There are a few characters in this one and I didn't want to overload with them all at once. Yeah, everyone can relate to that one queen bitch, every school has one. Thanks for reading, Wayne.
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thanks for reading, Wayne. Both Jonathan and Gibby have come through a lot and still have a long way to go. This town is going to challange them, but they're strong.
As another world, it is very similar to Earth. Hope we get to see some difference. So the men are going sterile and that's why they are starting the coupling process at a younger age? They can only have children until age 25? wow, what is the life expectancy of the people? Is their population dwindling rapildly?
Wow, lot of questions but I'm so facinated. Good chappy, look forward to more
Teenage boys not known for thinking with their big heads Jumping to conclusions and doing something erratic and self-destructive... How do any of us make it to adulthood? We will see more of Amanda and Ethan, really soon.
Teasing? No well maybe a little. There will be more Tanner and Gibby too. The countdown has begun . Thnaks for reading!
Nice lead up... now they should skip the fancy-smancy dinner and go home for a kid free night alone I love the playfullness between Taggart/Jimmy and the boys. It's great to have friends that close to each other's family. Great chapter Kim, can't wait for more!
Today has been a difficult day for me. I usually put on my happy smiley face because it makes everyone else feel better. 2 months today…I feel her absence more and more each day. I keep getting this panic, that she needs me, but she doesn’t.
It’s weird, I was forced to leave home so early and struggled with this love/hate relationship with my mom for so many years… that really developed into a love/hate relationship with myself. I know people depend on me, but some days I feel like slipping away. There is a crack in my smile that grows bigger. I’m afraid of people looking too close because they will see the real me.
Awww Your secret is safe with me Marky, I won't tell anyone!
There are a lot of characters in this one that I like and some that I like to hate We have so much more to go. Thanks for reading!
Haha- that's what you get when you wack at the keys with a gnarled femur bone instead of using your flesh rotting fingers!
Thanks, Zombie, I'm glad you are liking it so far. Ooooh good idea for the ending, I might have to borrow some of your ideas
No werevolves in this story. I promise. Ethan's hair was just sticking out from betweeen his fingers from him grabbing his head in frustration. No full moon trickery Thanks for reading
Amanda is trying to do whatever she has to do to keep herself on top, but if she tries to set herself too far up...will she fall and how hard? Ooooh can't wait for that (must look at future chapters so see if that is in there)
Gibby and his dad's relationship is nice but far from perfect. Jonathan is an open-minded guy but his first priority is his kid I know a dad or 2 like that
The kiss again? Too soon people! They just started to notice each other, let's see how this unfolds first Thanks for reading! Love your insight
Too short....great chapter but did I mention too short???? I can't wait to find out who the date is with...do we know him or is it a new character...and did I tell you that it was too short?
Kiss? You thought they were going to Kiss? Wait, the readers want kissing? Hmmmm, might have to glance over up comming chapters to see if there is any of that in there
New chapter Monday! Promise Thanks for reading
We have scratched the tip of Amanda & Ethan, there is so much more to come. **Glance around to see where my hubby is** OMG! I love Tanner too!! He's such an awesome character.
The pool Tanner really is a good guy, he see's Gibby for the person that he is, same with Jonathan. The "Group" well they aren't finished yet...more to come! Thanks for reading!
Amanda is manipulative, she will use everything to her advantage. If I had a dad I would want him to be just like Jonathan, he is so awesome. Just think, we are already 1 day closer to chapter 9 Thanks, Kim, I'm glad you are liking it!
The mood after losing the game was grim. Disappointed fans slowly shuffled out of the stadium to the parking lot. Mt. Jackson continued celebrating their victory as they whistled and cheered, boarding their bus for the return trip back to their school.
Gibby watched the argument on the field from a distance while heading towards the ambulance waiting at the visitor’s end zone. The entire team was angry and shouting, but the Butler twins were physically separating Ethan and Tanner in the cent
I think some pre-battle nookie was needed Jeez, if I'm going to die, I want to have a smile on my face and some spunk in my.... (whew) got side tracked Again with the magic. The fairy can't fight fair but Apple was the better opponent! Happy dance for Apple and Teasel!!!
I love the line: I'm going to plant you under the daisies! Go Teasel Sooo Gizmo has to use magic to be a man? Little fairy needs someone to knock the snot out of him! Again: Go Teasel !!!!!!
Gizmo is such an evil fairy! Using magic against other fairies I was screaming for him to get his hands off Apple and wanted Teasel to show up and beat the crap out of him!!!