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Thanks Timothy It is quite a bit of drinking... but then again, such is college.
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Hey. Thanks for the review! Awesome feedback, and very astute. I think you're spot on about Mike being unfair in what he said, and look for him to get called out on it in the next chapter... as for your other predictions, well, we'll just have to wait and see if you're right about any of that. Thanks again! More to come.
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We'll definitely hear from Mike again... count on that! It's interesting to see the two different views on Mike in the feedback... some people hate him for what he said, and others find him... cute I love the reactions I'm reading so far... thanks so much for chiming in! Can't wait to see what you think after the next installment.
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Hey Cole! Thanks for the review. I think it's a little more complicated than Corbin just tossing off gay guys, but you might be on to something. Remember towards the beginning of the series when he says he's a magnet for men with barriers... Something of a pattern, I guess. Glad you're enjoying the story and thanks for taking the time to leave a comment!
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Jaro, thanks so much for this review. So thought out, so thorough. Honestly, responses like this is why folks like me keep writing. It's amazing to hear that our characters and our narratives have an effect on people, so thank you so much for taking the time to do that. I'm not going to tease anything with regards to your questions, just know that this story is far from over. Can't wait to see how you feel as more of the story unfolds Thanks again!
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Have you met Corbin? Alone and happy don't go together in his mind... that would make things simpler though, wouldn't it. Thanks for the review!
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I think you've described it perfectly between these three guys. Corbin is definitely stuck, and that's not a place he likes to be... trust me. Thanks so much for the review!
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Thanks for the feedback defiance! These three guys definitely don't make it easy on themselves, or the reader, or on me as the author! More to come...
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Thanks for the review:) Love the reaction.
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I think Mike is definitely stuck between a rock and hard place and Corbin knows that... can't wait to share Corbin's reaction to their 'break up' moving forward. You're 100 percent right that what Corbin does next is pivotal for him and Mike... it has to be, right?
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I think Mike is definitely stuck between a rock and hard place and Corbin knows that... can't wait to share Corbin's reaction to their 'break up' moving forward. Remember... Mike gave Corbin an out, and Corbs is the one that chose not to take it... more to come...
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I love this review. I think you've hit on that there's so many ways this story could progress... I'm interested to see what you think as more of the narrative unfolds. I'm digging the passion you had to this chapter. Wow... thanks for such a strong reaction! More to come
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Growing up in church, I had always heard about the seven deadly sins. I knew what they were, could recite them from memory, both forwards and backwards, and if asked, I could give a brief description of each one, and why it was precisely so dangerous. But I had never felt one. I had never been consumed enough by a single emotion to consider that feeling to be deadly in any way. That is, until the night that I was banging my hand against Dominick’s chest, asking him why he had fu
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Thanks for the review! I'm glad that these two boys are taking you on an emotional journey. That's a huge compliment for an author. Big update coming soon! Stay tuned.
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Thanks so much for the review mamica! Who knew someone so cute was reading this little piece There will definitely be more chapters, and they will definitely come out soon. Thanks again!
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Yeah, it's going to be a tough six months for our boy Corbin... I wonder how he'll cope. I love your reactions to things... always keeps me on my toes. I never would have pegged the trailer park war for being a funny line! Thanks, as usual, for the awesome review-- and not making me wait three weeks for it this time around More to come very soon.
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Hey there, sir. Thanks so much for the chapter review! Greatly appreciated. I totally get what you mean about Corbin, and I think that's what I like about writing him as well. I get to make those choices that humanize him, which is fun, as long as he stay likable in some ways. Can't wait to hear what you think as the story unfolds
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Please don't cry Thanks for the review. There's still a lot of story left to tell. Hope you continue to enjoy!
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Love the dramatics! I should start shooting you the chapters before I release them so that you can come up with a teaser... dun dun dun! Thanks for the review Much appreciated.
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Rosicky, thanks for an awesome review! You know Corbin is going to make Dom pay, defender of the institution or not. He's at his best when he has an enemy. Can't wait to see what you think as the story continues.
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Thanks for the compliment, Charlie. Glad the story continues to entertain. More coming soon!
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Glad you enjoyed the chapter. If there is a way out of lockdown, expect Corbin to find it. We're only scratching the surface of Pete's back story, but his past continues to be unveiled. Thanks again!
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Thanks so much for the review. Glad you enjoyed the chapter. More to come soon:)
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Loved this review! I think you on a couple really strong things. Corb did just realize for the first time what Mike's been saying- he will break his heart one day. Is this the set up for that? We'll see. And we'll see what price Corbin makes Dom pay for his involvement. Thanks for the review and so glad you're hooked on the story! More to come soon.
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Hey Jaro! Thanks for the review. I always look forward to your reactions. Glad it was worth the wait. I love writing Corbin mostly because he is complex character, and I'm glad you can connect with that. I wouldn't say he was trying to manipulate Pete with his admission, but I can totally buy that it could be seen as a calculated move. Expect Corbin to realize that he's overplayed with both Pete and the house.
