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  1. Chris Prieto

    The Experiment

    Chris Prieto commented on Cia's story in Fiction

    Right off the bat, I'm a sucker for sci-fi. Like I'm really into Michio Kaku and space and all those nerdy things. I see potential on the forced relationship of the alien and the human. Many twisted possibilities. And I loved how you ended the chapter. Will they use him as a weapon? And if so, how? I'll keep reading.
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    Haven't read More Than A Crush but I'll give it a shot after this review. A beer along sounds good. I got through the first few chapters of Social Skills last year, and I remember how I liked the vulnerability the character Connor conveyed. The awkwardness he exhibited on his first meetings with Jared was painfully delicious. I was there and I saw it. I cringed and I loved it. Reminded me of myself when I was oh so young. *sigh* Good times.
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    Really enjoyed the piece. I especially liked the bits about the character-driven story and the first person view; they make for more intimate affairs. Two thumbs up!
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    I appreciate how you tried to capture the fourteen year old mind, and how that translated into a more believable character. I also like how Kyle set Jacob afire with just two sentences. Reminds me of a simpler time when a smile was enough to fall in love. God, I miss high school. Keep on writing, podiumdavis.
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    Iron Man

    Chris Prieto commented on Jwolf's story chapter in Iron Man

    I like this story. It’s so very Gossip Girl meets Cruel Intentions, which is a good thing. I am especially enjoying the cheeky dialogue and narration. I’ll be looking out for this one.
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    Running Cia's Brain

    Chris Prieto commented on Cia's story chapter in Running Cia's Brain

    “I have a juicy dream for her tonight though.” and See slapped his hands away from where Uh was gently stroking it. really made me Lol in real life. A fun read, Cia. I am starting your Bonds Unbroken later tonight. It will be my first fantasy read of this site.
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    Dare

    Chris Prieto commented on Sara Alva's story chapter in Dare

    Lighthearted and fun, the story brought me back to my childhood. We used to play truth or dare all the time. Loved the ending. ^^
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    Be Mine

    Chris Prieto commented on K.C.'s story in Poetry

    Charming, Grim, just charming. Makes me want to be in love again X)
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    Dallas better win today. >_< Five posts! >=D
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    Nice pictures! One to go. X)
  11. Chris Prieto
    Lady Gaga's Judas. Can't stop listening to it. Two to go.
  12. Chris Prieto
    Hello, everyone. I like this site a lot. Three posts to go. =P
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