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Hey Andy. I loved so much about this review! You're right, Corbin doesn't have infinite ammo for his wrath, but look for him to find ways around that... Also, Pete's not his only battle, and we know by now he's good at misdirecting his feelings. Also, I'm enjoying writing this side of Pete. Sometimes I wish I could write more from his perspective, but as I write his reactions, iget to imagine educate day what his perspectives are... Expect some great back and firths from them I'm hoping.
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I'm so glad you could relate. I'm with you, first person, when done decently an illicit some strong emotions and empathy for the author. More coming soon, and thanks for the review!
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Sorry for the roller coaster in this chapter... But glad you enjoyed! I think the implication that Amanda couldn't get the Brit on her own is wha makes it below the belt... And that it's not such a wild prediction too... But we'll see what happens. More soon
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You're right to expect trouble. Don't forget from a couple chapters ago, though, Amanda is about the only one on campus that knows how to handle Corbin. I'm hoping their next scenes are surprising and dynamic.
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Cole! Thanks for the review. It's an honor to know you're following along. Definitely more to come.
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Chocolate ready whip? Carrie! I need to hear this story. Expect some revelations from Amanda soon as to why she picked her side of the war... Is she a Benedict Arnold? Dunno. Thanks for an entertaining review.
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Hell hath no fury... Thanks for the review!
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We'll see how far he takes things. I'm hoping it continues to entertain.
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Thanks, I think...
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Thanks for the review! Yeah, angry Corbin can be scary Corbin. And we have done great fiflpgue with Corbin and Amanda soon that explains why she picked Pete's side... More soon.
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“Mike,” I sighed as I opened the door on Friday evening and let him into my bedroom. I had been anticipating that moment since he’d called me on Thursday, in the middle of my biggest Halloween Hangover to date, and told me he was off duty from Friday until Sunday. Most cadets used what they called Shore Leave to go home and rest up before the hell that was their last six weeks of school. But Mike had other plans, he told me, and with his most wicked voice to date, asked me to ge
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Lisa, Lisa,Lisa! Thanks for another awesome review. I think you, Louis and Timothy are spot on about a couple things. I think corbs intrinsically knows why Pete is mad, but he doesn't feel Pete has the right to be mad. Watch this lay out in their next confrontation. Also, Corbin isn't used to losing, so he takes on Pete's rejection as he would anyone else's... Sort of as a threat. I'm glad mike is winning people over. I can't wait for you to weigh in on what's coming!
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Hey Jaro! Thanks for the review. I hope you enjoy the journey now that you've taken the plunge. I'd love to hear your reactions to the chapters as you catch up. I'm sure with an English perspective you'll have some interesting commentary. Thanks again!
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Thanks so much for the review! I'm not gonna, I'm glad you're hooked! Now you have to wait for the new installments like everyone else The Chu situation is over for now, but don't expect Corbin to stay out of trouble for long. He's sort of drawn to it. And yeah, this triangle with the two boys is getting complicated, but it's oh so fun to write! More soon
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Soon thanks for the comment! Much appreciated.
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I had never considered this event as a way to humanizing Pete! Great take but you're right, this is the first major flaw we've seen come out. The question for him how reacts when Corbin eventually and inevitably retaliates? Hope he's ready!!! Thanks for an awesome review. Loved it! Can't wait to hear your thoughts next week
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I couldn't agree with you more... We're capable of doing the most damage to those we love. But also vice versa, those we love can deinstalled strike the lowest blows. How will Corbin react? More next week! I can't wait. Thanks so much for the review!
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Thanks for the review! I love the positive outlook, even though we can guess what turn Corbin is about to take. Expect some surprises out of him and the other two, though. No teases, but yeah. Thanks again!
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Loved this review! You crack me up week after week! It's always good to check those around you with the threat of a friendly stab, I'd say. We'll see how long it takes, if ever, for our boy to close that barn door...
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Thanks for the review, Mark! Always an honor. Look for Corbin to bounce back in a big way. I'm really thrilled about the side of him that we're about to explore
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Hey! Good to know folks are still rooting for Corbin! He can make mistakes sometimes, but he's out little troubled engine that could right? Thanks so much for the review! More next week.
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Hey Louis! Thanks for your review and your super kind words in the thread! We've come a long way, and your thoughts mean a million to me! Thank you, thank you. More next week!
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Thanks Steve! Glad you enjoyed. I expected some folks to rally around team mike, but not so many! We'll see how things play out next week!
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Hey Tim. What an insight and awesome review! Thanks so much. I think you're spot about these two, and I think their biggest challenge is a misunderstanding of expectations. Corbin wants Pete to make an effort, put in a little fight for him and he never does. Pete wants Corbin to prove he's capable of loyalty which he never does. Expect some more fireworks when these expectations come to ahead.
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I knew this would be a tough chapter, but there is still a lot of story yet to come
