t last. “Not fair? What isn’t fair, Corbin?” he spat back at me. “You can’t tell me that you could change your life for me. There is a long way from could to would, last I checked,” I said, my voice railing with a combination of guilt, anger, and sadness. Had I expected this to be easy? Not by a mile. But I hadn’t expected Mike to sit there and tell me that he could have
  22. I'm wrapping up work on this chapter. It's another supersized one! Here's a little nugget to tide you over until I can get it published: There's at LEAST four blatant 'My Best Friend's Wedding' references in this chapter... probably including the title, but who knows. See you soon
  23. Jwolf

    Hall Pass

    Lisa! Loved the review, as usual. Thanks so much for taking the time to send this! I loved your assessment of the Mike/Corbin relationship. They've definitely grown together over the course of this story so far... and it resonates. I'll go ahead and tease that this isn't the last we see of Mike (some other posters were wondering...) Also, you always pick up the nuances of what the characters say to each other. Look for Pete to have some very calculated words moving forward... more so than his 'i know' in bed about Garth... more to come very soon. I just took a break from writing to respond to this
  24. Jwolf

    Somebody Status

    Thanks Timothy It is quite a bit of drinking... but then again, such is college.
  25. Jwolf

    Hall Pass

    Hey. Thanks for the review! Awesome feedback, and very astute. I think you're spot on about Mike being unfair in what he said, and look for him to get called out on it in the next chapter... as for your other predictions, well, we'll just have to wait and see if you're right about any of that. Thanks again! More to come.
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